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You are now my favorite NTR artist. Also, you are correct about the writing it's all about invoking those feelings.
I Unlocked everything, even the secrets with your tips. (They were too hidden imo).
For my feedback as a cultured NTR enjoyer, I think some of the scenes didn't blend too well, as the player I felt that some times the actions of the mother were too unreasonable, however, they were overall pretty well constructed. For you as the writer, having the personality and reasoning of the characters before hand some times may cause you to not see a lack of hints some scenes needed before hand. You stated on a post that the reason to why the mother corrupts so fast are the happenings before the game, but for the players unknown to this fact before hand, seems like a break of character. Maybe it was wrong of us to assume the mother was pure to begin with? Regardless, I think it's pretty hot watching a pure mother get corrupt while the main character is unaware.
Making the choices a little bit more obvious can help players understand the impact of their actions better. Some were really good, like the gym one. Others not so much, specifically, not believing Ron's child.
I give this game 10/10. It is simply beyond expectations even as a unfinished product.
I really believe you have talent for this, and the game will undoubtedly blow up.
Thank you very much for having the vision and trying to teach how netorare should be made. NTRman and other artists sometimes have the approach of showing the mother scenes, this increases the "smoothness" between the scenes but decreases the immersion as the main character. Rannero does this really well by making the heroine the main character instead.
Considering the art, I think it's good enough, you knew that the characters emotions were important and did it correctly. You have great artistic view.
Considering the meta jokes, I think they didn't break immersion too much, but removing them would be better. I think the writing is good enough to not need out of character or 4th wall segments.
Here are some routes I would like to see added in the future:
Motherly love route, where they get a good relation ship. It should branch into incest or denial. Pizza, games and going out together should be the main events, just a lot wholesome stuff to build to her likeness and good mother feelings. He should get cucked regardless.
Evil route, where her personality changes to hate James. It should branch into masochism towards the son or hate for getting in the way of her pleasure. Main events should include; slaps, starvation, deterioration of James' physical condition, locking her son outside regardless of the raging storm to have sex, disregard for his bullying. Also, reinforcing the bully behaviour of James' perpetrators by fulfilling their desires is *Chefs Kiss*.
Jealously route, where James comes to love her and tries to get her for himself and start getting in the way. Doesn't need to be related to the evil route, but does blend well.
Pure route, where James win and she doesn't have sex with other man. I wonder what happens when nature calls.
Incest route, should be self explanatory, I don't care too much for this one, but could be good for replayability.
Dark cult route? Is it already implemented? Evil moms are just too cool.
Blacked route.
Scat route? It's hated, but I think it's nice.
Other considerations:
Good passage of time can be key, maybe her jobs don't need to be on a daily basis?
The English mistakes are a bit confusing, easily fixed with fan slaves working for you and fixing grammar.
Controlling the mother's personality thru the choices is very nice.
I understand most of the issue
TL;DR
10/10
Man!, I liked this game.
It's clear you like the genre and know your stuff.
Best regards,
Taiga#9712.
I Unlocked everything, even the secrets with your tips. (They were too hidden imo).
For my feedback as a cultured NTR enjoyer, I think some of the scenes didn't blend too well, as the player I felt that some times the actions of the mother were too unreasonable, however, they were overall pretty well constructed. For you as the writer, having the personality and reasoning of the characters before hand some times may cause you to not see a lack of hints some scenes needed before hand. You stated on a post that the reason to why the mother corrupts so fast are the happenings before the game, but for the players unknown to this fact before hand, seems like a break of character. Maybe it was wrong of us to assume the mother was pure to begin with? Regardless, I think it's pretty hot watching a pure mother get corrupt while the main character is unaware.
Making the choices a little bit more obvious can help players understand the impact of their actions better. Some were really good, like the gym one. Others not so much, specifically, not believing Ron's child.
I give this game 10/10. It is simply beyond expectations even as a unfinished product.
I really believe you have talent for this, and the game will undoubtedly blow up.
Thank you very much for having the vision and trying to teach how netorare should be made. NTRman and other artists sometimes have the approach of showing the mother scenes, this increases the "smoothness" between the scenes but decreases the immersion as the main character. Rannero does this really well by making the heroine the main character instead.
Considering the art, I think it's good enough, you knew that the characters emotions were important and did it correctly. You have great artistic view.
Considering the meta jokes, I think they didn't break immersion too much, but removing them would be better. I think the writing is good enough to not need out of character or 4th wall segments.
Here are some routes I would like to see added in the future:
Motherly love route, where they get a good relation ship. It should branch into incest or denial. Pizza, games and going out together should be the main events, just a lot wholesome stuff to build to her likeness and good mother feelings. He should get cucked regardless.
Evil route, where her personality changes to hate James. It should branch into masochism towards the son or hate for getting in the way of her pleasure. Main events should include; slaps, starvation, deterioration of James' physical condition, locking her son outside regardless of the raging storm to have sex, disregard for his bullying. Also, reinforcing the bully behaviour of James' perpetrators by fulfilling their desires is *Chefs Kiss*.
Jealously route, where James comes to love her and tries to get her for himself and start getting in the way. Doesn't need to be related to the evil route, but does blend well.
Pure route, where James win and she doesn't have sex with other man. I wonder what happens when nature calls.
Incest route, should be self explanatory, I don't care too much for this one, but could be good for replayability.
Dark cult route? Is it already implemented? Evil moms are just too cool.
Blacked route.
Other considerations:
Good passage of time can be key, maybe her jobs don't need to be on a daily basis?
The English mistakes are a bit confusing, easily fixed with fan slaves working for you and fixing grammar.
Controlling the mother's personality thru the choices is very nice.
I understand most of the issue
TL;DR
10/10
Man!, I liked this game.
