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My only issue with this game is her nips. They go from comically small, like a tack, to anime big during the sex on the beach scene and then back to comically small again. They are distracting in every scene.
Can any characters get pregnant yet in this game? If so, what is the extent of the pregnancy content?
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Apparently, somehow, the name of the game isn't descriptive enough for some.
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Oh, thanks for the heads-up! It seems a mod removed it already so all is good
Hope you have fun my friend, glad to see you're back!
I'm delighted to hear that, hope it was worth the wait!
Honestly? Badly, specially at the beginning. You see my friendIt could be a great game but what are the dev doing with the animations!?
At the start I was supposed to do this with a friend who's an artist and we were going to make a 2d game but he ended up pulling out yet I was already too into the idea to quit so I began to research ways to make it on myself and then just.. experimented
I'm painfully aware that the beginning of our game is rough. Yet I'd like to believe over time I've improved significantly!
And I hold out hope that perhaps one day I'll find someone to aid me on the rendering department, perhaps could lend me a hand remaking the beginning so it looks prettier even
Eitherway I hope you had fun friend
Oh this is quite likely my friend, thank you for bringing it into my attention!
Discord is always kept up to date if you ever wish to see how it goes my friend
Should I add this one to the OP?
Ah sadly my friend this one I'll keep as a single romance focus game! Yet I hope you can still enjoy it
Hm, I'll keep this in mind for the future my friend
HS2
Not yet my friend, you can begin the proccess yet it'll be for the lategame, albeit I want there to be some amount of content for it so that it's not only "hey i'm pregnant, woah I had it, very epic"
I think it could be rather wholesome to have a update or two just about the whole pre labour thing
We never forgot about you my friend!
- Nov 9, 2019
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I already reportedOh, thanks for the heads-up! It seems a mod removed it already so all is good
Hope you have fun my friend, glad to see you're back!
I'm delighted to hear that, hope it was worth the wait!
Honestly? Badly, specially at the beginning. You see my friend
At the start I was supposed to do this with a friend who's an artist and we were going to make a 2d game but he ended up pulling out yet I was already too into the idea to quit so I began to research ways to make it on myself and then just.. experimented
I'm painfully aware that the beginning of our game is rough. Yet I'd like to believe over time I've improved significantly!
And I hold out hope that perhaps one day I'll find someone to aid me on the rendering department, perhaps could lend me a hand remaking the beginning so it looks prettier even
Eitherway I hope you had fun friend
Oh this is quite likely my friend, thank you for bringing it into my attention!
Discord is always kept up to date if you ever wish to see how it goes my friend
Should I add this one to the OP?
Ah sadly my friend this one I'll keep as a single romance focus game! Yet I hope you can still enjoy it
Hm, I'll keep this in mind for the future my friend
HS2
Not yet my friend, you can begin the proccess yet it'll be for the lategame, albeit I want there to be some amount of content for it so that it's not only "hey i'm pregnant, woah I had it, very epic"
I think it could be rather wholesome to have a update or two just about the whole pre labour thing
We never forgot about you my friend!
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All right, another chapter. Time to get out pen and paper again.
It was a nice chapter overall, though I will say that there were a couple of things that distracted me way too much to probably feel the way I was supposed to. There are definitely improvements and things are getting sexier, which is always nice, but there are also still a lot of little things that add up.
Regardless, I'll be looking forward to what comes next.
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It was a nice chapter overall, though I will say that there were a couple of things that distracted me way too much to probably feel the way I was supposed to. There are definitely improvements and things are getting sexier, which is always nice, but there are also still a lot of little things that add up.
Regardless, I'll be looking forward to what comes next.
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Greetings once again friend
1º I actually used a proof reader! Do keep in mind where they appear, as there's plenty of times where the characters themselves make mistakes on their speech, albeit it is rather possible there are mistakes I myself comitted and were overlooked, thanks for bringing up to attention!
2º It's a sopranos reference indeed, if you have not seen it I wholeheartedly recommend it, it's a great show
3º It does have to do with the story and you got the interpretation right yet not the reasoning behind it
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4º This one is just personal preference, that's unironically how I speak too. It's also talked about in the plot how they're pretty much making out their own pidgin!
5º Hmm, it was supposed to be a meta commentary indeed but your analysis is quite good in this regard. If I had to answer I'd say indeed that a wormhole did it, time is kept vague for this reason like in a sitcom while it is assumed that the characters have lives outside the screen they are rarely taken into account once they are on it as to not leave the viewer too much in the dark
Yet I believe you've brought up a valid point so I'll do my best to address it
Once again, thank you for playing and I hope after all you had fun; see you soon friend!
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i absolutely love this game .. i hope you don't go and screw it by adding NTR to it ..... i'll hate you forever
Now, I had to go back and check and I don't see any difference. You made me laser focus on her tits for minutes! You monster! (Thank you
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It'll forever remain wholesome my friend!i absolutely love this game .. i hope you don't go and screw it by adding NTR to it ..... i'll hate you forever
I'm a man of taste and culture
Regarding some bad critics, everyone is entitled to their opinion. While it saddens me that some find the game subpar, I do hope they find some other which fullfills them, after all we are all here to have a nice time and taste is as varied as people
Very mean!
There probably is some mistake if he saw it, but probably not everyone would notice it as hard perhapsNow, I had to go back and check and I don't see any difference. You made me laser focus on her tits for minutes! You monster! (Thank you
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Yes i did read, understand and comprehend that this game is a single LI with no side action. Thats why i was lamenting and not being hopeful that there would be more women you could have since the other girls are enticing as well. Having said that i do appreciate your sarcastic and patronizing comment.
i think in this case dude its a if you don't like it just be quiet
Hey Gargarlley. I just finished playing through, and an accomplishment is I actually read through the dialogue unlike all the others that I just set to skip unseen text and get to the good bits. As a writer myself I very much enjoyed it not being the generic BS that is in nearly every other harem game and is instead a focused romance between the two. But I do not bring all praise.
1) the time between when you start and that first topless scene is a little to short imo. I get that if it takes 3 hours then some smooth brains will just drop it or do what I normally do though. This is a personal gripe cause I think you've done a good job so far.
2) Show don't tell. With all these nods to the past in here it would be a good idea for flashbacks. It doesn't have to be anything long if it doesn't have to be, but cutting to the past to show how their relationship developed would help tremendously in the believability of their relationship. I know this can be tricky though, putting them in places that would not completely break the flow of the story, but I do think with the speed at which they go from regular siblings to lovers this is mandatory to a degree. Not saying go ham at every reference, but a few here or there would do a lot of good.
And if you do take this advice, please PLEASE give us a flashback of the two getting into a sibling arguement and then the both of them feeling bad about it before fumbling apologies.
1) the time between when you start and that first topless scene is a little to short imo. I get that if it takes 3 hours then some smooth brains will just drop it or do what I normally do though. This is a personal gripe cause I think you've done a good job so far.
2) Show don't tell. With all these nods to the past in here it would be a good idea for flashbacks. It doesn't have to be anything long if it doesn't have to be, but cutting to the past to show how their relationship developed would help tremendously in the believability of their relationship. I know this can be tricky though, putting them in places that would not completely break the flow of the story, but I do think with the speed at which they go from regular siblings to lovers this is mandatory to a degree. Not saying go ham at every reference, but a few here or there would do a lot of good.
And if you do take this advice, please PLEASE give us a flashback of the two getting into a sibling arguement and then the both of them feeling bad about it before fumbling apologies.