Well my first take on this title...GET RID of that huge ass quick menu, the one that is located at bottom right hand corner of the screen.
Also there are actually two quick menu's with this title...the standard small text version which is located at the bottom of the screen, and the huge one to the right. And the image below shows the huge ass one is just screen clutter, and this title would look much better if it was removed or made hidden in the settings.
I've seen this horrible UI a few times before, and every time that huge quick menu it's not removable...because it's hard coded some where else in the script from the norm location. Also, I normally use a Universal Quick Menu mod, which this mod can hide the quick with a single key stroke (Q key). But it wont remove the huge quick menu when using the mod, it only works on the small QM. And an FYI, most computer users don't use the QM, we can right click and we have everything a QM offers.
Here is an example image below displaying a custom dark bottom textbox, along with the (small) quick menu hidden using the Universal Quick Menu mod. (And normally using the Q key would hide or display the QM, but with this type of interface it's assigned the Q key to another feature (instead of being an unassigned key).
There isn't anything wrong with the story, I really dislike the Ren'Py interface used...and I hope some changes can happen in the next update that will allow the user to hide the large QM.
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Regards.