Ren'Py Completed Milfy City [v1.0e] [ICSTOR]

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yihman1 said:
We all start somewhere. Early renders in the game aren't the best compared to more recent stuff. As you mention the story does have some problems, and I am working on that and making that much more compelling and interesting as things are progressing. I picked it up on Round 7, currently working on Round 9, and going back and fixing earlier parts that were problem points. Round 9 is going to be magnificent. We are more aware of our flaws than our players and are working hard to fix them.

Moon would destroy Icstor in making renders, and it's not even close. Because guess what... Moon would actually produce the renders! No excuses! I don't care one bit about who has more numbers of patrons I care about results and productivity. Icstor is more "Findom" than "Developer". He is not even in the same league as us.

Icstor does not tell an original thought provoking or compelling story in Milfy City... Seriously, go play "Sisterly Lust" or "Big Brother" or "Man of the House". The same story has been told by 100 other games just like it...

It's a cliche story about a shy perverted lad who has a family that he tries building a harem around... One sister will be a sweet younger one, and the other will be a bitch... Get mom drunk on wine and smash! There are 100s of "Incest Harem" games out there. Milfy City is nothing special in the story department.



Speaking the truth is never a PR disaster if you got nothing to hide. I'll put my balls right out there on the table for everyone to look at how big they are. I don't care. I would never give up the forum whoring that I love to sit in some ivory tower like some people do. I come down and talk to the people.
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I wouldn't call Caroline a bitch.
 
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HeavyMetalSuizid said:
I'm not a fan of today's hypersensibilities, of tearing statues down and renaming anything you might deem offensive to some (and its becoming more heated by the day, I read an essay recently arguing that nazi, monumental architecture ("Monumentalbauten", like the planned Volkshalle) shouldn't be displayed as was envisioned and constructed and university culture across the west, and even the legislature, is under the threat of restricting free speech, canada's debating something highly intrusive at the moment.
(There was a review in the economist recently, tracking the cyclical history of free speech and drawing inspiration from the attian ideals on it, could also be hugely interesting)

Ought not the victors to write history, is it not the right of conquest that has bestowed upon them the right to do so?
(I'm itching to read Spengler, too, some of Jünger, both part of a conservative revolution against the weimar republic, I've read)
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All I'll say is this fact: Nazis are bad, and anyone who tries to support them endorses their cause. I mean it's not hard and personally, I feel "free speech" isn't the same as a "call for action"
 
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yihman1 said:
We all start somewhere. Early renders in the game aren't the best compared to more recent stuff. As you mention the story does have some problems, and I am working on that and making that much more compelling and interesting as things are progressing. I picked it up on Round 7, currently working on Round 9, and going back and fixing earlier parts that were problem points. Round 9 is going to be magnificent. We are more aware of our flaws than our players and are working hard to fix them.

Moon would destroy Icstor in making renders, and it's not even close. Because guess what... Moon would actually produce the renders! No excuses! I don't care one bit about who has more numbers of patrons I care about results and productivity. Icstor is more "Findom" than "Developer". He is not even in the same league as us.

Icstor does not tell an original thought provoking or compelling story in Milfy City... Seriously, go play "Sisterly Lust" or "Big Brother" or "Man of the House". The same story has been told by 100 other games just like it...

It's a cliche story about a shy perverted lad who has a family that he tries building a harem around... One sister will be a sweet younger one, and the other will be a bitch... Get mom drunk on wine and smash! There are 100s of "Incest Harem" games out there. Milfy City is nothing special in the story department.



Speaking the truth is never a PR disaster if you got nothing to hide. I'll put my balls right out there on the table for everyone to look at how big they are. I don't care. I would never give up the forum whoring that I love to sit in some ivory tower like some people do. I come down and talk to the people.
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I'm already a writer, with a novel about to be finished. My editor is loving it. But I am wondering if I can do writing for these sort of games for extra $ on the side and for fun cuz I like trying to break cliches. Know anyone looking for an extra writer?
 
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croc560 said:
I'm already a writer, with a novel about to be finished. My editor is loving it. But I am wondering if I can do writing for these sort of games for extra $ on the side and for fun cuz I like trying to break cliches. Know anyone looking for an extra writer?
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Check out the Recruitment subforum.
 
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croc560 said:
I'm already a writer, with a novel about to be finished. My editor is loving it. But I am wondering if I can do writing for these sort of games for extra $ on the side and for fun cuz I like trying to break cliches. Know anyone looking for an extra writer?
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Go put in a "supplying writer" thread in the recruitment section.
 
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croc560 said:
Oh I have, even sent messages to many but...nobody answered. Shame... :(
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It's going to take more than a normal "hey I'm looking for work" post. You're going to have to sell it, and make yourself look better than the hundreds of others. Post your work, your rates. You may even have to start off working for free first. Because the devs looking for writers on there aren't *big name devs*. They're people just starting up/just looking to get the project started. You're gonna have to be reasonable, because honestly, not many, if any of these devs are making money. The ones that are, already have writers. They probably have people begging to write for them. So I'd temper your expectations. Most people are doing this as a hobby.
 
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Wafflewaffuru said:
It's going to take more than a normal "hey I'm looking for work" post. You're going to have to sell it, and make yourself look better than the hundreds of others. Post your work, your rates. You may even have to start off working for free first. Because the devs looking for writers on there aren't *big name devs*. They're people just starting up/just looking to get the project started. You're gonna have to be reasonable, because honestly, not many, if any of these devs are making money. The ones that are, already have writers. They probably have people begging to write for them. So I'd temper your expectations. Most people are doing this as a hobby.
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I'm also doing it as a hobby. Figure I can improve my writing skills in the process, as I've only done at most a "sex scene" in my own published works. But after playing these sort of games, I'd like to offer my own literary skills. :)
Especially after I wrote one short smut story and it got suprisingly good reviews...to the point I wish I charged $ for it lol
 
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