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Asmodeus_

Creator of Neuvau
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If he doesnt respond by August, Will you be sharing the so for shared Images or Animation that you have already with the Public??
Well these renders are not mine to share, so Suzinak will share if he wants.
 
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Loumax

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You can always just ask him for permission to continue and also to share the assets etc. In the instance he abandons it I mean.

I played Neuvau a while ago and it has nothing on this game. No offense, I'm just being honest. English is fine, graphics work is ok, unique models etc but I could say the same of a number of porno vns. MMC on the other hand, everything comes together in a way that's just... satisfying. I think a big part of why is that almost everything happens in one house between two characters, and the focus is entirely on them. Every land story should be like this, instead of a dozen 'LIs' and a nonsense crime/conspiracy/scifi subplot with good and evil branches.

Correct me if I'm wrong but I think the reason this one turned out the way it did is cus neither of you consciously planned it out. You essentially started augmenting a (very) simple premise that Suzinak probably came up with as an excuse to make some lewds, and just rolled with it. And in my experience that is exactly how good work is done, you start with some faint lines on paper and keep adding stuff as needed/desired along the way. The Well Tempered Clavier started out as practice pieces that Bach wrote for his sons.

Anyway, I wish both of you the very best of luck going forward.
I totally agree with you on MMC.
 

SinCityLocal

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I’ve never read a book(which is someone else’s story) and gotten somewhere in the middle just to put it down and suggest the writer change the story. If you like the story, keep with it. Don’t like it, then move on. Creating premise, character depth or which characters to focus on is the writer’s sole discretion. We, as readers, really only get to dictate the success of said story.

So far as I’m concerned, the story IS a success(to this point). There’s a direction I’d like to see it go, but it’s not up to me. Mostly I’m just saddened by what appears to be a dismal future awaiting it.
 

GandalfTheGrey91

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a moment of thought.
on sober reflection, I have little idea why a mother would humiliate a man (making him a sex slave), namely her own son. after all, a full-fledged man and husband will no longer turn out of a person with a trampled psyche - this guy can only be presented as a "challenge prize" to one of his mother's friends at work.
maybe the mother does not want grandchildren, and she decided to keep her son as a toy and along the way punishing him for something? Has anyone had similar thoughts? after all, this story is also interesting from the point of view of reflecting on the current situation from the point of view of "what then?"

is mother decided to complete her family, her surname. for if no new children appear in the family - the family simply dies leaving nothing and no one behind, except, perhaps, tombstones, which will eventually become abandoned - the family will sink into oblivion.

a family, if it does not give birth to children, disappears from the face of the earth. and adopted children do not count - only their own.

sad minds, isn't it?
OH my God..
 

Jorjor69

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The premise is kinda absurd (for lack of better word), and the story unfolds unrealistically fast. Having said that, the game progresses naturally and made the psychological and sexual tension between the mother and son so hot, it makes me so hard lol. And the fn RENDERS! Shii this game is fire... It's just sad that its fate hangs in the balance tho... :/
 
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DIRTY FILTHY Animal

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It's time for me to depart from this project.

In my mind I had a deadline for August, but a recent talk with Suzinak made it clear to me; there's no point in waiting a few days to announce it.

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As I've shared in a previous post, the quality of the latest renders is not what I expected. And Suzinak shared that he's having difficulty creating the scenes I wrote. Specifically scene 3, for CH4.

To anyone curious, this is a brief outline of the scene with minimal spoilers (not that it matters anymore)

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Our recent talk says to me that he's either lost the will to continue, or he can't see the significance of what I'm writing. Whatever the truth is, there's not point for me to continue.

I will place the game as abandoned, but this doesn't mean that Suzinak won't continue working on this game with a new writer.

I would like to thank you all for your support, the wonderful discussions, the constructive criticism, and your kind words :love:

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To end in a positive note. I'll keep writing and creating games. That's not the end for me.

I'm still working on my own game, Neuvau, and I'm creating a lot of complex storylines. So if femdom is your thing, I'd love your support over there.

