VN Ren'Py My Best Deal [v3.1] [Pirot King]

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Shelscott50

Shelscott50

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Seriously?? The dialog is Horrid, almost laughable!
(I have to seriously fight No to turn game Off!)
Which is sad, because It IS kind of a Cool game.
I was playing this game back when it was 1st released.

- David is a perverted IDIOT!!
(David's sisters Need to gang up on him; lock him in chastity, and make him their Bitch!)
Sister's - "You like Our dirty panties so much? Maybe you should wear them!"

-the Dev COULD make the MC use "control" magic on David, and make him less of a Creep.
(better yet; make David forget that they were ever friends.)

- The DEV Is 'fighting'/ trying too hard, in fact, to make Our MC a "Good guy" (Mr. Morality).
That the MC Is ACTUALLY a pathetic wimp! (Too 'wishy-washy') What the Hell were the Goddesses thinking??
(the MC cannot even use the 'be Dominate'/"control" magic without being a Pussy!)

- LMAO! I Would Hate to see this 'power' in the hands of David.
(Sadly, even David would have a BETTER Grasp of 'how to USE the magic', however perverted, than the MC.)

I Generally dislike "alpha male" MC's, or even AM wanna-be's; but THIS Game could REALLY Use One.
- just because Our MC is the protagonist does NOT make him an Alpha male!!

The BEST and Brightest of this Game are the Girls!!
Selene & Hecate; MC's Mom & sisters; the 2 teachers; Annie & David's sisters(??)
- the Dev cannot even keep the Dom teacher's name straight.
Is it Mrs. Collins or Ms. Collins?? (He used both) I don't see a ring on her finger,....
 
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hailstorm79

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akiostein said:
thanks for the update pirot king i love you more than my ex-girlfriend. Good game.
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Funny would say that... I almost love this game as much as my Ex-wife, it's fun at the start, but then it goes nowhere... At least my Ex endef it... Pirot King just keeps everybody spinning and reeling in... There are nasty divorces that can't be as long as his developing... round and round and nothing comes out... Probably another Isctor or ICCreations. I'll pay him a coffee when he finnishs both of his games. until then, keep leaching on suckers like I was for the previous ones.
 
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Shelscott50 said:
Seriously?? The dialog is Horrid, almost laughable!
(I have to seriously fight No to turn game Off!)
Which is sad, because It IS kind of a Cool game.
I was playing this game back when it was 1st released.

- David is a perverted IDIOT!!
(David's sisters Need to gang up on him; lock him in chastity, and make him their Bitch!)
Sister's - "You like Our dirty panties so much? Maybe you should wear them!"

-the Dev COULD make the MC use "control" magic on David, and make him less of a Creep.
(better yet; make David forget that they were ever friends.)

- The DEV Is 'fighting'/ trying too hard, in fact, to make Our MC a "Good guy" (Mr. Morality).
That the MC Is ACTUALLY a pathetic wimp! (Too 'wishy-washy') What the Hell were the Goddesses thinking??
(the MC cannot even use the 'be Dominate'/"control" magic without being a Pussy!)

- LMAO! I Would Hate to see this 'power' in the hands of David.
(Sadly, even David would have a BETTER Grasp of 'how to USE the magic', however perverted, than the MC.)

I Generally dislike "alpha male" MC's, or even AM wanna-be's; but THIS Game could REALLY Use One.
- just because Our MC is the protagonist does NOT make him an Alpha male!!

The BEST and Brightest of this Game are the Girls!!
Selene & Hecate; MC's Mom & sisters; the 2 teachers; Annie & David's sisters(??)
- the Dev cannot even keep the Dom teacher's name straight.
Is it Mrs. Collins or Ms. Collins?? (He used both) I don't see a ring on her finger,....
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Dude.... 200% correct. If you don't wanna do a game, just keep it in your drive. If you just wanna test the waters, release it and take it ... But take patrons for this garbage... It's an insult to amazing or even good developers.
 
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ontach

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The only one I'm here for is Annie - TBH I would have liked her boobs to be small and perky but even with the ones she's got she's pretty darn cute. :love: Rin is the resident nympho/ slut. David provides comic relief - what an ass. :ROFLMAO:

I'm fine with the MC not using Hecate's power indiscriminately - he doesn't trust her and suspects that he'll have to pay a heavy price for using her power. She is far from being upfront about it and he is right to be cautious. Maybe he should use the power of love more - could lead to funny situations like if he used it on Annie's father he'd have to get out of there quickly to escape her father's amorous intentions. Or he could make the goons fall in love with each other - to the disgust of their boss. :ROFLMAO:
 
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Sadly, I have to agree with several others. The game is getting stale. We need real progression, in story and in the relationships. There is a difference in slow burning and stagnating. This has dipped into the later. Rin is great, but she's become the "minimum" lewd in every update. Very few chances of the powers have been offered, even if its a small way to keep it interesting. Character development has barely moved forward other than the "soap opera" style of update ending (and most likely it will take three steps back). I really liked the premise, but it's becoming tedious.
 
