fenris95

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But still reaching out to anyone in the community to proofread is easy enough.
I proof-read it, took about an hour. It needed changes about every fourth line of dialogue. Feel free to compare it to the original once you've unpacked it and give me some feedback if you have the time.

I have no idea how to create a drag-and-drop patch out of it so the game will need to be unpacked first.

I've attached the edited script.
 
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fenris95

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Aug 14, 2018
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other than a single choice to "watch" near the end this is a kinetic novel...i was really hoping for a game :( so disappointed because it looks so damn good and the story is interesting...hohumm..
Still early days, this feels like it's just setting up the story. Given the dev's previous game (which somehow I have not played), I wouldn't be surprised if branching paths are in the works.
 
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