Just finished the game, after reading all the comments about Tori. It's a great game. Just grindy enough to remind you that you're playing a management game and not a visual novel. Management games, whether they are harem or not, are my jam.
As for all the fuss about Tori, I don't get it. You used the wife's capture as a plot device, which is simple and straight-forward. It gave players a goal to strive for and a final boss fight as well. It wasn't the most innovative choice, and certainly falls into the
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, but for crying out loud it's a fictional pornographic story. It's not going to be Bechdel-test friendly. I think your writing is great, especially all the little events along the way, and the models are very good, too. Looking forward to you next game. Don't let these haters get you down.
Edited to add: I am putting my money where my mouth is, and subscribing on Patreon. I would wager that the complainers are not subscribed, so their advice on how you should make your games is worth exactly what they are paying to offer it to you.