Also, as I've shared in a previous post, me and a very talented 3d artist (he'll remain anonymous for the time being), we're working on a new incest game (mom and sis). The script for the first chapter is already under way and the first renders are coming through and are amazing. It'll probably need a few months, but keep following me and I'll certainly create a new thread when it's getting close to release.
You could still do that scene in your other game with the Dean
 

clowns234

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It's time for me to depart from this project.

In my mind I had a deadline for August, but a recent talk with Suzinak made it clear to me; there's no point in waiting a few days to announce it.

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As I've shared in a previous post, the quality of the latest renders is not what I expected. And Suzinak shared that he's having difficulty creating the scenes I wrote. Specifically scene 3, for CH4.

To anyone curious, this is a brief outline of the scene with minimal spoilers (not that it matters anymore)

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

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Our recent talk says to me that he's either lost the will to continue, or he can't see the significance of what I'm writing. Whatever the truth is, there's not point for me to continue.

I will place the game as abandoned, but this doesn't mean that Suzinak won't continue working on this game with a new writer.

I would like to thank you all for your support, the wonderful discussions, the constructive criticism, and your kind words :love:

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To end in a positive note. I'll keep writing and creating games. That's not the end for me.

I'm still working on my own game, Neuvau, and I'm creating a lot of complex storylines. So if femdom is your thing, I'd love your support over there.

Also, as I've shared in a previous post, me and a very talented 3d artist (he'll remain anonymous for the time being), we're working on a new incest game (mom and sis). The script for the first chapter is already under way and the first renders are coming through and are amazing. It'll probably need a few months, but keep following me and I'll certainly create a new thread when it's getting close to release.
Now that you are no longer writing this, what was the story behind the mom? Why did she act the way she did?
 

SinCityLocal

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Then you clearly haven't read many books! People tend to have strong opinions about why books are good or bad. Not only that, they also discuss their politics, historical context, how they relate to the authors' lives and views etc. In the world of academic and non-fiction books there could be hundreds of people simultaneously writing reviews, rebuttals, articles, essays and of course books against or in support of a single book.

Also readers can and do get to dictate what they read, at least indirectly. Not to mention editors, publishers, producers, patrons, activists, lobbies, the state, NGOs, people suing you for defamation etc.
I don't think you even grasp the point of my comment.
Parts of your reply seem like reworded variations of what I already said.
 

Behappy69

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I'm not going to spoil this. Suzinak said he wants to continue somehow (probably with a different writer).
I'd be a shame to spoil it for whatever he plans to do with MMC.
Wow, I am surprised he wants to change the writer as from what I could tell you brought his creations to life I really hope he can do something with the game without you and maybe as good as I really hope or if it's possible better, I doubt it, but I guess we will have to wait and see. That's if anything ever comes from it. I will say I think it's a mistake but that's just my opinion. I am sad to see the team break up but with how things were going I am not surprised. But I also look forward to seeing your story continue with your game Asmodeus. :giggle:
 
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Asmodeus_

Creator of Neuvau
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Apr 5, 2020
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Wow, I am surprised he wants to change the writer as from what I could tell you brought his creations to life I really hope he can do something with the game without you and maybe as good as I really hope or if it's possible better, I doubt it, but I guess we will have to wait and see. That's if anything ever comes from it. I will say I think it's a mistake but that's just my opinion. I am sad to see the team break up but with how things were going I am not surprised. But I also look forward to seeing your story continue with your game Asmodeus. :giggle:
Thank you for your kind words! I really appreciate it! :love:

Well, it's not that Suzinak wanted to change the writer. It's more that the writer (me) got tired of waiting and stalling without any significant progress. The main reason was that I wasn't willing to compromise the quality of my work. :cautious:

I had a big vision with this story, but to make it work all the integral parts needed to be there. If these important story parts weren't included, the whole story would fall apart. The resulting story/game would be sub-par. And I'm here to create something interesting and new. I have the capability to do this, so anything less is not worth my time and effort. :cool:

I'm sure that whatever writer gets onboarded to continue this, it won't be the same with what I had in mind. But that's not necessarily a good or bad thing. It'll be different. Maybe it'll be good different. No-one knows. :giggle:
 
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