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Peri3481

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The writing was pretty good for most of the time, the story is great, but I just got to this scene in the living room where the MC reveals to Zoey that he convinced Luke to let them get together and the writing quality dropped BAD.

This kind of dialogue is terrible, this speech style where people describe extensively what they're thinking and how they feel about the conversation is unrealistic, annoying and ALWAYS off character. No one has this level of clarity in a conversation, this only happens if the dialogue is being thought out thoroughly, by a writer trying to clarify how people feel. I'm still a lot into the game but this whole scene feels like a drag, I can only hope this is temporary...
Yes, at some point I think the dev got another writer involved and the tone changed radically. There can be something kinky about taboos being broken and dominance asserted in a tone that sounds more like a tea party. But they didn't nail it here. It's not clear to me whether the same writer is still involved in present and future updates.
 
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DrScribe

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I tried going to the main menu but it does not let me enter the incest codes?
Dev says the code for it has been removed from the patreon version so no code input even with console commands, you would have to either mod it or get the SubscribeStar version. Patreon is weird about stuff
 

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