Damn, if I knew a mod like this was in the works then I would've just waited for it to come out instead of trying to play the game when I did, writing matters a lot to me.
I didn't know people liked Delilah's story so much. Personally even without the criticism I mentioned earlier, I still found her story to be too detached from reality to be enjoyable (parading around the school naked? things like that get you expelled from even the most ghetto schools c'mon). I know there's a requirement for SOME suspension of disbelief but that was a bit taking it too far when most of the game is relatively tame by comparison and otherwise shows no real signs of camp. But whatever, I do realize that with games like these that there's a different threshold for what counts as passable writing than the average piece of fiction, though that only speaks in favor for those that do manage to break the mold.
Regardless, if you thought my criticism of Delilah had any sort of legitimacy then I have the exact same opinion with
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And one particular thing comes to mind, I think I must've missed something but what's with
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These are the biggest things that kinda rubbed me the wrong way that I can think of, I don't really care about the smaller things, like Violet's place looking like a mansion despite living in the worst part of town (and yeah I know she explains it, but even with that 'reason' it's still dumb, personally I'd rewrite it for the home to have sentimental value instead, because of her mother). Or two different characters using a Sartre's No Exit analogy. Or the refractory period needing to be explained over THREE times. The word 'nonce' being misused. Macy giving up on trying to hook up with the MC because he starts dating Sara, in spite of the MC repeatedly coming back with more gossip with other girls afterwards. I definitely played way worse stuff in the past so eh, it's really all small stuff by comparison, even though it piles up and I definitely wish I would've known about your mod beforehand.
Don't know if you got anything from my complaints but I hope there was something to them. Good luck finishing the mod!
