It fits perfectly a sexual intercourse between a hooker and a client.
Exactly. I'm pretty sure you already saw my posts where I was talking about the exact same impression.
What I'm disappointed about this Octavia route is that we are not shown the process of training or "corruption" of Octavia.
Exactly x2.
I'm not sure how it could have been realised, but, maybe, the MC is shown the tape of the process of training of Octavia or something.
I'd prefer him doing the "training", even if it'd be described by text, not by pictures. Her doing something off-screen with someone else is getting dangerously close to the NTR territory. Now, I know that NTR nowadays became sort of a boogieman of porn games, and people are very vocal about this stuff, and sometimes can label pretty much everything as NTR - but a character participating in sexual activities with someone else without any choice from the player's side and with MC actively consenting to it... Yeah, I would say it is getting close to the... you know, the c*ckoldry, may Allah forgive me for uttering such a word. It could be mitigated somewhat if we would be assured that she received "training" from the female staff members only.
And, you know, it's not that I'm completely against that stuff - to each his own, after all, I myself proposed in the past something along these lines: "I guess, it could be fun to order Octavia to "serve" Weng in her corruption route - if player is into that kind of thing - reluctant hot women with "ugly old bastards" etc. The dude's gonna be so happy!" But only as long as the player is given a clear choice to go that way.
Anyway, the only training I'd let the club staff to do is the striptease training.
Actually, the most submissive character in the game is Claudia. She still loves her dominant asshole husband, even though he treats her like shit. She is easily pushed to do things she doesn't really want to by Karen and her flight attendent friend.
I won't call her submissive, rather kind-hearted and soft. Yeah she's easily pushed but I don't think that deep down she didn't like the things they did. I believe that her corruption should lead to her becoming not a slave (to MC) but on the contrary, a more liberated person, accepting and enjoying her sexual cravings towards MC and her bisexuality.
Meanwhile in the very first "Mask" scene Octavia broke and sucked a strangers cock after only a light pressure. I'd prefer that pattern to hold over her other scenes - as MC pressures her more so she's yields to his more extreme demands. For example the D18 scene could've went like that: he demands anal, she refuses initially (stating that she has never done this before and he'd hurt her), he pressures her, saying that she either does what he wants, or he would call for a couple of other female servants, order them to hold her to the floor and screw her the way he wants anyway - and only after that she would yield. Instead we're having "it's your second visit and I'm ready to do anything already because of some training that happened while you were away."
Actually, I was a bit disappointed when there was no option for Claudia to undergone the training at the club. I mean the MC could have a choice. Maybe a choice to train Claudia would lead to a bad ending or something, but still it would be awesome.
Well her corruption route just started, who knows what future holds. I'd still prefer MC to do all of the necessary "training" himself though. But you know, I do remember your bad ending proposal and yeah, it would be cool to have that. A real bad ending, so to say.