KingFuzzy
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- Aug 3, 2018
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learn to comprehend, i was not talking about how there should be a relationship this time, just a better story flow.Pages upon pages clarifying Nikki IS NOT and will never be a love interest. The story is wrapping up now with one of the other women, the Nikki part is over.
As an example, imagine if in harry potter with all the prior build up, ginny walks up to harry, confesses and they decide to go out, than in the next paragraph she says they cannot be together and she already decided to go out with malfoy. it would be jarring, it would be lazy, and just downright poor writing without any context to explain why the sudden change of mind.