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okey.
let's think
why Hucht is alone ?
He’s clearly bored and looking for/waiting for someone.
Maybe Chris sent Vivian on a job, and Hutch went along for company—unknowingly cuck.
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Now that I realize he is in a shirt and tie, I think Christian brings him to the strip club after work, to give Viv a chance to get ready for her date with the mayor...... or not, just a thought
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The story is being developed very well. The comment timeline is growing very quickly and there is even a lot of material for DEV if he doesn't have a script structure. Having material and a path that can give the old beginning, middle and end. After the good of another great game going into "PAUSE" mode and having to read a "complaint block". With this one, have the reserve of parsimony. Especially because DEV doesn't even have a Patreon. He has already stated that it is something "alternative, like a hobby" and is not "making plans" he is just "getting carried away".
But. He has a great "Game/Story" to tell us. Very high quality graphics. I like the way the animated sequence was constructed, it is his personal signature.
If I were to personally give him something close to advice, I would. Make the story without "stretching beyond the pragmatic" and create sequences that create alternatives but without building "too many characters" within the same story. Don't think about "pleasing everyone" but follow your idea and creative imagination.
But. He has a great "Game/Story" to tell us. Very high quality graphics. I like the way the animated sequence was constructed, it is his personal signature.
If I were to personally give him something close to advice, I would. Make the story without "stretching beyond the pragmatic" and create sequences that create alternatives but without building "too many characters" within the same story. Don't think about "pleasing everyone" but follow your idea and creative imagination.
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Or could be setting him up to cause more problems in the marriage. Maybe he fucks a stripper Christian tells Vivian now Vivian fucks with no remorse.
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thats very hard for Hutch it doesnt matter what agreement Christian and Vivian have this Holding hand in such way is not being played and go beyond a simple fuck. Vivian doesnt respect Hutch anymore in that moment. otherwise she would at least not hold the hand. But maybe is the continuation from your storyline assumption not exact and that belongs to another secuence.
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Although I kinda like the little fight she puts up, make Christian work a little bit, lol
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I think the situation at the party will break the couple completely.
Hutch will look for Vivian in the house. She fucks Christian in the meantime. Hutch calls her on the phone, Vivian doesn't care about him anymore. When they are done, they leave the room hand in hand and just walk past Hutch.
Hutch will look for Vivian in the house. She fucks Christian in the meantime. Hutch calls her on the phone, Vivian doesn't care about him anymore. When they are done, they leave the room hand in hand and just walk past Hutch.
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I've been thinking about where i last saw a similar story and character portrayal.
After searching my archives I found what I was looking for.
However, the ones from SC Stories are much better in terms of quality and story.
After searching my archives I found what I was looking for.
However, the ones from SC Stories are much better in terms of quality and story.
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It's not Sawyer. It's Hutch in the evening when he returns home after being M.i.A.!
Overall really goos approach!
At the nudie bar, welcome to the No Ma'am club...
I think, going forward, each update will be about 3 days or so.
Like, with the 0.2 version, there were 6 days, and if we split it in half, then it makes it 3 days per 0.1. Oh, and looking at the clothes she wears in the previews, it does seem like events span about 3 days.
So, I'm pretty confident that coming updates will mostly go with 3 days of content. And, I think that's a good approach to telling a story, rather than the AWAM .001 upates that only contain a scene or two, within the days that guy has planned out with that game.
I do look forward to seeing what 0.3 has to tell.
Like, with the 0.2 version, there were 6 days, and if we split it in half, then it makes it 3 days per 0.1. Oh, and looking at the clothes she wears in the previews, it does seem like events span about 3 days.
So, I'm pretty confident that coming updates will mostly go with 3 days of content. And, I think that's a good approach to telling a story, rather than the AWAM .001 upates that only contain a scene or two, within the days that guy has planned out with that game.
I do look forward to seeing what 0.3 has to tell.
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I agree here for the most part. One thing that may be worth factoring in is Hutch's mood. He's not even touching Vivian most of the time - pulling his hand away when she tries to hold it, basically ignoring her in all the bedroom scenes, etc. If anything happens with some of the other characters we've met so far, like the mechanic, I wonder if it will be out of frustration born from Hutch ignoring her. Since she's opened the gates, and Hutch has opened the marriage (even though I don't think he meant it this way, I think he might have thought it was for Christian only), she could take the opportunity to relieve that frustration elsewhere - since she keeps getting the subtle (or not so subtle) offers...
I like this, and think it would fit pretty well actually. As someone else said, I think that's Hutch, not Sawyer, so I don't think that one bit fits in. I'm guessing the render you title "negotiations preparing" is from the same scene as Cigarette Smoking Man (we've gone full X-Files here), it looks like the same background from a different angle - an outside deck with a hottub.
Well, I think this is the correct sequence:
(1) She arrives for her "date". (2) But, the mayor immediate treats her like some kind of paid-for whore. (3) And, in that middle pic, she's fucked on the table. (4) She has regrets, and slips her dress back on. (5) gets back home (after staying the night at some guy's place as that other guy said), and this is her breaking her promise about returning.
I think that sequence makes sense like that.
(1) She arrives for her "date". (2) But, the mayor immediate treats her like some kind of paid-for whore. (3) And, in that middle pic, she's fucked on the table. (4) She has regrets, and slips her dress back on. (5) gets back home (after staying the night at some guy's place as that other guy said), and this is her breaking her promise about returning.
I think that sequence makes sense like that.