It's clear you like the genre and know your stuff.
Best regards,
Taiga#9712.
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I see. I think that you're a big fan of the game.
Personally, I like ntr not as the one getting chucked or the one that's chucking. I like to be the third guy that watches people destroying each other emotionally as I grab my cup of coffee and smile at the grateful universe.
The evil mom will exist in most of the routes as an option for a bad ending.
And as for the cult, it is planned to be a route. Funny enough, I got the inspiration from one of Kanye west interviews where he said something about the Illuminati asking him to sacrifice his mom and that his mom will sacrifice herself for him. When he said that I was like "Hmm, that's a nice plot for ntr".
Anyways, thanks for your support!
You know that episode where Squidward said he doesn't like Krabby patty?damn the way you guys talk about this game makes me want to play it, but Im sure I won't like it
Forgot to mention.
When we talk about jokes, you need to realize that most of them come out of Gerrard's dialogue because he's supposed to be a cringe loser character. The point is that such a loser character will get his way with lucy.
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Guinea pig route
The cliche science guinea pig route would most likely be a drug that corrupts Lucy.
Lesbian Drug:
Hardcore Training:
The cliche science guinea pig route would most likely be a drug that corrupts Lucy.
- Lesbian Drug - Scientists are trying to invent a drug that encourages women to become lesbian. Expose her to lesbian porn to get reactions, kiss another woman, go on a date, eventually have sex with other lesbian lab rat.
- Exhibitionism Drug - Scientists are trying to invent a drug that encourages women to expose themselves, give her outfits to wear and show off, encourage social media like instragram/tik tok
- Free Use - Scientists are trying to invent a drug that encourages women to give their body as free use for anyone, encourage her to become free use and ultimate trial is to get her to hook up with a character she hates. If she is free use she won't protest.
- Placebo - Lucy is the control group, she is not given a drug but is helping other lab rats testing drugs (males taking drugs to improve dicks)
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Nope, I actually got inspiration from this manga:
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Now, I know the mangaka have made something that can be considered a crime against humanity. But, this specific manga about a bunch of students using a real female body as a practice tool is very interesting. Now of course there'll be some drug tests and stuff, but the main premise is lucy's body will be used as a tool for them.
I don't know if this one is for me. I'm normally fine with NTR - it's not my favourite thing and the NTR itself doesn't get me off at all, but if the scenes and story are good it doesn't bother me and I can still enjoy it.
Again the NTR side here doesn't bother me, but just the becoming an awful mother did bother me a bit haha. Still the content was good enough that I went through it 3 times trying to unlock more scenes and I did really enjoy a bit of it. I probably won't keep updated on the development but I guess I'll come back for a look when it's completed. The mother is hot after all.
My two cents: The pacing felt off to me. It felt like things progressed way too quickly at the beginning. One of the routes where I found out via the onlyFriends post that Ron drugged the mother did it at least make some sense about the quick corruption, but even then it felt.. fast.
Again the NTR side here doesn't bother me, but just the becoming an awful mother did bother me a bit haha. Still the content was good enough that I went through it 3 times trying to unlock more scenes and I did really enjoy a bit of it. I probably won't keep updated on the development but I guess I'll come back for a look when it's completed. The mother is hot after all.
My two cents: The pacing felt off to me. It felt like things progressed way too quickly at the beginning. One of the routes where I found out via the onlyFriends post that Ron drugged the mother did it at least make some sense about the quick corruption, but even then it felt.. fast.
I did notice this on the one about the tiger penis, really made me think "This boy is retarded".
Kek, surprisingly accurate.
Best regards,
Taiga#9712
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
File "game/Episode2.rpy", line 1864, in script
$presistent.sukhilock = "true"
File "game/Episode2.rpy", line 1864, in <module>
$presistent.sukhilock = "true"
NameError: name 'presistent' is not defined
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "game/Episode2.rpy", line 1864, in script
$presistent.sukhilock = "true"
File "/home/oggy/Desktop/MotherNTRTraining-02-pc/renpy/ast.py", line 1131, in execute
renpy.python.py_exec_bytecode(self.code.bytecode, self.hide, store=self.store)
File "/home/oggy/Desktop/MotherNTRTraining-02-pc/renpy/python.py", line 1061, in py_exec_bytecode
exec(bytecode, globals, locals)
File "game/Episode2.rpy", line 1864, in <module>
$presistent.sukhilock = "true"
NameError: name 'presistent' is not defined
Linux-5.19.0-35-generic-x86_64-with-glibc2.35 x86_64
Ren'Py 8.0.3.22090809
MotherNTRTraining 02
Tue Mar 7 02:27:19 2023
I get this error can you help?
While running game code:
File "game/Episode2.rpy", line 1864, in script
$presistent.sukhilock = "true"
File "game/Episode2.rpy", line 1864, in <module>
$presistent.sukhilock = "true"
NameError: name 'presistent' is not defined
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "game/Episode2.rpy", line 1864, in script
$presistent.sukhilock = "true"
File "/home/oggy/Desktop/MotherNTRTraining-02-pc/renpy/ast.py", line 1131, in execute
renpy.python.py_exec_bytecode(self.code.bytecode, self.hide, store=self.store)
File "/home/oggy/Desktop/MotherNTRTraining-02-pc/renpy/python.py", line 1061, in py_exec_bytecode
exec(bytecode, globals, locals)
File "game/Episode2.rpy", line 1864, in <module>
$presistent.sukhilock = "true"
NameError: name 'presistent' is not defined
Linux-5.19.0-35-generic-x86_64-with-glibc2.35 x86_64
Ren'Py 8.0.3.22090809
MotherNTRTraining 02
Tue Mar 7 02:27:19 2023
I get this error can you help?
