VN Ren'Py My Office [v1.3] [Summer Witch]

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Summer Witch

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Overview:

In"My Office" you play a young man who moves to a big metropolis, Hired by RiverApp, one of the largest companies in the App market. On your way to a brilliant career, create friendships, and develop love interests in an attempt to distance yourself from the shadows of the past. But as in life and the workplace, nothing is just black and white.​

Thread Updated: 2023-01-30
Release Date: 2022-11-11
Developer: Summer Witch - - -
Censored: No
Version: 1.3
OS: Windows, Mac
Language: Italian, English
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BaasB

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Nice renders, the rest needs some work, but you got a solid start.

Summer Witch
Mac link is PC as well
 
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Trasher2018

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Thanks, I was also pointed out yesterday and I immediately got to work, to change the name and possibly reload the file. I also check the links that are exact and add in a post below. Meanwhile, I change the banner.

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Because the filename of that image is in Italian ... why not just use the Italian name?

L'ufficio or Ufficio

Dont know if that is bad for PR, but maybe better than all the same names :p

I havent played the game, but maybe just use something out of your story instead of that generic title.

Referring to the overview, maybe something like ... The RiverApp Chronicles, The RiverApp Story, RiverApp Tales.

Or just add a generic adjective to it ... ^^
The nubile office
The lewd office
The sultry office
The salacious office
 

SpyderArachnid

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It was... not bad? Not good either though. Translation is really rough and some parts aren't translated at all.

I kind of get what was going on, but it was really rushed. Like, you jump from scene to scene so quickly without any filler in between. Large gaps between stuff where you could put some slice of life things and to help with the flow of the story more. But right now, it is just jumping around so much that it becomes disorienting trying to follow along. Along with a white flash each time the scene changes which I know a lot of people will dislike.

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Overall though, it needs some work. I can see what you're trying to do and looks like it could be interesting. I know it's weird, but it definitely needs more filler content in between scenes to help with the abrupt transitions from jumping from place to place. And the translation needs work if you want this to go far. As for the name change, Trasher has some good ideas there with the RiverApp stuff (naming it after the company and such). Will help with making your game more unique.

Thanks regardless though and best of luck with your game. ;)
 
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Chimba

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Dev a list of the planned tags would be nice, in "Genre Spoiler".
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Btw,are the fetishes/kinks going to be avoidable(they don't happen according to player choice)skippable (they happen but the player doesn't see the scene)or forced by plot maybe?

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Anyways good luck.
 
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Content_Consumer

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Thanks, I was also pointed out yesterday and I immediately got to work, to change the name and possibly reload the file. I also check the links that are exact and add in a post below. Meanwhile, I change the banner.
If you wish, we could 'brain-storm' some ideas?

"9 to 5" [as in the hours of normal white-collar work?]

"Office Life"

"The only way is up"

I'm sure others will have better ideas.
 

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Summer Witch

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First of all, thank you all. As for the name I did not know the game in question and I had never seen it, but as I was notified yesterday I proceeded to change it (thanking those who have looked for valid alternatives today :)). I updated both the Links and the initial post with the change. As for future tags, I'm interested in the following: Footjob, Handjob, Incest, Lesbian and NTR content, but only at the player's choice (at least on some). My desire is to create a linear story, which can branch out to other things, according to the player's taste. As for SpyderArachnide, thank you very much, stopping me now was just to understand where to work more and on what. As for future traditions, I intended to use a "human" service at the end of the first chapter, for now my little knowledge and God-Google did the rest. He hoped he had answered everyone and for now thank you very much.
 

goulet1995

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First of all, thank you all. As for the name I did not know the game in question and I had never seen it, but as I was notified yesterday I proceeded to change it (thanking those who have looked for valid alternatives today :)). I updated both the Links and the initial post with the change. As for future tags, I'm interested in the following: Footjob, Handjob, Incest, Lesbian and NTR content, but only at the player's choice (at least on some). My desire is to create a linear story, which can branch out to other things, according to the player's taste. As for SpyderArachnide, thank you very much, stopping me now was just to understand where to work more and on what. As for future traditions, I intended to use a "human" service at the end of the first chapter, for now my little knowledge and God-Google did the rest. He hoped he had answered everyone and for now thank you very much.
people are going to want info on player choice atleast for some also if i can offer any advice it would be to make ntr completly avoidable if it happens off screen so you dont see it this still will likely anger harem fans and turn them off the game while providing choices that change a scene and likely alter some dialog is the best way to go if you are trying to make a game with bothharem and ntr
 
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