VN Ren'Py Abandoned My First Teacher [v0.04.03] [MrEvo Games]

[dylanwwww]

Finally something simple with a simple title

 

[vultron]

My P.E. teachers ass in yoga pants was the only thing that made being forced to learn yoga bearable.

 

[botc76]

I'm sorry if I hurt your feelings. The game was shown for this purpose in order to simplify and improve the plot. I will definitely fix this in the next version

Maybe it's time to accept that you aren't much of a writer and team up with a better one who can flesh out your story, while you continue to provide the renders and direction?

I don't mean to dis you, it's a serious advice, because a story about a milf teacher seduced by her pupil is kinda hot and your renders and characters are fine, but the writing is very close to unbearable.

 

[Drgnlvr526]

Searched the room every day from waking up to sleeping and haven't found the key. Going on a week and only thing I can do is wash hands and search teachers room and find nothing

 

[Malkovichi]

Any sex content here??

 

[Frank01]

End womens sufferaging!

 

[rspkers]

So many snowflakes in this thread, jesus fucking christ.

How this guy portrays women drivers (which is a totally legit stereotype) in a FUCKING PORN GAME that literally puts you in a male-centric fantasy fictional story with idealized body proportions is the LEAST of my concerns.

The writing is atrocious and nothing seems to make logical sense, and there's really no content, so I'm dropping this. That's my two cents. Renders are pretty decent, and the teacher has a pretty unique face which I like, that's about it.

 

[BitterFrost]

. it appears that the teacher is a kind and self respect woman and smart that can't let a stranger enter a house where happens her daughter livs in... its like she dont give ashit about that mc might hurt her or her daughter

Because the MC is a schoolboy she has been teaching. The unrealistic part of this is going to be the sexual shenanigans the MC gets up to, not that good people help young people in need.

 

[BitterFrost]

I wish the developer would number the releases in a better fashion. First of all, the entire game is so shaky it's a 0.1 alpha. Second, the jump from 0.2 to 0.3 was bugfixes. That's not an 0.3, it's an 0.2.1

 

[MrEvo]

Well, it's not 0.3 and 0.03 that is, the difference is 10 times less
The text has been verified grammatical application. He put the dots everywhere

 

[maxal]

Waist of time !

 

[Liner_Master]

how to talk to rachel? nothing much to do

 

[MrEvo]

how to talk to rachel? nothing much to do

The next version there will be have dialogue with Rachel

 

[Liner_Master]

The next version there will be have dialogue with Rachel[/QUOTE

So basically in this update MC will meet rachel then no more activities; though i can't speak to helen or do any activities other than wash up.
hope coming update have some more action

 

[fortuna95]

Good idea to patch teacher as his aunt. So it's more realistic she invites him home.

 

[MrEvo]

Good idea to patch teacher as his aunt. So it's more realistic she invites him home.

I can makes her a good friend mom. May open vote will help choose.
Only justify his stay. In fact, I already wrote why she took him home. It was only for one night.

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

Honestly, I didn't think there would be such a reaction. I will definitely correct this.

My comment was in jest. Don't change anything because of my snarky comment. lol

 

[Hot Man]

since cub of tea in kitchen with teacher and show her daughter no any thing can i do, her room search and nothing found, daughter closed her room, wash up with cold water and sleep. no more action.
please what can i do?

 

[fortuna95]

since cub of tea in kitchen with teacher and show her daughter no any thing can i do, her room search and nothing found, daughter closed her room, wash up with cold water and sleep. no more action.
please what can i do?

it's easy, just read previous posts!

 

[MrEvo]

Solved, the plot will be last modified. Everything was taken into account, there will be no major changes.
Until February