- Aug 8, 2017
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I really do like the game, but the author should really consider getting an editor that is a native English speaker to take a look at his texts. The whole thing is full of errors and many sentences are awkwardly worded.
As an example:
"I never saw a girl from the city knowing so much about that stuff" <- the original
compared to
"I've never heard of a city girl that knows so much about this stuff"
or
"I certainly wouldn't have set up such a nice fireplace and all that" <- the original
compared to
"I certainly couldn't have set up a camp fire and tent that well"
As an example:
"I never saw a girl from the city knowing so much about that stuff" <- the original
compared to
"I've never heard of a city girl that knows so much about this stuff"
or
"I certainly wouldn't have set up such a nice fireplace and all that" <- the original
compared to
"I certainly couldn't have set up a camp fire and tent that well"
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