After watching Karen, I decided the next day to go to Victor's house (the choice is in violet), and in conversation with him I chose
Hell yes. >
Victor, I want the best for you, same as me. >
She was pretty craze in there. Does she ever do anything more perverted? and then had these options:
- Come on you gotta bring me back.
- I saw enough yesterday. I'm good for a while.
- Nah, I've seen Karen. Now I want to see someone else.
No matter which of these I choose, I get exactly the same response from Victor: "Heh. I mean yeah sure..." and then "I could take you back, but dude that's my Karen you are talking about, and you know what she means to me." IMO this dialogue only makes sense with the first choice. It might have made sense with the second choice, except that right before Victor himself suggests the MC would need to wait a year to see more (implying the MC
will be able to see more); if Victor is so protective of Karen, why even suggest another show, even a year later? And Victor's response makes no sense for the third choice, because you specifically state you want to see someone else,
not Karen.
In addition to the practical aspects of the apparent conflict in text meaning, there's also the problem of offering three choices but currently none appear to actually be choices, since they all seem to yield the same results. At a minimum, the response is exactly the same, which feels strange. I would guess you've planned different dialogue depending on the choice and either entering it in your script file was missed or some logic is failing, so the game's not triggering the different dialogue.
There is a similar issue on the first Saturday morning. Friday night I chose to do deliveries for Mr. Weng, but Saturday morning the text indicates I had been at Victor's the night before. Even more puzzling, spending time with Victor wasn't even an option for me Friday night. My options were
Do Delivery for Weng,
Practice Lockpicking skills,
Chill, or
Do homework. Here is some of the text Saturday morning, for reference.
The hot splash of water from the shower feels great on your body, especially after walking back home from Victor's home.
Usually you'd never skip out on a shower first thing in the morning, but it wasn't like you had another change of clothes on hand, or that you'd want to ask Victor to lend you some clothes that would have obviously not fit.
FYI, the orange on was added, since I noticed it was missing from your text while I was typing this out.
BTW, don't think I missed your reference to your other game in the Saturday morning commercial. Nicely done.