VN Ren'Py Abandoned My Virgin Bride [v0.13] [Sukebe Sensei]

[mythor55]

here is my thoughts its freaking NTR... closing your eyes and pretending is being cucked to me that falls under NTR. it is either 100% avoidable meaning you interrupt it before it happens and tell who ever the other guy is to fuck off and dont come near her again. if something like that is not a option and you can not stop it you are not being given the choice. since the game is new this has to be set in stone now before the game is built up and would require being redone from the start. I personally hate NTR but i will not stop others from enjoying that fetish as long as I have the option to avoid it 100% of the time. someone said something about a teacher fingering her... if there is avoidable ntr that would not happen by my choice cause if it did i would break his damn fingers.

CUCKHOLDING is not NTR.

NTR means NETORARE.
It's a genre of adult manga or hentai. It should be defined as CHEATING/Unfaithful/Adultery.

It is too often INCORRECTLY defined as "

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". However true readers of the genre know that cuckholding is just a sub-element and a fetish. A fetish where one likes to watch their significant other,

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(usually sexual) with another person.

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(

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) however the a bf/gf/wife/husband Do Not have to make a appearance in the story whatsoever. They often Do Not Ever find out about the betrayal. In some

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the cheated on individual may in up in a situation where they are forced to watch there significant other cheat on them. To go slightly further. Some ntr is known as

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. This can also be defined as Cheating. Ecxept it's from the point of view of the individual stealing away the heart of someone already in a relationship. Once again the gf/bf/wife/husband never has to make a appearance in this type of story.

 

[CookieMonster]

I just want to give a shout out to Sukebe Sensei, who actually likes review feedback to his/her game, whether or not it is positive, the feedback seems to be taken in stride. As such, I would like to think Sukebe Sensei is the relatively modest mannered developer who seeks to take all criticism in a constructive manner.

That said, not everything in the game is rosy, and there is certainly room for improvement. However, it is just the first release, and all but one path of the game is still on day 1, so not much has changed since the initial release, which in my recollection, seemed to be a bit rocky.

It's a welcome change though to have a humble developer, and I look forward to seeing how the game improves. As such, I hope that the reviewers will revise their reviews in subsequent updates of the game, should it get better, to properly reflect the effort the dev is taking from personal time, on a non-patreon-funded hobby project, and to give it the appropriate nuance and space it deserves in light of those constraints.

 

[mythor55]

Oofh, don't, the broomstick shit happened to a girl in my country and made headlines, poor girl died, raped and killed with the broomstick still in her vagina when her body was found.

That made me sad and proves that the reality is sometimes more cruel than the fantasy.

 

[JB08]

Lmao virgin bride, pick shy innocent angel type A personality who fears sex and instantly she was a cheerleader of all things in a slutty outfit dating sharquon football linebacker feeling her ass up haha Ok. And her friend Sara a party hard type girl..perfect match. She even goes to church.

Uninstalled. Cuck games are so weird. Should have read the tags.

 

[desmosome]

I mean.. we're talking about SharQuan here. Tyrone's got nothing on this mortal kombat character sounding ass ni..

 

[Sukebe_S]

I just want to give a shout out to Sukebe Sensei, who actually likes review feedback to his/her game, whether or not it is positive, the feedback seems to be taken in stride. As such, I would like to think Sukebe Sensei is the relatively modest mannered developer who seeks to take all criticism in a constructive manner.

That said, not everything in the game is rosy, and there is certainly room for improvement. However, it is just the first release, and all but one path of the game is still on day 1, so not much has changed since the initial release, which in my recollection, seemed to be a bit rocky.

It's a welcome change though to have a humble developer, and I look forward to seeing how the game improves. As such, I hope that the reviewers will revise their reviews in subsequent updates of the game, should it get better, to properly reflect the effort the dev is taking from personal time, on a non-patreon-funded hobby project, and to give it the appropriate nuance and space it deserves in light of those constraints.

Thanks, Cookie Monster! I really get a lot out of the feedback, both positive and negative. Some people seem very satisfied and eager for more, while a lot of other people are expressing their frustrations and disappointment. There's a lot of passion and energy all around, and getting a sense of people's collective reactions are shaping my tentative plans for the other storylines. While I love getting kudos, I also love knowing that the story is challenging people and subverting their expectations. If glowing reviews were all I got, I'd probably get bored and move on.

This is definitely a learning experience for me, and I want to improve a lot. The number one thing I want to improve is speed of updates (6 months is pathetic, let's be honest), but I'd also like to improve the artwork and Ren'Py design. If anyone has any critiques or suggestions along those lines, I'd love to hear it. And of course, kind words, harsh words, keep it all coming. It all helps make this project better.

Thanks again for the kind words,

SS

PS: Of all the muppets on Sesame Street, I always found you to be the most compelling and relatable.

