- Dec 24, 2021
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- Dec 24, 2021
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i totally agree sometimes that content gets too realistic and predatory and i nope the fuck out. this seems like the sister is in control and like i said she is 18
pfff im really fine with the game itself now even is only 15min play .but after the crappy gameday i had yesterday [i chelk alot of new and no so new games yesterday] this one isntthat bad ,only one thing is eating me and is the loli thing ,not bcs i dont like [mmm no i dont like but its is what it is]the problem is the model of the sister she looks like 12 at mostbut his mind and plots are from someone much much older.
- Jan 1, 2018
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I find it hilarious that a couple people are shit talking the story but where are the games and/or stories that they have made?
Exactly. Nowhere.
Exactly. Nowhere.
game worked fine 0 errors without patchthis was first play through. re-extraction of patch gave same errors.
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I'm not taking any sides here, but this is not a valid line of reasoning. You don't have to be a chef to say a meal was bad. You don't have to be a film director to dislike a movie. At most you are limited in your ability to make personal criticisms of the creator based on the work. This is not to say that all criticisms are equally valid; rather that the strength of the argument itself should be judged rather than the credentials of the critic.
Besides that, consumer-generated critique provides a useful service to both the creator and other consumers, helping the former to find and expand their audience, and the latter to find works that they may be interested in. There's no sense in getting defensive about it.
- Nov 22, 2018
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This is a bit of a mixed bag so far.
Relatively wholesome loli games are always welcome as far as I'm concerned, and Celeste is great. The overall quality of the renders is pretty good. There are no obvious problems with spelling or grammar (though a few sentences looked like they could use an extra comma).
However, some happenings in this game make little sense. Like how Z somehow needs to take a shower after failing to kick the MC. Why? There's no reason! Other than giving the MC an opportunity to walk in on her, I guess.
It was around the time that Roxy came along that I started to ask myself if this is a kinetic novel. Tags don't say so, but so far there are no choices at all. For example, I would have liked a choice to tell Roxy to fuck off, since I'm not a fan of games just randomly throwing a girl on your dick for no reason.
Finally, I think someone mentioned it briefly already, but during the scene with Celeste and her friends at school, it seems like Celeste is always looking at whichever one of her friends is not speaking. Probably a mix-up with the textbox portraits.
(version 0.1.1)
Relatively wholesome loli games are always welcome as far as I'm concerned, and Celeste is great. The overall quality of the renders is pretty good. There are no obvious problems with spelling or grammar (though a few sentences looked like they could use an extra comma).
However, some happenings in this game make little sense. Like how Z somehow needs to take a shower after failing to kick the MC. Why? There's no reason! Other than giving the MC an opportunity to walk in on her, I guess.
It was around the time that Roxy came along that I started to ask myself if this is a kinetic novel. Tags don't say so, but so far there are no choices at all. For example, I would have liked a choice to tell Roxy to fuck off, since I'm not a fan of games just randomly throwing a girl on your dick for no reason.
Finally, I think someone mentioned it briefly already, but during the scene with Celeste and her friends at school, it seems like Celeste is always looking at whichever one of her friends is not speaking. Probably a mix-up with the textbox portraits.
(version 0.1.1)
People complain about fake choices. Like having to click the only option 10 times. Or options not mattering because they change absolutely nothing.
Having the choice to reject a woman is not something people would complain about.
- May 6, 2019
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You are 100% correct about the portraits of the friends. That is my mistake (I didnt know which was which when I added the portraits. It will be fixed in the next update (either 0.2 or 0.1.2 if we find more bugs).
As for Roxy, well.... I agree it should have been a choice, but that was an oversight. To be honest, Roxy was mainly put in the game to shut up the people who would inherently bitch about "There were no sex scenes in the first release, TRASH GAME!!".
- Nov 22, 2018
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I had a hunch that Roxy was there for people like that, given how completely random and inconsequential that scene felt. Well, I hope it'll still be made optional in a later version. Nothing kills immersion faster than the MC just fucking a random stripper when I would have noped out of there...
- Aug 13, 2018
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It's the internet, people will complain no matter what! 
