VN Ren'Py Abandoned Moving Out [Day 9b] [APA]

[ZaynX]

Missing tag "Kinetic Novel", No interaction at all and why the MC always a pussy and there's some friend who corrupt his sister instead of him
Graphics and models are nice looking only if MC got some balls and there's some interaction instead of plain kinetic novel

 

[benny7]

Man, even setting aside the lesbian stuff, why the hell are we trying to get our hot mom fucked in the ass by someone that isn't us?

With what has been going between the MC and the sisters i assumed he would have the same intent for the hot mom as well. Maybe there with be an incest path or make it optional.

 

[Flalafell]

Look if anyone is gonna fuck my hot mom it's gonna be me. It's a simple premise. Hot mom? I fuck her. Get it together devs! I'm not here cause I'm normal I'm here to live out premises I can't do IRL

 

[k1n5l4y3r]

Talking about tags you forgot the interracial, thank god it's avoidable

 

[Fazed]

Talking about tags you forgot the interracial, thank god it's avoidable

...what?

 

[YogSothoth1982]

Talking about tags you forgot the interracial, thank god it's avoidable

If it's because of this image, if the guy is the MC (and I'm going to assume that he is), in principle I don't see any reason why I might want to avoid it. Especially if the girl is a LI (which I'm going to take for granted, or at least I hope so)

 

[k1n5l4y3r]

If it's because of this image, if the guy is the MC (and I'm going to assume that he is), in principle I don't see any reason why I might want to avoid it. Especially if the girl is a LI (which I'm going to take for granted, or at least I hope so)

Avoiding is already possible, I'm talking about the tagging, as the game is not tagged as having interracial content.

 

[YogSothoth1982]

Avoiding is already possible, I'm talking about the tagging, as the game is not tagged as having interracial content.

Maybe it's me, but in general I don't notice if this tag is missing or not. Possibly it's because I like women of all races and colors, except those with dicks, I don't like those.

 

[Savor]

the time where luna says there is a lack of rock posters i thought she was beeing sarcastic because she got all brick walls and this was an attempt of a joke lol

 

[WarbVIII]

right now the only surprise is no group sex or lesbian mentioned as a tag, but seems like they will happen considering fisting is on the list, not a thing for most guys in hetero sex, but heard it is a thing for lesbians though. To me it's something you hear about but never see outside games or porn. Granted, beastiality is something I see/read only in porn and games, or tragic deaths while people are fucked by a horse that show up in the news on occasion. So far the writing seems reasonable as do the renders, though do think there are times you don't get choices where I think they would be available. Also might want to download the incest patch, as it seems off they are not a family, so will do a playthrough without and with.

 

[teamur]

No, not really. Make it optional/avoidable so it doesn't happen, skipping is really a useless feature.
Like the lesbian scene with one of the main LI's. I dislike lesbian content, sure i don't want to see it, but as long as i can't stop that and put an end to it permanently, that LI is dead to me.

And don't let me start about bestiality or ntr, there it is really necessary to make it avoidable, not skippable, or many won't even touch this game.

I was just saying that if the dev wouldn't make that lesbian kissing scene optional then at least it could be made skippable with 1 minute of coding. The truly best choice would be to add an option to agree to Truth Or Dare. Then we would have 2 paths, like in games with better (to my taste) story branching:

• MC agrees to play. Romance/harem path. Daisy encourages him and Starr to kiss etc. Very interesting opportunities there.
• MC chooses to spend the evening browsing internet instead of playing with 2 hottest sexiest girls in his life. Corruption/NTR path. That disgusting lesbian corrupts the baby. Ridiculous but at least sexy (for some players).

Really, why not do like this?

 

[proximusArka]

Now this game became optional to me!
¯\_(ツ)_/¯

 

[rroute]

ApaGod, I like your game. Make it what you want it to be. Don't bend to the whiney children because they don't like something.

 

[ApaGod]

ApaGod, I like your game. Make it what you want it to be. Don't bend to the whiney children because they don't like something.

Oh i stick to my themes no matter what, i'm only sad that i have mislead people with a lack of tags.
But even then, i think about all criticism, and some of the stuff people have mentioned actually makes sense, and i plan to twist one of the storylines a little due to this, which in my opinion will make it better (It was something i didn't even think about as a possibility, but now it seems so obvious that should have been the goal all along!)

 

[Joshy92]

I like the game for the most part i just feel like the mc is kinda stupid but then most visual novel mc's are.

 

[Krynh]

don't write numbers out in numerals unless it's something like money or time. or doing text speech. For the speaking itself it stands out like a sore thumb

 

[Joshy92]

I know it won't happen but damn i would love a route where the dog cucks the mc with all the girls while he just stands there jacking off. i know i'm a perverted sicko

 

[Fazed]

I know it won't happen but damn i would love a route where the dog cucks the mc with all the girls while he just stands there jacking off. i know i'm a perverted sicko

...Jesus dude.

 

[Krynh]

nowadays is one word.

incest patch don't work. still "old landlord" for me

Did you put in game, and tell it to overwite?

 

[tuShua]

Somebody suggested that i added an age setter, but i think i'll remove it again... They are not supposed to be underaged, which is why i changed their sizes for the future. I like small tits, but it doesn't look right if the girl is 6 ft tall. I'm trying to distinguish their age further on by making their hips fuller and asses bigger.
The issue is, if i add the loli tag, then people will come expecting loli's... and if i remove it, then people will yell at me for "They are obviously underaged; weirdo", so it's kind of a lose/lose.

I don't really think either height or age setter is the issue. I've got a 25 year old female friend who's like 4'11", does that mean she's a loli then? People need to realize people vary in different sizes and heights. Being short doesn't mean one is underaged. that's just messed up logic lmao. The age setter can be used in different ways on how people see it fit to enjoy their game. This is your game, and I don't see anything that's making you a weirdo. You did your best to cater for everyone for them to enjoy the game to their own accord, and that's a healthy mindset as a dev. Stop overthinking stuff because of what other people say. Life is too short for such complicated BS. Develop the game as how you see it fit. Cheers and good luck.