Ren'Py Completed Moving Down [Final] [Miron HFG]

[asehpe]

I always prefer a slow story escalation, too.
But it is like seeing someone building a nice house and to tell him "why don't you build a scyscraper or a castle?".
Hence, although I share your wishes, I prefer that we get a game that will be finished.
He has shown with Vicious Circle that he is capable of finishing games. That's something happening rarely.

There is truth to what you say, and I'll be happy with the final product no matter what, if it simply keeps the quality it has shown so far.

My comment is offered constructively. If the author thinks it contains some good idea and acts on it, I'll be happier. If he doesn't, I'll still be happy.

 

[noway1]

Holy shit. Next release already on the floor.

Is there a plan how many chapters will there be?

 

[Miron HFG]

Holy shit. Next release already on the floor.

Is there a plan how many chapters will there be?

I'm a little confused as to what you mean. How many chapters in total are planned?

 

[noway1]

I'm a little confused as to what you mean. How many chapters in total are planned?

yes. exactly. If this is already planned and not considered a spoiler.

 

[Miron HFG]

yes. exactly. If this is already planned and not considered a spoiler.

So far, five chapters are planned (and already "storyboarded"). But I have some new ideas myself, and there are some interesting thoughts that I picked up from the comments, so now I'm thinking about expanding the story, and I haven't decided whether to add another chapter or make inserts in the already completed script.

 

[sabanana]

I was looking forward to a good femdom story. But it turns out it's not actually about her finding her dominant side, but rather about her becoming abusive and self centered. Such a shame.

 

[gasfa26]

when 10$ patreon can unlock post ? MironY

 

[Miron HFG]

when 10$ patreon can unlock post ? MironY

Tomorrow night on my time. (UTC +2)

 

[Mwanted]

Out for 5$, I'm curious to see how it has progressed

 

[Among Us]

Can someone upload chapter 2 part 1 here?

 

[Miron HFG]

Can someone upload chapter 2 part 1 here?

January 17

 

[Zonie63]

- If the mc does a lot of stupid things like lying or taking a loan and the player has no choice to avoid it, it is hard to identify with the mc and the game soon feels uncomfortable. In general it feels better if the player has alternative routes, so if the player decides to lie and things go down (to see a special scene), it was a choice by the player and not a forced choice from dev on the story.

- If the story requires the male to be stupid, consider to switch to an intelligent female mc. After taking the job, mc Maria could explore a new world of power, lesbian affairs, BDSM (with both females and hubby), ...

- Femdom porn (Fm) has a general plausibility problem that mostly beautiful women dominate stupid, average to ugly men. In porn they are all paid to do their part in the scenes, so the women dominate and the men suffer. In real life and in a good story you have to ask why a beautiful woman should waste her life and time with such guys? One motivation can be money, e.g. a poor but beautiful woman marries a rich, ugly guy. After some time she hates herself for being trapped in a golden cage and has to let off steam by dominating / humilating her husband ... until they divorce. A variation similar to porn is a contract where both sides consent to a MS relationship and the partner with lower income is "paid" like an actor or a dom / slave in a commercial BDSM dungeon.

I just came across this game this past weekend, and it looks great. I'm looking forward to seeing how it turns out.

However, the points you raise here did chime with me a bit. I don't worry so much about a plausibility problem, since a lot of games (femdom or otherwise) are oftentimes absurdly implausible yet still fun to play. Sometimes it's fun to pick the obviously "stupid" choice just to see what happens.

But yeah, I can see your point about the difficulty of identifying with a protagonist who does stupid things. Like taking out the loan. Just how broke was this guy, and what did he need to buy before his next paycheck that required him to take out a loan? Is there some kind of stat page to the game where the player can see how much money he actually has, what his monthly expenses are, how much he's actually earning at his job? Are there other odd jobs he can do to supplement his income? It's hard to make choices without knowing the exact information the protagonist would know.

At his workplace, it's hard to tell if this guy is making an honest effort to succeed, or is he really just slacking, as it appears? If the product sucks and no one wants to buy, that would be one thing, but the story indicates that all of his peers are doing a great job, while the MC is just some poor shlep who can't get a break. He's like Homer Simpson.

 

[Lamantin]

But yeah, I can see your point about the difficulty of identifying with a protagonist who does stupid things. Like taking out the loan. Just how broke was this guy, and what did he need to buy before his next paycheck that required him to take out a loan? Is there some kind of stat page to the game where the player can see how much money he actually has, what his monthly expenses are, how much he's actually earning at his job? Are there other odd jobs he can do to supplement his income? It's hard to make choices without knowing the exact information the protagonist would know.

Especially when is wife next month salary is gonna be huge, and he kinda accepted she can be the main bread supplier after he did that for more than 3 years. The fact that he take the loan is ridiculous.

On the other hand, I really hope you will not focus solely on non-con femdom, but like other mentioned also work on consensual femdom when the girl isn't just the future copy of her "friend". This kind of consensual path was hinted with the start of the story if we took some choice and is really interesting, nice, and also NICHE in F95, it would definitely had even more value to well written game (aside the issues a few people already mentionned before on the abrupt end of the first chapter, and the need of story/character continuity also linked to chap 1 ending)

 

[judgenot93]

there's a typo on day 6 (should be [mcName])

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[Miron HFG]

there's a typo on day 6 (should be [mcName])

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Thanks!

 

[Swooosh]

Hi MironY, which are the timings for the addition of the planned tags in the game? I'm interested in all except urination and scat. Thx!

 

[Aseratrix]

Hi MironY, which are the timings for the addition of the planned tags in the game? I'm interested in all except urination and scat. Thx!

A nice question! Altho I am also interested in femdom urination and femdom scat in this regard.

 

[Aseratrix]

Thanks!

I really had no time, but I haven't given up on the idea of making a fan-sig. One day, I hope I'll surprise you with a nice one.

 

[Miron HFG]

Hi MironY, which are the timings for the addition of the planned tags in the game? I'm interested in all except urination and scat. Thx!

A nice question! Altho I am also interested in femdom urination and femdom scat in this regard.

Not really a simple question One two tags will be added with each update, and the further the story goes, the tighter the fetishes will be. I don't want to explicitly name any timelines (chapters), as that could indirectly spoil the development of the plot.

 

[Among Us]

Is the public release tomorrow?