VN Ren'Py Abandoned Measuring My Cum [Ch. 4 v4.0c] [Suzinak]

[Kukipett]

I would agree with this if thats how this story actually felt.

Right now we have an overly obsessive mother, who really has no redeeming qualities other than shes hot. She has been completely overly obsessive to her sons life to the point it just feels fake. Like...seriously your going to bring your mother to a doctors appointment for your junk, and then just sit there while she backtalks the doctor the entire time. You spend two chapters with her actually starting to become interesting with the roleplay things and corrupting her son, which I agree is a nice change of pace...but then the 3rd chapter it gets dropped that she probably has some condition that she doesn't remember what shes doing so now its back to the son just taking advantage of his mom who doesn't know what shes doing.

Id say the first two chapters are fine, not amazing because the start of the game makes me want to just punch the mother in the face, but it at least felt like it was going somewhere with her...and the 3rd chapter was kinda trash having to throw in some reason the mother is acting like she is other than she just wants her kids dick.

When i started to play i felt uneasy seeing the complete lack of dialogue between the two as they were perfect strangers, but i think it was exactly the right thing to do to give that feeling that something is really wrong here!
I loved it because it was weird an unusual, it made me wanting to know more.
With a corruption story we perfectly know what will happen and it's boring.

Her we have some strange trip into madness, the mother really seems to have a serious mental issue, the way she jumps on her son looks weird, the way she manipulates him with those role play to ease him in her plan is quite evil !
I guess we have here a real domina who was dormant during years just dreaming of kinky stuff and who suddently, because of what happened to her son, waked up in her active state.
She has found her prey and she will manipulate him to her ways.

 

[PederSilver5]

Mom's seems to be schizophrenic. But they are having fun, the MC should learn to switch roles with her soon though, she would enjoy that too ha ha.

 

[PederSilver5]

I would agree with this if thats how this story actually felt.

Right now we have an overly obsessive mother, who really has no redeeming qualities other than shes hot. She has been completely overly obsessive to her sons life to the point it just feels fake. Like...seriously your going to bring your mother to a doctors appointment for your junk, and then just sit there while she backtalks the doctor the entire time. You spend two chapters with her actually starting to become interesting with the roleplay things and corrupting her son, which I agree is a nice change of pace...but then the 3rd chapter it gets dropped that she probably has some condition that she doesn't remember what shes doing so now its back to the son just taking advantage of his mom who doesn't know what shes doing.

Id say the first two chapters are fine, not amazing because the start of the game makes me want to just punch the mother in the face, but it at least felt like it was going somewhere with her...and the 3rd chapter was kinda trash having to throw in some reason the mother is acting like she is other than she just wants her kids dick.

You obviously need a bit more life experiences to know what is happening. You should ask yourself why the ex-husband left, divorcing the mom, and start analyzing the behaviors. Obsessive compulsive behaviors, split personalities, safe words, trigger words. You have no clue.

 

[micojive]

You obviously need a bit more life experiences to know what is happening. You should ask yourself why the ex-husband left, divorcing the mom, and start analyzing the behaviors. Obsessive compulsive behaviors, split personalities, safe words, trigger words. You have no clue.

Ah yes, my lack of having a schitzophrenic mother who wants to have sex with me is truly what I am missing to understand this deeply complex game. Maybe try talking about the game instead of throwing bullshit insults at people.

 

[Asmodeus_]

What a turning ! The model is awesome the animations are well handled , the scenes and story progress gives that suspens and action knowing that games rarely have that dominant mom character.
I hope you keep this good amount of content every update ,it deserves support !
I would love to see also choices in the future that offers players optional fetishes maybe involve more characters like her friend or the doctor , I'm not into ntr but that could be a choice for many .
I'm sure it will be one of the best games if it keeps the same momentum .

Thank you for your feedback! We really appreciate your kind words!

For this season we’re focusing on the relationship between MC and Marge. This is the main focus.