 

[bradleycooper69]

Dev, small thing, but could you fix all "masterbate" and "masterbated" to masturbate?

 

[Sukebe_S]

Dev, small thing, but could you fix all "masterbate" and "masterbated" to masturbate?

OK... all while writing this, I'd initially spell it with a 'u' and then think it looked funny, so I changed it to an 'e.' Then I'd look at it again and say, "Yeah, that looks right. E is the way to go." It bugged me for awhile, but then I decided "don't be bothered--maybe it's a british vs american spelling thing, they're probably both correct." And then I said, "besides, no one's gonna notice."

Well. Someone DID notice. So I just now did what I should've done in the first place and googled the spelling. You're right--it needs the U.

Fuck.

Anyway, I'll run the find/replace thing on the script and fix all instances for future releases.

Thanks for keeping me on my toes! (And zero thanks go to my elementary school teachers who never brought the word up in spelling tests. )

 

[daniel199707]

actually it will be better to change a bit the background story for each personality type.

the shy angelic girl should start as a nerdy quite girl for example not as cheerleader.

 

[bradleycooper69]

I don't see a problem with shy-nerdy type being a cheerleader. You guys watched too much porn (yeah, I realize where I am). Being a cheerleader does not equal being a slut. She just likes to dance, maybe she considers dancing being her career in the future, or just a passion/hobby. Not everything has to be a movie(or porn) cliche. Just my opinion.

 

[Onceaday]

Wow the sheer variety in paths is amazing. Though I feel some people might be dissapointed with the amount of content each release. If you make it clear exactly how much time it takes I think people will understand and really enjoy the game. I think this could be one of the best games just because you have so much choice.

 

[clairdelune]

soooo the ntr is avoidable? Some say that it is avoidable, others that it is not, so I don't understand very well... I don't wanna hurt my feelings

 

[CookieMonster]

soooo the ntr is avoidable? Some say that it is avoidable, others that it is not, so I do not understand very well... i dont want to hurt my feelings

Join the darkside... don't have cookies, but we have boerewors in those peking duck tacos.

 

[lilliaa]

I don't see a problem with shy-nerdy type being a cheerleader. You guys watched too much porn (yeah, I realize where I am). Being a cheerleader does not equal being a slut. She just likes to dance, maybe she considers dancing being her career in the future, or just a passion/hobby. Not everything has to be a movie(or porn) cliche. Just my opinion.

herm.... you don't know many nerd right?
Or maybe it's just my country? (where cheerleader doesn't exist.)

 

[KyoriKusagami]

soooo the ntr is avoidable? Some say that it is avoidable, others that it is not, so I don't understand very well... I don't wanna hurt my feelings

Some ntr scenes aren't avoidable because "close your eyes" doesn't stop anything, it just makes more clear how coward the MC is. If you don't like ntr, for now, I recommend you to stay away from this game.

 

[clairdelune]

Some ntr scenes aren't avoidable because "close your eyes" doesn't stop anything, it just makes more clear how coward the MC is. If you don't like ntr, for now, I recommend you to stay away from this game.

Cool Man! Thank you!

 

[Policanov]

I think it is the first time that someone dares to include in their game the option of seeing or not seeing the harem part
Congratulations!

 

[Allamante]

Woaa.. lots of content depending on the paths you choose. Really need to explore all options.

 

[changeling]

Very nice update. Keep up the good job.

 

[Deleted member 770309]

Maybe later! Right now, there's not too many choices, so it shouldn't be too difficult to find your way to the various endings of Day 1.



I'm sure it'll be a mess! But hopefully a hot mess. And a fun one.



Yeah, sorry about that. I revised the "genre" section to reflect what's currently there (or fantasized about, or spoken about in dialogue) and also show what I'm planning on putting in.



I don't have the end game all fleshed out yet, but there's many possible endings on the table! I'm interested in jealousy and competition for girls. Sometimes that means the triumph of victory, and other times the agony of defeat. And it also means antagonists do things the protagonist (and by extension the audience) don't like.

As for the MC being a beta, yep. He's currently a perfect gentleman who would never leverage power over a lady in need. He's got some life-lessons in his near future. I'm more interested in seeing him grow as a character than in him starting out a fully-fledged alpha.



I see the Vanilla routes as being more straightforward competition for and seduction of a girl. The Rocky Road will be pedal-to-the-metal toward various kinds of bonkers corruption. As an ice cream connoisseur, I find I enjoy both flavors depending on my mood.

In some parts of the world, there is something even blander than vanilla: "milk-flavored ice cream." I don't waste my time with that, but I'm glad it exists for those who enjoy it.

That does not mean he has to be a god damn pathetic beta. And NTR in all the paths again another joke no man can be this much of a beta who is ok with letting there wife get touched up. The renders look good but the story seems like it will be a beta NTR cuck fest with worthless choices and beta male MC shame.