Let me tell you first, this is one of my favourite game. and when I say favorite there is only few including WVM, Haley's story, Alexandra...
And this is just my opinion and more like a suggestion. I think this version I feel kind of missed story dept, the anticipation. Well there is something missing in Lucy's first time and Becca & Sandra threesom. I feel it just become another Lewd scene only, and it's not MNF actually. And in Lucy's there is still a story and talking but Becca & Sandra threesom just became another sex only, nothing special. Not their first together or Mom-Daughter thing nothing. Just plain sex without any dept or anything special about it. I wish you didn't forced it because you think we need more lewd scenes, because most doesn't play this for that, most play for the story and that's why your game is interesting.
And I do have another suggestion too; can you include more bdsm with Fiona and more of her with D/s lifestyle (and if possible love with Domination). With Fiona it's something different for MC, and something special.
And thank you for the effort buddy, I know you trying hard and doing a great job. I thought you'll appreciate giving you honest feedback. And take break if you need it buddy, you and MNF is awesome