 

[Asmodeus_]

I've been playing these games for years and very seldom comment but on this one I have to compliment it. It has the perfect mix of femdom and i_____ in it.The renders are great,color is beautiful,lighting is superb,animation is fantistic. The plot and idea of story spectacular. For those who are against any of it well it,s your idea and game/novel they don't have to play it. I started it in last version and started over in this one as you suggested and it has become great. Out of my 200 plus in my archive this one just made the top slot. Just wish I was in a position to support you on it. Keep up the great work on it and I'll be waiting for more when it comes out. just an idea might be nice to add part where she can train him be of use to her friends but like I said before it's your game and idea and it is good.

Thank you for sharing this! It means a lot!

That’s a good idea, but for a different game. It doesn’t fit this storyline.

 

[Asmodeus_]

I've never heard of this game before but I'm glad I discovered it with the rewrite, the story is great and quite intriguing with the split personalities. I hope Soupourou did some research into mental illnesses because it's quite easy to confuse something like Dissociative Identity Disorder and schizophrenia for example and can quickly lead to accusations of psychophobia.
As for the aesthetic part of the game, Marge is beautiful and sexy and that might be one of the best BJ animation I've ever seen.

Thank you for your kind words!

And we do research any possible medical references

 

[Nightless]

Really great game with awesome renders. Marge is really a great character with interesting backstory! Keep up the good work!

 

[txd69420]

found my dream game. thanks so much

 

[La'Zaa]

Nice game.

 

[Drill Sergeant]

Wish i had a landlady like her. I would have 'rented' it 24X7.

 

[DA22]

Ah yes, my lack of having a schitzophrenic mother who wants to have sex with me is truly what I am missing to understand this deeply complex game. Maybe try talking about the game instead of throwing bullshit insults at people.

Seems you luckily have also not been burdened by an overbearing mother coupled with parentification issues from an early youth and have been allowed to develop healthily by your parents and grow into an independent person that is allowed to make your own decisions and mistakes. That is the thing, this mother did not allow him to do that for her own emotional needs that she obviously projected fully on him since at least the divorce, but likely earlier. So yeah his behavior makes sense as does his resentment about it, which he partly feels guilty about as well. His normal is different from yours and not a healthy one.

If there is a victim in this story it is MC first now, even if the Mom might need a good and specialized therapist as well badly for her issues where incest seems to be the least issue she has and we have no clue yet really why she turned out so over controlling and with most to all her emotional needs invested in her son by the time this story plays.

Edit: It also seems not really the intention of devs to go really deep into these motivations or backgrounds per se, but more using them for the story and why things play out as they do or will do. To make the story somewhat believable and give depth to the characters.

 

[Dongus420]

The renders look incredible and I love the Femdom aspect of it, not enough games out there that cater to that.

I also think that although it's exaggerated in this, it is a game after all, you definitely get overbearing controlling mothers like that in the real world. I had a buddy at School who's Mom used to dominate his life and he found it difficult to stand up to her.

 

[Asmodeus_]

When the mother says "That ruined our movie night, I hope you are satisfied." That feels kinda out of place. I mean, a mother caring for her child should not consider a movie night being ruined at all when it comes to her child's health. But maybe it's just me and my perspective. Don't know man, that line just feels off to me.

Being a mother, doesn’t stop you from being a person. Mothers get disappointed, get sad, lose their courage, or get angry. Even though she cares, she’s worried and she’s frustrated that she has to deal with this.

She’s trying to vent her frustration, but she’s directing it (unreasonably) towards the MC.

And that’s the point
To show you (the player) that she’s being unfair and unreasonable. Just like any real person

 

[Asmodeus_]

I hope that the game isnt going too much into real issues tbh.
This is first and foremost an entertaining porn game and not some of those wanna be epic tales like some devs trying to create.
That being said the game could very well be epic .. just not in its tale per se.

Take headmaster for example which is kinda a fun game with nice butt slapping at the start but it has also a whole lot of pseudo science text it throws at you that some inbreeds out there may take as real life altering advice. So i think that game goes a bit too far in it trying to give reason behind its mad story.

Take spaceballs the movie... does it make sense.. not at all .. is it fun and epic... yes it is...

