VN Ren'Py Abandoned Moving Out [Day 9b] [APA]

[Mushybird]

Is unprotected sex gonna be a topic for the future in this game? Didn't see it in the planned tags, so I'm curious to see whether it is or is not. Very nice demo, the English does need to be tidied up a bit, but nothing too egregious (Just a note, "takeaway" is supposed to be "takeout" as in getting takeout food, so considering changing that).

Considering the number of developers who don't speak English as their first language, it's a fairly solid demo. Will be interesting seeing where the story goes, and also how fast the Patreon page gets nuked because of the underage girls and planned bestiality lol. Keep it up ApaGod!

 

[monk_56]

Wtf is this les NTR progression on the main redheaded LI and this bestiality-tease? Dev is gonna get kicked off patreon

Amazing renders- but this shit is a major buzzkill. Game is not tagged properly. I thought this was gonna be a pleasant lil 'cest tale- it was not.

(Except Luna- Luna's was actually good.)

 

[SpyderArachnid]

Missing several tags here like: Lesbian, Loli, Netorare, and Point & Click. Need to tag them properly so people can filter your game properly when searching for certain content. I see you have Bestiality tagged, but not in the genre spoiler under future tags? Going to assume it will actually happen in the future, since you gave a choice in game related to it.

Not complaining about the tags or anything, just giving a heads up is all. I don't mind them, though not a big fan of incest myself but it's not a deal breaker. Hoping Harem is planned, otherwise don't force girls on the MC please. If it will be a harem, then it's not an issue. But if it won't be, then give us choices to deny girls so we don't have to deal with unnecessary drama. Should never force girls on the MC in a non-harem game.



Regardless though, about the game in general, this was pretty fun. Had some goofy moments and didn't take itself too seriously, and was just all around fun. A nice kick back game. Renders are a bit grainy, but it's not bad. Doesn't bother me at least. Writing is fine, though should probably not use shorthand in spoken dialogue and numbers instead of words (like using 2, instead of too). It's kind of cringe and makes the writing feel juvenile.

But yeah, overall, not a bad game. It was fun at least. Not really up my alley, but surprisingly I enjoyed it. Will stick around to see how it goes in future updates. Thanks and best of luck with your project.

 

[gadu2121]

Outch bestiality doesn’t bother me too much but ...
With a LI? And a family member?
I mean, who would fuck a LI who just fucked a dog before? Big no
In addition to this with Him (redhead) we have his first scene which is not with the mc but with a lesbian (corrupting?)
2 scenes and 2 reasons to stop wanting the little redhead . Too bad really.

 

[JaredFogal]

Wow, in what country is that? In the USA landlords don't have the legal power to control the lives of their tenanats to that degree.

 

[Deleted member 5606666]

Wow, in what country is that? In the USA landlords don't have the legal power to control the lives of their tenanats to that degree.

It's his father of course... Just stupid patreon rules...

 

[Deleted member 5606666]

It's actually not bad, gone watch this for updates...

 

[YogSothoth1982]

I will make it optional, but with the limited time i have, it has to be second priority unfortunately,

Will be, except for the first scene, i don't think i'm gonna go back an rewrite that one scene. on Day 6 there is also a scene with lesbian, but this will be avoidable next release.

Ok, so I'll come back in the next release and try the game again.

 

[lkta]

(Just a note, "takeaway" is supposed to be "takeout" as in getting takeout food, so considering changing that).

Depends where you are in the world, In the UK at least takeaway would be far more common than takeout

 

[JaredFogal]

It's his father of course... Just stupid patreon rules...

Yes I know, I was just being a smartass/joking. Dunno why dev's still mess with Patreon at all, really wish they'd just ban porn alltogether like Paypal did and be done with it. If they are going the censorship route might as well go all-out.

 

[TFFBladez]

Is the beastiality optional?

 

[sergesan]

only bestiality as a story i guess would work but i would never fuck any girl who plays with my dog (sexually)....soooo a big no for this one and i read something about ntr so it´s a final NO....but even then good luck....

 

[Cavpal]

"Oh noes, step-landlord I am stuck! Halp!"

 

[furan777]

wow perfect game, i like the bestiality too, hope come more on next chapter

 

[teamur]

The models are beautiful, but the story progression is disappointing.

E.g. 2 hot girls invite me to a game of Truth Or Dare, and I refuse? WTF???

I think the dev is just a [censored] who likes to [censored] with our brains.

PS. The lesbian scene is perfect though. Incredibly sexy.

 

[Randeza]

im not kink shaming but neither patreon or subscribestar supports bestiality so you might wanna make bestiality an optional downloaded thing if that is your kink and also the netorare tag should be added

 

[Valuvika]

A lot of things messed up pretty badly. Perhaps one of the worst is that tag mess and forcing all the shit. Small things drive players away effectively.

Lez-NTR and bestiality effectively keep me and many others away from this game. Then again, when such games tag traps raise the anger like crazy. Nobody wants untagged crap on their screen. At that point, even if the graphics are damn good, everything just turns into crap.

 

[gadu2121]

The problem is that Dev' itself had a problem with the use of tags and their meanings.
I mean before creating a game you have to learn about fetishes and their compatibilities between them....
Another problem is that Dev said 'The scene choices are secondary and will come after' (code the choices) NO you force people to see ntr etc! Players won’t come back after such a thing.

 

[Deleted member 5606666]

A lot of things messed up pretty badly. Perhaps one of the worst is that tag mess and forcing all the shit. Small things drive players away effectively.

Lez-NTR and bestiality effectively keep me and many others away from this game. Then again, when such games tag traps raise the anger like crazy. Nobody wants untagged crap on their screen. At that point, even if the graphics are damn good, everything just turns into crap.

You didn't have to see bestiality, actually except for a big dick on that dog there isn't anything to see in the game. Actually there isn't much too see in the game at all.

But it's a nice start, lets see if dev continues, and doesn't abandon it, like most other games...

 

[Fazed]

Dude, you can't please everyone but there is a hell of a lot you can do to not make the people playing your game upset with you. It's the most basic thing ever. Tag the game properly, and give the player options for content in the game.

Barring that, put a disclaimer on the front page of the tread and say your intentions. I certainly wasnt expect a fucking dog out of nowhere when I first downloaded this game. It's tagged on the thread now but its still not in the tags spoiler. And who the fuck is this Diasy character. I actually thought the scene was hot mind you, but you dont just throw in a character and then the next time you see them, they are slurping one of the main Love interests with no input from the player. There's no buildup and worse it sends the wrong signal. It's like you are trying to make people not like your game.

You need to put the options in first. Not after the player has already had a bad experience with your game.


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