- Nov 4, 2017
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I'm sorry, English isn't my first language, so issues like these are common. There was a kind soul who offered to proofread the game, But I've only sent him this Gran Noah part that I'm currently working on, and a few new sex scenes. Later I intend to make a docx file for him to proofread of the entire game (because I never wrote the script of the game until this point and for him to proofread directly into the RPG maker is too hard).So I'm currently having fun with the game, rpgm is really the only way I can play some if these games so I'm extremely grateful for this port, thank you, I just wanted to bring attention to some Grammer mistakes (I've only played up to the harbor) or the way some of it is worded makes it difficult to read, it's not a big issue, I'm still having fun with the game. The ones I've noticed so far is in the second town the dialogue with Alice right after the dragon girl leaves, Luka's dialogue about her Age, idk how to make it make sense so I felt it would be best to leave a comment here.
Thanks for playing the game, I hope you like it.