This game needs a lot of work.
You can only have one save... What's that about?
You can't go back in the story like you usually can in Ren'Py games. Which means a mistake requires you to do it all over again and...
You can't skip text. So that takes ages (such as when you realize opening the door to the bathroom twice bugs out the game and the aunt never arrives).
Text can't be immediate, it always has the typing effect.
Hints sure, but finding your way is a pain in the ass. What's the point of the map button on the phone if you can't use it?
I'd also suggest not making a map with three different locations in NYC. NYC is a big ass city, I'm sure there's no need to go all the way to Queens to buy a camera.
You can only have one save... What's that about?
You can't go back in the story like you usually can in Ren'Py games. Which means a mistake requires you to do it all over again and...
You can't skip text. So that takes ages (such as when you realize opening the door to the bathroom twice bugs out the game and the aunt never arrives).
Text can't be immediate, it always has the typing effect.
Hints sure, but finding your way is a pain in the ass. What's the point of the map button on the phone if you can't use it?
I'd also suggest not making a map with three different locations in NYC. NYC is a big ass city, I'm sure there's no need to go all the way to Queens to buy a camera.
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