I like the mischievous younger room mate character and had a huge laugh
when her class mates where telling that they had to go home immediatley
because they had "plans" with first degree blood related male family members.
The twins' character models look great. Freckles and red heads.
The character of Z, at least for me, felt a bit stereotype. Like a certain kind
of character ouf of a japanese manga or something. Not that I mind,
it just felt kinda telegraphed! Ha!
Visuals a great. The english is good too.
All in all pretty neat so far.
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An edit: Hey MacroxssZ I don't wanna shit on your work or anything but the banner or header
or whatever the big picutre at the top of the posting is called, could use some love.
A better background, the character models brighter and bigger, dunno.
I like the mischievous younger room mate character and had a huge laugh
when her class mates where telling that they had to go home immediatley
because they had "plans" with first degree blood related male family members.
The twins' character models look great. Freckles and red heads.
The character of Z, at least for me, felt a bit stereotype. Like a certain kind
of character ouf of a japanese manga or something. Not that I mind,
it just felt kinda telegraphed! Ha!
Visuals a great. The english is good too.
All in all pretty neat so far.
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An edit: Hey MacroxssZ I don't wanna shit on your work or anything but the banner or header
or whatever the big picutre at the top of the posting is called, could use some love.
A better background, the character models brighter and bigger, dunno.
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- May 6, 2019
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To be fair, I am to blame for the title screen image. Also to be fair to me, the original was kinda ass too, but the new one didnt come out much better. I gave him the idea for the layout of the characters, but it didnt come out how I pictured it in my mind. Also, I had no fucking clue with what to put as the background, so the white messed it up even more.It's the internet, people will complain no matter what!
I like the mischievous younger room mate character and had a huge laugh
when her class mates where telling that they had to go home immediatley
because they had "plans" with first degree blood related male family members.
The twins' character models look great. Freckles and red heads.
The character of Z, at least for me, felt a bit stereotype. Like a certain kind
of character ouf of a japanese manga or something. Not that I mind,
it just felt kinda telegraphed! Ha!
Visuals a great. The english is good too.
All in all pretty neat so far.
________
An edit: Hey MacroxssZ I don't wanna shit on your work or anything but the banner or header
or whatever the big picutre at the top of the posting is called, could use some love.
A better background, the character models brighter and bigger, dunno.
The general idea of the image was to have C lining up the girls and shoving her brother at them. It just looked better in my head.
As for Z, Im pretty sure that was the intention.
Enjoying the game so far, please keep it up. I also appreciate the nod to Sherlock Holmes, one of my favorites.
- Feb 2, 2021
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Well this is a loli level that touches the baby level, she is what 7 or 8 at max!!!
But well the story writing level is for children of that age anyway, so it matches perfectly.
To say it short, we have a story about a loli written by some young teenager but at least the dad is not really dead, as it is the case usually, that's astounding!
But well the story writing level is for children of that age anyway, so it matches perfectly.
To say it short, we have a story about a loli written by some young teenager but at least the dad is not really dead, as it is the case usually, that's astounding!
- Apr 19, 2017
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I got the patch no I can't look at them I was nanny for 6 years just big hell nope on this one. Saw the tags and though "smols" its like no no this not that at all. Like I was a nanny this looks like 1st or 2nd gradders just hell no. How this isn't nuked just for legal reasons I got no idea. But yeah this is further then others have gone...
- Aug 13, 2018
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Ha, but that's actually a great idea and sums up part of the plot.
I don't know much about arranging and rendering but the frontal view might not
work for the pushing the protagonist towards something part. I think a sideview would
be better but lining up the girls in a sideview is crap too. Hm...so maybe group the girls
on one side together, maybe arms interlocked facing forward and then the protagonist
to the side being shoved by the younger room mate?
Argh I dunno. I am bad with such stuff. Mandatory arts class in school always gave me a headache.
Maybe get in touch with some of the awesome people who create signatures
on and for this board and put your heads together for something?
- Aug 14, 2018
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I've made a Mod for this game with mostly adding ingame music, renaming option (also for the sister) and some more game settings.
Dec 28, 2022:
Removed the links again. If interested it's still available on my homepage.
Dec 28, 2022:
Removed the links again. If interested it's still available on my homepage.
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