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No worries at all about the support man, hope your family member feels better soon, family always comes first and I kinda hope my game comes last. No one should put themselves in any kind of bind to support a game (especially when I am already having so much fun making it ) though as always, if some random billionaire reads this post feel free to pledge a million or so, link in the op.Glad you posted this, I was just going to post the same screenshot. I think there were a few other typos/mistakes too. I'll go back and check tonight if I can.
Nefastus Love your game so far, nice job! This update was short, but was enjoyable as always and had a good amount of sexual content.
I loved the ending. Hilarious, andYou don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
I'm taking care of a sick family member, and I don't have much money to spare after bills are paid each month. Otherwise I would have thrown you some money now via Patreon or whatever. Sorry I can't contribute man, you definitely deserve it.
Ahh, that would be why then. Guess I should be glad I started playing the game about 4 versions ago then.It only happens in a new playthrough with the new version.
Ok Nefastus , ran through the update again. Here are the typos/mistakes I found:
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Seeing that ending again...
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That's actually only 99% true. If you want to have sex with Sarah earlier you have to be threatening and intimidating towards her in the changing room.
Thanks for the list, makes it easy to fix them when they aren't one at a time and buried over 5 pages of posts lol.Ok Nefastus , ran through the update again. Here are the typos/mistakes I found:
Seeing that ending again...
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Refusing sex with the redhead makes less sense.....lol. Just kidding, thanks for pointing that out, I will get it fixed.Nefastus
A couple more mistakes:
1)
a ".....daaaaadddddyyyyy."
d "What?"
a "Nothing."
d "(Shit, clearly she knows what happened...I wonder if she watched us....that's kind of hot. But I will let her pretend nothing happened.)"
This dialog occurs even if I refuse to have sex with the redhead, makes no sense.
2)
j "Fuck [j_name], I came while sucking your dick. That shit has NEVER happened to me before."
I think there should have been [player_name] instead of [j_name].
Ikr, traps should be locked in cages. If they wanna be a girl they should have to use their boipussy instead.Well that was a ride, thank god the actual h scenes are coming in now. I love teasing and build up as long as it doesn't take years to move on (this game seems to have timed it well). The characters and mood seem to make me feel surprisingly good while playing and when I say good I mean you know what and just feel good moments (just a bunch of people caring for each other). Also the scenes where the characters/author inputs acknowledging the art mess ups made me laugh each time
The only thing that kinda threw me off was the trans scene, I was thinking of more of a dude ramming a trap/trans chicky in the ass not them wanking eachother off. The mc just goes and starts touching the chicks dick like it was nothing, well anyways worst comes to worst and it stays like this I will just revert back and avoid it. Props to author not forcing anything even it takes more work I appreciate it.
Last thing, the daughters in this are done perfectly I wouldn't change a thing. Well all the characters really just those two are my favorites by far.
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What kind of degenerate would reject a redhead? Are you playing the faithful husband route or do I need to call the police?Nefastus
A couple more mistakes:
1)
a ".....daaaaadddddyyyyy."
d "What?"
a "Nothing."
d "(Shit, clearly she knows what happened...I wonder if she watched us....that's kind of hot. But I will let her pretend nothing happened.)"
This dialog occurs even if I refuse to have sex with the redhead, makes no sense.
2)
j "Fuck [j_name], I came while sucking your dick. That shit has NEVER happened to me before."
I think there should have been [player_name] instead of [j_name].