PyoT

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Nice visuals, decent UI, awful writing. Well, if there's even any writing at all - quite telling when the premise is supposedly a call (and subsequent nightly manipulations) that kicks off the entire story and that barely get a sentence of narration at all. Most of the scenes are the same, bam, you are somewhere else, some sex happen; whatever is happening is of course in broken English with brief bits of nonsense dialogue ...

Generic picture puzzles are completely unmotivated; there's just randomly some sexy pictures that give some magic points for no narrative reason.

Sigh. Yeah, people will presumably like the visuals but there's so little else that's positive here.

It's not that it couldn't be fixed but it'd also be a first - basically never happens. Shame about the other effort put into the project.
 
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Aristos

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Wow, that relationship escalated too quickly. I know he's supposed to be using magic or something, but the story progression doesn't make much sense. They went from long-time friends who were never romantically involved (although it's hinted that Neus had some feelings for the MC), to fucking like rabbits and being ok with having a dozen babies without even discussing it before :WaitWhat:

On a different note: if the repeatable sex scenes are not implemented yet, why do you show those options? That leads the players to believe they are available, and it's a bit disappointing when you click on all of them only to find out they're not in the game.
 
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Fission Mailed

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I've no idea how to pronounce these anime-esq names, so not being able to change the childhood friends name was a bit annoying.
I think I've gotten it changed everywhere except for the tooltip when you hover over the naviation screen for her room, the console says it changes yet it's stuck with the default name. Very odd, not yet sure how to get it to update like everything else did.

Hopefully CLLGamesO takes this as the compliment I intend rather than a discouraging complaint.

It's possible I broke things too, so far I've only tested to day 2 and now I have to goto my real job lol

edit: changing the friends name was officially implemented for v0.3, so this method of changing her name is probably just as stupid and hurtful to proper python programmers as my comment about her default name is to Spanish folks. Wasn't intended that way, sorry.
 
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Aristos

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I've no idea how to pronounce these anime-esq names, so not being able to change the childhood friends name was a bit annoying.
I think I've gotten it changed everywhere except for the tooltip when you hover over the naviation screen for her room, the console says it changes yet it's stuck with the default name. Very odd, not yet sure how to get it to update like everything else did.

Hopefully CLLGamesO takes this as the compliment I intend rather than a discouraging complaint.

It's possible I broke things too, so far I've only tested to day 2 and now I have to goto my real job lol
Maybe it's worth repeating this: Neus is a very normal female name used in the Spanish regions where Catalan and Valencian are spoken. It has nothing to do with anime. As for the pronunciation of the name, I clarified it in this very thread some time ago: NEH-oos.
We don't need every game to have LIs called Jenny, Rebecca, Brenda or Charlotte. Some variety every once in a while is welcomed by people from different parts of the world.
 

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Wow, that relationship escalated too quickly. I know he's supposed to be using magic or something, but the story progression doesn't make much sense. They went from long-time friends who were never romantically involved (although it's hinted that Neus had some feelings for the MC), to fucking like rabbits and being ok with having a dozen babies without even discussing it before :WaitWhat:

On a different note: if the repeatable sex scenes are not implemented yet, why do you show those options? That leads the players to believe they are available, and it's a bit disappointing when you click on all of them only to find out they're not in the game.
Well, the normal ending was supposed to be available in v0.3, so the progress of the relationship was meant to be fast, although I am aware that it is too fast. In v0.3, there will be some additional dialogues to make it smoother, but don't expect too much. Regarding the book, my idea is for it to be optional and not affect the main quest, at least not until level 3 of the relationship.

The normal ending will come in v0.4 since I want it to come with the confrontation.

I've no idea how to pronounce these anime-esq names, so not being able to change the childhood friends name was a bit annoying.
I think I've gotten it changed everywhere except for the tooltip when you hover over the naviation screen for her room, the console says it changes yet it's stuck with the default name. Very odd, not yet sure how to get it to update like everything else did.

Hopefully CLLGamesO takes this as the compliment I intend rather than a discouraging complaint.

It's possible I broke things too, so far I've only tested to day 2 and now I have to goto my real job lol
Thank you for your time, it is implemented for v0.3.
 

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Much less insane relationship progress in v0.3. I was kinda okay with it before with the backstory of being friends for so long already with hints of Neus wanting more but the new way should will make it better for everyone that plays. Not sure all the new scenes made it into the replay gallery, looks like I only unlocked 1 more when it felt like there were at least 5 more in-game (they could be 'extensions' of scenes in spots I had unlocked before or I could be an idiot).
 

CLLGamesO

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Much less insane relationship progress in v0.3. I was kinda okay with it before with the backstory of being friends for so long already with hints of Neus wanting more but the new way should will make it better for everyone that plays. Not sure all the new scenes made it into the replay gallery, looks like I only unlocked 1 more when it felt like there were at least 5 more in-game (they could be 'extensions' of scenes in spots I had unlocked before or I could be an idiot).
I redid the final scene of 0.2 to match the latest event in the level 2 relationship. Overall, there are only two new scenes for the main storyline, although it's true that some scenes aren't in the gallery because they didn't contain any sexual content, but I think I'll include them.
 
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Maybe it's worth repeating this: Neus is a very normal female name used in the Spanish regions where Catalan and Valencian are spoken. It has nothing to do with anime. As for the pronunciation of the name, I clarified it in this very thread some time ago: NEH-oos.
We don't need every game to have LIs called Jenny, Rebecca, Brenda or Charlotte. Some variety every once in a while is welcomed by people from different parts of the world.
Maybe but I doubt that the majority of people playing this game live in Catalan or Valencia. You think?
 

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We've got to make dat ass bigger, or if you're bored make a bigger option or something you're the boss so it's your call; good work on the scenes so far. If I had one complaint it would be that the sex scenes could use some more dialogue to make the scene dirtier and last longer.

The writing doesn't really bother me though the English itself could use some (not a bunch) work. That includes the pacing, I don't mind; this is clearly a porn focused VN rather than trying to tell a tale.

The Point and Click was nice and simple, nothing to complain about; straight forward, easy to use, scheduled not overly complex, etc. The interactions were also welcomed with it's progression system in place, evolving the touch scenes or replaying sexual encoutners were the highlights in that regard.

I loved the scenes where she's exhausted that is definitely your strong suit or maybe I just discovered a new kink with the hair over her eyes and ruined and everything, who knows. The whole musk/steam thing is a nice touch as well as the lighting for the longer scenes, I think that's a very missed feature that I've only really seen ZaneSFM use along with a few others I can't name off the top of my head.

I look forward to the end of this game, and future games from you to come.

I'll spruce this up with my personal rating system and leave a review later.
 
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Demoness_Kiss

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big ass but not big boobs?

also the update is basically ONE big scene and that's it. ON let's not forget the "your save is from a previous version, you may want to replay everything for the third time(at least) just to make sure you don't have bugs"...i mean the game is ridiculous(bc with the hypnosis thing and the unexplained and sudden desire of MC's parents to have grandkids so much that they're willing to brainwash someone it's funny so for me the game is meant to be taken without going down in some deep philosophical mood) enough to be pleasant but...yeah...the content is okay-ish but the puzzle game could be easily removed including the pictures who are just a filler
 
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