Ren'Py Completed Milfy City [v1.0e] [ICSTOR]

[rafa30]

Man I'm glad sarah didn't win the 0.5 poll, she's just damn ugly and looks like a child. Just an opinion tho.
Hope delilah gets an update she's one of the most beautiful characters in the game to me

I really like Sara.
she is so beautiful

 

[koiboi420]

has maybe someone a save file with all scenes? ty and sorry for asking but i cant find it in latest threads (

 

[Nerttu]

Here!!

 

[Bushwacker101]

Anyone having an issue where game crashes when accessing bag?

 

[Rock H.]

In these spoilers are a complete list of typos and content issues up through the end of v0.4c. It appears that ICSTOR is not a native English speaker and that he is using native to U.K. English language translation, although the story appears to be set in California. Additionally there are way too many commas and dashes in all the wrong places. The spoiler gives corrections and recommendations.

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This spoiler gives a table of U.K. English to North American English slang translations

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Primary character ages in terms of the main character.

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[Rock H.]

In these spoilers are a complete list of typos and content issues up through the end of v0.4c. It appears that ICSTOR is not a native English speaker and that he is using native to U.K. English language translation, although the story appears to be set in California. Additionally there are way too many commas and dashes in all the wrong places. The spoiler gives corrections and recommendations.

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My apologies on the way the age ranges converted when I dropped them into F95. Hopefully this one will read better.

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[Nerttu]

My apologies on the way the age ranges converted when I dropped them into F95. Hopefully this one will read better.

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Where you get these ages, I mean Caroline 4 years older ??? Where that came for ?? And the others ??? Yes I get it that Sara is 18 and being younger sister and still at school with MC, MC must be 18-19 (high school), but the others ????

 

[STPeachFan]

he's going to implement better scenes slowly.

 

[Rock H.]

Where you get these ages, I mean Caroline 4 years older ??? Where that came for ?? And the others ??? Yes I get it that Sara is 18 and being younger sister and still at school with MC, MC must be 18-19 (high school), but the others ????

All of the ages come out of the game itself. The MC says that he first encountered Caroline when he was X age and being bullied by two kids and Caroline drove them off, and that she was 4 years older than he was at the time.
Liza and Linda are like twins sister but couldn't be more different.
Liza and Linda were in college together and best friends.
Liza and Yazmin were in college at the same age.
Liza and Yazmin were freshmen together 19 years ago.

Everything else is just simple arithmetic.

 

[Nerttu]

All of the ages come out of the game itself. The MC says that he first encountered Caroline when he was X age and being bullied by two kids and Caroline drove them off, and that she was 4 years older than he was at the time.
Liza and Linda are like twins sister but couldn't be more different.
Liza and Linda were in college together and best friends.
Liza and Yazmin were in college at the same age.
Liza and Yazmin were freshmen together 19 years ago.

Everything else is just simple arithmetic.

Yes, that part I understand (MC, Sara and Caroline), but in my mind, you can`t tell Moms age precisely !! If Liza and Yazmin where freshmens, Mom could be serior (collage lasts about 3-6 years). Mom could be even 5 years older than Liza. She don`t look like it, but imo she is older (never mentioned that they are twins).

 

[zabel1973]

it's simple, you need to time your clicks right, the orange area in the bars is where you need to time the clicks, one hand at a time.

sorry but i can´t climb, can you be mor explicit, sorry for the english.
i tried everything

 

[Nerttu]

sorry but i can´t climb, can you be mor explicit, sorry for the english.
i tried everything

First, it`s all the same, witch hand you start. Then there is a bar, witch has yellow area. IN the bar goes up and down purple beam. When the beam hits the yellow area, you press the hand button. Then you switch hand (green hand is active), and so on. There is NO time limit, don`t hurry, the main thing is to press button at the right time (purple IN yellow area) !!!!! Not hard to do.

 

[zabel1973]

Hello, I'm sorry for English, I'm having trouble climbing the window, I do not understand if it's to click with the pink or white bar and I'm always falling, I'd like you to help me, thank you.

 

[Nerttu]

Hello, I'm sorry for English, I'm having trouble climbing the window, I do not understand if it's to click with the pink or white bar and I'm always falling, I'd like you to help me, thank you.

Plese, don`t post same questions, ones is enough !!!!

 

[Trapezio]

There is a DAMN walkthrough thread.

WHY CAN'T YOU UNDERSTAND that you HAVE to go there and ask when you're stuck?

 

[zabel1973]

First, it`s all the same, witch hand you start. Then there is a bar, witch has yellow area. IN the bar goes up and down purple beam. When the beam hits the yellow area, you press the hand button. Then you switch hand (green hand is active), and so on. There is NO time limit, don`t hurry, the main thing is to press button at the right time (purple IN yellow area) !!!!! Not hard to do.

is it very difficult the pink bar is very fast and I can not click while it appears, some trick or help?

 

[zabel1973]

Plese, don`t post same questions, ones is enough !!!!

sorry

 

[Trapezio]

First, it`s all the same, witch hand you start. Then there is a bar, witch has yellow area. IN the bar goes up and down purple beam. When the beam hits the yellow area, you press the hand button. Then you switch hand (green hand is active), and so on. There is NO time limit, don`t hurry, the main thing is to press button at the right time (purple IN yellow area) !!!!! Not hard to do.

DON'T ANSWER THEM. They have to learn and understand that they have to ask their questions in the walkthrough thread.

 

[Nerttu]

is it very difficult the pink bar is very fast and I can not click while it appears, some trick or help?

You don`t HAVE to click it when it apears !!! You could watch it how long as you like, and then press the hand !!!!!

 

[Nerttu]

DON'T ANSWER THEM. They have to learn and understand that they have to ask their questions in the walkthrough thread.

SORRY, my mistake !!! EVEN I didn`t notised, that we are NOT there !!! IMHO, too many different threads with same game aint good !!!!!