For me even tho it's still at a teasing phase I very much loved the Sue scene in this update was still hot. I know you dont like slow burn very much and want to get to the action already. I do very much like how it isn't being rushed in this game however that is what kills most incest games or relationships for me in AVN's. Tho I do wish she did suck his dick at least since she has done done before haha. Tho I don't think it will be very long till she gives in I give it 3 updates before she has sex with him I think.
But the scarlett stuff did suck and she is the only character I like besides the mother
This is not a super slowburn which I hate. This is a reasonable pace imo but I agree she could have at least gave him a BJ. That's also why I said I'll come back too this VN in the future to see how this story develops.
To me a Good VN has sex scenes that are so hot and exciting, you can't wait to get to the next scene. Like Dstalker it has a Ton of sex scenes but each one is hot as all hell and you can't wait to see where the characters and story go. When writers tease and tease and tease it makes you wonder if they know how to write a hot sex scene or if we will get some vanilla crap in the end.
The hottest scene is this VN so far to me was Randall and Lucia, it gave Randall a backbone and it showed emotion and excitement in Lucia which was hot. It was a scene that left us wanting more, it was not a scene that made me want to see less of Lucia, it had exactly the opposite affect. Max may not have been well liked but at least he added some flavor some spark to this VN other than "Oh boy I think they may do it this time" between Randall and Sue.
Hopefully the writing gets better.
