- Jul 20, 2020
- 360
- 529
I haven't read the entire thread, but here's my quick feedback:
1. Decent, though stereotypical so far, storyline.
2. Renders are solid enough for the type of VN it is (paperdoll interactions).
3. Definitely need a better translator, it's not terrible in comparisons to other VN's I've played, but it still needs help. At least the story is getting through enough.
4. The black screen transitions need to either be minimized, or removed. It's obviously personal preference, but for me it's frustrating, it breaks any immersion that is established during play, and they're not skippable via mouse click.
5. Stemming from the black screen item, the extra screens, just showing a brief glimpse of a wall or room with no story or characters seems wasteful in development/render time for the the author.
Overall, decent start, I'll keep an eye out on future updates.
1. Decent, though stereotypical so far, storyline.
2. Renders are solid enough for the type of VN it is (paperdoll interactions).
3. Definitely need a better translator, it's not terrible in comparisons to other VN's I've played, but it still needs help. At least the story is getting through enough.
4. The black screen transitions need to either be minimized, or removed. It's obviously personal preference, but for me it's frustrating, it breaks any immersion that is established during play, and they're not skippable via mouse click.
5. Stemming from the black screen item, the extra screens, just showing a brief glimpse of a wall or room with no story or characters seems wasteful in development/render time for the the author.
Overall, decent start, I'll keep an eye out on future updates.