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All sounds like a good direction to me. I like that even with Netorase being consensual to all involved- there are still things out of their control that spice things up- such as the flood giving a great opportunity for some SNS video/image posting- a staple in NTR works for good reason- And perhaps depending on path some things lost in translation... Anytime our MC can only imagine what's happening- or wonder if there's anything happening at all- is a strong development for the genre. Moreso in NTR works than Netorase but great in both. The perspectives are all there for whoever wants to view each- so it'd be interesting finding things out in one route that heroine or mom/grandma kept secret or just happened to not mention.. I was interested in the android identifying the human semen- so I thought maybe in that route something was kept hidden- but it seemed to be referring to times with the boyfriend quite a bit before?... Strange but whose to say how strong these android sensors are. Anyway- pretty interested in the manipulation scheming route of Stilyo if that's going to be her thing- maybe setting up events that are traps to create distrust or get a moment of time alone with one or the other. I happen to really like her design visually as well.
Anyway- Apologies since I am sure you've explained all that multiple times through the other 20 pages- but I really don't want to search through everything looking for answers and just wanted to throw my thoughts down on paper somewhere.
Anyway- Apologies since I am sure you've explained all that multiple times through the other 20 pages- but I really don't want to search through everything looking for answers and just wanted to throw my thoughts down on paper somewhere.