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Nice to see Emily show up though I wonder if anything is different for those who didn't kick that imbecile David to the curb. Hopefully content involving her doesn't require keeping him around because while hot she's not worth that.
 
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wep said:
Personally i don't think that the game is bad at all.

However i must agree with some of the comments above.
The entire premise of the game with the two goddesses (and the first releases) seems give you the choice to follow two different paths (corruption or love). In the most recent updates you can't use Hecate's power in some key points of the plot where corruption in clearly a possible solution. You are locked on love and/or a "good" approach.

This is the problem IMHO. It creates a big fracture in the MC personality and overall story/previous choices.
Because you have a character that used corruption/domination before to solve minor problems and now suddenly don't for more important stuffs. It is not coherent.
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I Don't Know,... I don't really have a problem with the 2 powers. It is a matter of how the MC will make "Use" of them.
(It is like a gun, or any other tool. The Gun is neither Good nor bad, it is how the person uses it.)
The "Love" magic is pretty straight forward, but the MC Does not use it to its full capacity.
(ONLY used it on his immediate family & Annie.)

The problem Is The MC. He has No 'personality' to speak of. He is pathetic & small minded.
(He is too busy with the "I, I, I; Me, Me, Me.")

- The MC complains about Not being able to See/visit Selene's 'world' enough,...
(Well, IF the MC was Not So wrapped up in 'his own little world', and use the "Love magic" more broadly; He could visit her more.)
- The 2nd power "control" can have more Damning effects If Not used correctly or abused
(Which Is Exactly what Hecate wants the MC to do)

(Imagine What Ms. Collins or David would do If they could use the "Control" magic)
- Ms. Collins would have an Entire college full of Slaves & sex pets. get control of the Admin.
- David would/could bend the mind of his sisters to love and Want him. build his own harem of sluts.
use the control magic on the MC (submissive slave), and on his own mother (sex slave).
 
Shelscott50

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Cernunnos. said:
Nice to see Emily show up though I wonder if anything is different for those who didn't kick that imbecile David to the curb. Hopefully content involving her doesn't require keeping him around because while hot she's not worth that.
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I agree to a certain extent. I would have liked to see more Emily content (brought in sooner).
I also 'kicked David to the Curb' (mostly because of the panty theft incident) and because He was irritating.
 
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Shelscott50 said:
I Don't Know,... I don't really have a problem with the 2 powers. It is a matter of how the MC will make "Use" of them.
(It is like a gun, or any other tool. The Gun is neither Good nor bad, it is how the person uses it.)
The "Love" magic is pretty straight forward, but the MC Does not use it to its full capacity.
(ONLY used it on his immediate family & Annie.)

The problem Is The MC. He has No 'personality' to speak of. He is pathetic & small minded.
(He is too busy with the "I, I, I; Me, Me, Me.")

- The MC complains about Not being able to See/visit Selene's 'world' enough,...
(Well, IF the MC was Not So wrapped up in 'his own little world', and use the "Love magic" more broadly; He could visit her more.)
- The 2nd power "control" can have more Damning effects If Not used correctly or abused
(Which Is Exactly what Hecate wants the MC to do)

(Imagine What Ms. Collins or David would do If they could use the "Control" magic)
- Ms. Collins would have an Entire college full of Slaves & sex pets. get control of the Admin.
- David would/could bend the mind of his sisters to love and Want him. build his own harem of sluts.
use the control magic on the MC (submissive slave), and on his own mother (sex slave).
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I suppose we are talking about the same "problem" (lol i can't really use that word talking about a porn game).

The MC is not using his powers (especially the corruption) at their full extent . This is a legitimate moral stand of course, but it should be a choice left at the player. If teh dev want to limit the use of powers, this should be done using a trick (energy/level of power...) .

With the present structure several players fell forced on one path by the dev.

I'm fully aware that too much freedom could destroy a game since the number of paths could increase exponentially, but other games have handle this problem better.

To be clear i still think that the game is nice and the dev is really working hard. This is the only reason why I spend time talking about possible ways to improve it.
 
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Drkgy

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incest lover m/s said:
my list of games waiting for sex between m/s is huge and it keeps getting bigger lol

this one has been on my list for a long time.. who knows in another year
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the next update will be mostly all about Molly, I hope this is the update in which it finally happens
 
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not bad update, bit short, story not advancing anywhere, useless chat with goddess (devil in disguise), bit sex and kinks.

scrshots:

1. - 4. rin's "great" ideas, 5. - 7. well she asks and she receives.

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