septacycell

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In all fairness, I did screw up her character pretty badly at one point. It exploded on the forums here.

Basically, I'd been referencing back and forth between Caroline and her abusive exes to compare and contrast the new relationship with MC.

In my horniness, I may have gotten a little too descriptive with what Caroline did with her exes. People on here started raging about "Cuckaline" and I had to redraft like nine scenes. :LOL:
Sorry to hear it left a bad mark.
 

dejan07

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yes, but I think 0.8 in march, and only have 3min new story
0.9 in may or june , but I think is 2024
and 0.91 0.92 0.92......will finish at 2025
because that can earn more money
This was just my own suggestion on how to improve public relations. The idea is to meet deadllines like in corporate world with quarterly earnings and realistic expectations since making money from Patreon is serious business as well.

The idea is if you know you will need 2 months for an update to your game promise to public you will do it in 3 months time and if you manage to do it in 2 month and 2 weeks people will love you but if you promise to do it in 2 months but you end up 2 weeks late they are gonna be mad and contact Patreon watchdogs to complain about you being a scammer. Do you get it what i mean?

It is better to under promise and over deliver than the other way around!
 

Chazz1239

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Linda and Sara are entirely ICSTOR.
Zuri and Suri are ICSTOR.
Yazmin and Liza are ICSTOR (with me peppering in little details here and there like Linda's strained relationship with her sister) up until the final relationship level that we are writing. I've drafted the conclusion to their story.
Lily is ICSTOR.

I heavily influened a lot of Caroline's story. ICSTOR created the general theme of her trying to open a business+photoshoots, and I added in the more romantic aspect of helping her overcome a legacy of bad relationships and eventually move on with somemone who cares for her.
Bob's personality was me.
The plot for Pool Girl, Delilah, is entirely my creation.

Off the top of my head, I think I've covered everyone.
You did God's work holy shit. I don't like Caroline but I can't deny that her storyline was very well written and executed.
 
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This was just my own suggestion on how to improve public relations. The idea is to meet deadllines like in corporate world with quarterly earnings and realistic expectations since making money from Patreon is serious business as well.

The idea is if you know you will need 2 months for an update to your game promise to public you will do it in 3 months time and if you manage to do it in 2 month and 2 weeks people will love you but if you promise to do it in 2 months but you end up 2 weeks late they are gonna be mad and contact Patreon watchdogs to complain about you being a scammer. Do you get it what i mean?

It is better to under promise and over deliver than the other way around!
no...., he always delay 2 years not 2 weeks,lol
 
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Linda and Sara are entirely ICSTOR.
Zuri and Suri are ICSTOR.
Yazmin and Liza are ICSTOR (with me peppering in little details here and there like Linda's strained relationship with her sister) up until the final relationship level that we are writing. I've drafted the conclusion to their story.
Lily is ICSTOR.
Violet was ICSTOR

I heavily influened a lot of Caroline's story. ICSTOR created the general theme of her trying to open a business+photoshoots, and I added in the more romantic aspect of helping her overcome a legacy of bad relationships and eventually move on with somemone who cares for her.
Bob's personality was me.
The plot for Pool Girl, Delilah, is entirely my creation.

Off the top of my head, I think I've covered everyone.
I hope Celia's new story isn't too different from the old story. It is important not to alter her character. Played for a very long time, but I remember that Judy helped by giving us the key. So I thought that in the future, Judy would help MC by working psychological tricks on Celia to instill in Celia a love for certain fetishes and MC could completely corrupt her. (I assumed so before).
 
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Dogorti

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Linda and Sara are entirely ICSTOR.
Zuri and Suri are ICSTOR.
Yazmin and Liza are ICSTOR (with me peppering in little details here and there like Linda's strained relationship with her sister) up until the final relationship level that we are writing. I've drafted the conclusion to their story.
Lily is ICSTOR.
Violet was ICSTOR

I heavily influened a lot of Caroline's story. ICSTOR created the general theme of her trying to open a business+photoshoots, and I added in the more romantic aspect of helping her overcome a legacy of bad relationships and eventually move on with somemone who cares for her.
Bob's personality was me.
The plot for Pool Girl, Delilah, is entirely my creation.

Off the top of my head, I think I've covered everyone.
So that answers my question that why caroline's story is so superior to the others in the game

and also why it felt so different from the game itself so much that it seemed like a separate game, and I think it's a negative aspect everything should be written by the same person after all, we know that icstor is not a great writer
 
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Onyxdime

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I hope Celia's new story isn't too different from the old story. It is important not to alter her character. Played for a very long time, but I remember that Judy helped by giving us the key. So I thought that in the future, Judy would help MC by working psychological tricks on Celia to instill in Celia a love for certain fetishes and MC could completely corrupt her. (I assumed so before).
Can't say much, I'm afraid. All I can say is that if you enjoyed Celia so far, then you will definitely enjoy the direction things have been taken.
 

Onyxdime

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So that answers my question that why caroline's story is so superior to the others in the game

and also why it felt so different from the game itself so much that it seemed like a separate game, and I think it's a negative aspect everything should be written by the same person after all, we know that icstor is not a great writer
Glad you enjoyed it.

Won't spoil anything, but if you liked Caroline you're probably going to really enjoy Delilah's route. She's only a side character, so not the same quantity of content as a main girl - but I turned her into my own wee passion project and rewrote her content several times until I was 100% happy with it.
 
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Only1P

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Glad you enjoyed it.

Won't spoil anything, but if you liked Caroline you're probably going to really enjoy Delilah's route. She's only a side character, so not the same quantity of content as a main girl - but I turned her into my own wee passion project and rewrote her content several times until I was 100% happy with it.
Will there be group sex with Linda Caroline Sarah Liza?
 

Onyxdime

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Will there be group sex with Linda Caroline Sarah Liza?
Not on the cards at the minute. I'd love to see if happen; but all the possible variations etc. it would add extra months on to the development.

Who knows though, maybe in the future?
 

radcon

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Also i found a pic of a character in I think Celia's apartment = Who is she and will we be seeing more of her? is she already in the game and somehow I just missed her completely, because I know I've never seen her.

found that pic here = with other pics of the game so I'm pretty sure that picture is from this game.
This girl is not from Milfy City.. is Nikki from "The Visit".
 
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