So i for one sure hope that this isnt trying hard to get some real explanation behind all the madness as that would just take way too much space of the vn.
And this is not a wife and mother or that never ending mafia game everybody loves.. this is a fun and hot and steamy fuck marathon as of now and i sure do hope it stays that way.

Yep! That’s exacly the point and the direction we’re taking it. To feel real, but to make it enjoyable and avoid all the “dark” stuff.

I personally play games to escape reality and experience something fun and enjoy my time.

So thank you for sharing this! We really appreciate it!

 

[Joi_fan]

I know this have been said before, but I hope the mom doesn't have mental issues or this going to feel like rape. Hope this dual personality is nothing more than a way to deal with guilt. Regardless, this setting is hot af.

For the dev, I hope you add a $5 tier, because $10 is a bit much for me at the moment and $1 I feel is too low. Think about that.

 

[Draverik]

I know this have been said before, but I hope the mom doesn't have mental issues or this going to feel like rape. Hope this dual personality is nothing more than a way to deal with guilt. Regardless, this setting is hot af.

For the dev, I hope you add a $5 tear, because $10 is a bit much for me at the moment and $1 I feel is too low. Think about that.

Also not a fan of the mental illness route, i'm low-key hoping this gets resolved later on and come out as just a facade, otherwise it's just a weak plot device that numbs the whole taboo of having his mom performing these acts the MC and make it less forbidden which results in being less enjoyable for us.

I'd also like to see more scenes like the one with mom bringing tea to mc's bed, that kind of thing, not just fucking and sucking back-to-back, especially when it's a sort of a weird mish-mash of different characters (personalities) every time.

 

[Asmodeus_]

She is a dominant by default. I agree. There will be those elements because Mother role even in real life will have some dominance over son to protect him from all dangers. It's out of love. As a loyal fan of mom/son fetish, I completely understand that. And She here is a powerful woman in career too. She is independent. But, that doesn't mean we should have "panty gagging" scenes or her slapping his cock. We can protray Mom as a dominant even without that scene. It's just one scene it really upsets me. It's clearly noticeable that those scenes are created in a "fetish" way rather than general dominance of Mom. But otherwise, the general dominance of Mom throughout out the update doesnt upset me much. It's completely understandable by the story elements.

May be MC becoming more confident in future updates, as we seen the teaser of that in "brother's wife" roleplay, can drive people who are not into femdom to try this game in future. That's what I told in my past reply. Whether it comes to femdom or confidence of MC, we cant just judge this game based on a single update. And writers also told almost the same.

I totally agree with your points. You will understand in the next update the purpose of this scene

That’s the most I’ll say to avoid spoiling anything.

 

[Asmodeus_]

I'm not a critic, but this one deserves attention, because it's a waste of a wonderful work with a silly script and the developer's inability to understand the concept of ''game''. You literally just hit enter. I think the developer should try animations or comics. Oh and find a writer for God's sake.

This is a type of game that’s called visual novel. Also known as kinetic novel. This means that the player just follows a linear story.

Oh and about that; Hey! I’m a writer! At least that’s what my signature says!

 

[Asmodeus_]

IMO, I think it's more likely the writers and devs here go a different path rather than straight into Marge having a mental disorder. There's already been hints that the memory loss is fake, so I don't imagine it would be too difficult to explain the personalities all being faked as a way for Marge to both 1) come to grips with what she was doing, and 2) still exercise her controlling, albeit motherly? nature. Something more along those lines, anyway.

Going for a disorder storyline that is also inherently erotic runs the risk of glorifying actual problems that people have as something "sexy", which I don't think the devs would intend to do.

Suzinak, I don't know if the game being abandoned for a brief period would negatively affect this, but you could try submitting it to the featured games thread. They haven't updated it in a long time, so I doubt anything will happen immediately, but it's definitely deserving of additional attention.

I won’t comment on any of the hypotheses about Marge, but thank you for sharing your opinion!

Know that while we aim to create believable characters, we’re not going to focus on “dark” aspects about illness and medical issues.

This should be a fun and enjoyable story.