AdultKing : Wow ! I've discovered your game some days ago and I must say that I was more than pleasantly surprised. In fact, I'll say it'sd one of the game I have enjoyed the most on this site !
Not only the bestiality fetish is something really rare in 3D adult games, but most often the ones that bring it often do it lightly with one bonus event or two, and most often these bestiality scenes are vanilla and not really exciting.
First of all, thank you for taking the time to make a great game that follow this fetish to the extreme, without "morals" or "ethics". It's an adult game with non-existing people (and animals), and I think it should be accepted at the same level than the 984567537 incest games that flourish on internet (and I have nothing against that, either...).
I have so much enjoyed the game that I feel I could give you some feedback and, follow them or not, some suggestions maybe.
- First of all, having a plurality of girls is indeed a good thing. But with my experience, I know much too well that every single game that tries to bring too much characters is either never finished, or either rushed on. Too many authors are at one point overwhelmed with the task and botch many of the characters and sub-stories to bring a conclusion to a game that they can't handle anymore.
My point is that it's on the paper a good thing to bring Zoey's and Jessica's friends. But in my opinion, focusing on the family trio (Zoey, Sarah, Jessica) is much more important and should be your priority. What is exciting is too see how the love/lust/fetish for bestiality is progressing with the main characters and how they deal with it, even more when it will be at one point impossible for them to hide their intercourse with Rex from the other members in the house.
However, having some "tandems" can indeed bring some good situations in the story. For example, Rylie pushing Zoey into seducing Rex with a sexy outfit is a really exciting idea and can bring something really precise for this character. Moreover, Zoey could ask her other friend Safa to help her choosing an outfit ; everything here makes sense.
However, Jessica's friend seems to follow the same path as Zoey's friends : a girl/woman who has the hots for a dog. I think that, maybe, you should have thought of something different here (I'll come to the suggestions later, if you don't mind).
Even more, I'm not really digging what is happening with the neighbours and the other dogs. I think it's a bit "bonus". Maybe the "harem" thing with Rex's buddies should be targeted with the already existing girls/women in the game. Once again, bringing too many women will in my opinion take too much of your time when the main trio is much more interesting.
- About the upcoming pregnancy thing.... I am much more than happy with this !!! Once again this is a kink that is too much rare with these games.... and the fact that it's coupled with bestiality (even if it's impossible in the real life) is really exciting and one of the things I'm waiting the most.
However, I fear that you would see pregnancy as the final goal with the games, and once that a girl will be pregnant with Rex's puppies her story will be achieved.
Please : don't do that !
In my opinion, pregnancy should really become a fetish in your story, not a goal. I suspect, of course, that Rex's "power" to breed human females will have something to do with the nurse's experiments. And maybe these "experiments" could be a bit more developed. For example, girls impregnated could give birth to puppies that would grow adult in one day ? Or, because ot human + dog's DNA, is it impossible to imagine that one of the girl will give birth to a "furry" ?
- But the most important thing, in my opinion, is to bring something unique with each girl of the trio (Sarah, Jessica, Zoey).
Here are my suggestions. Feel free to follow them or not, of course. It's your game. But if they appeal to you or give you some ideas to use in the future, then it's not a bad thing right ?
The main problem I see with your game is that each of the girls want to mate with Rex because... because they lust for him, in fact. But that's all. So, each one of the girls should be hot for Rex for different purposes. Here is what I think :
1) Sarah : Currently, she is the girl who had gone the furthest with Rex. Much more than that, when she's talking she shows how much she's IN LOVE with her dog and consider him as her boyfriend. Taking that into consideration, I think her goal should be to really become
Rex's wife, to really love him and live with him as if he was her "husband", to consider herself and Rex as a real couple. We can imagine, once that everyone in the house will know about their lust for Rex, that Zoey and Jessica will agree to let Sarah marry Rex and have "children" with him. We can imagine a more or less official wedding at the house, everyone cheering as Sarah if being bred by Rex...
2) Zoey : Maybe Zoey should at one point discover that what drives her the most to have sex with Rex is because she loves to see herself as a pet. I'm thinking about the event where she is sharing some time with Rex in the doghouse in the basement. And the fact that she wants to tease Rex with an outfit. What if the outfit she will choose is somewhat "feral" ? She could go for a catgirl suit with fake cat-ears, or go for a more "wolfy-doggy" furry suit if Rex has something against the cats.
Anyway, maybe at one point the nurse should bring on the table that she is developing a drug that could definitly change her body and irrevocably makes her a furry (dog or cat) living in the house as an animal, Jessica and Sarah agreeing to treat her as their new pet... to her great delight ! Of course, as a new pet, she will devot herself to be Rex's female breeding mate, and relish in being pregnant with his puppies.
(Maybe bringing fantasy like this with the furry thing sounds too much, I'm well aware of that. But it's just a suggestion if you're planning to bring fantastic in the story, just like the impossible pregnancy between a dog and a woman).
3) Jessica : I must say that I don't have many ideas for her. The only thing I could see is that she will feel the need to have sex with Rex, but what could make her really hot could be to bring more and more girls/women for Rex to impregnate.
In the current came (0.2 version), Jessica greets her freind Monica at home and sees with some delight that she seems to feel lust toward Rex.
Her goal, then, should be to convince Monica to have sex with Rex (and herself) and maybe start to do bestiality porn movies. But what would drive her the most would be to convince, persuade, or coax hesitant or reluctent girls into having sex (willingly !) with a dog and definitly dwell into bestiality. I think it would be hot to see an uptight conservative woman, or a devot christian nun finally succumbing to their lust for a dog ! Learning about Rex's power to make female human pregnant, then Jessica's goal would be to build a real harem with pregnant girls, many and many puppies, and to convert more and more girls to the bestiality fetish. She would become the queen of this harem, with only Rex as her master.
Well, I hope that this feedback has been useful to you, and that maybe some of my suggestions are equally appealing ?
If you don't mind, I have some questions :
- Do you plan to add the pregnancy fetish soon enough, or will we have to wait a long time (possibly at the end of the game) ?
- Will there be incest between the three main characters ?
- Will there be other animals with which the characters will have sex ? (cats, horses...)
- Currently, the only problem I see with the main trio is that their bodies are a bit too much similar. Can we expect some changes, at least, in their makeups or the way they will dress themselves ?
- As the girls right now all have big breasts, do you plan to add a somewhat "juvenile" character, I mean someone looking pure and innocent, with tiny breasts ?
- Do you plan to add a somewhat "normal" girl, I mean one who is really reluctant with bestiality, seeing it as gross and twisted... but who will of course become one of Rex's mating females ?
- Do you plan to ass some "fantasy" or fantastic ? (furry, DNA modifications, short time for pregnancies and growth, etc...) ?
- And finally, do you have an ETA for the next update ?
I think that's all. Thank you again, and I hope that I didn't disturb you with this long feedback.
Best regards, and keep up the good work !
