- Mar 21, 2020
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- Mar 21, 2020
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From the Dev's page:
Hello guys, it's been a while, I had to delay a big part of the update thanks to an arthrodesis surgical procedure I was submitted to and I thought my recovery would be faster, as for this update I focused on reworking a few of the U.I elements and taking the game's plot to its first arc which is the inner trial. I added a few scenes to help to explain the game's background story and also added a few songs to it.
I am working on the next update and we can expect it to be completed around the last week of the current month.
Also, saves from the demo aren't compatible due to the changes made in the U.I and variables in-game, I am sorry about this but it won't happen from now on.
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Hello guys, it's been a while, I had to delay a big part of the update thanks to an arthrodesis surgical procedure I was submitted to and I thought my recovery would be faster, as for this update I focused on reworking a few of the U.I elements and taking the game's plot to its first arc which is the inner trial. I added a few scenes to help to explain the game's background story and also added a few songs to it.
I am working on the next update and we can expect it to be completed around the last week of the current month.
Also, saves from the demo aren't compatible due to the changes made in the U.I and variables in-game, I am sorry about this but it won't happen from now on.
A promising start! I found the plot engaging and the characters interesting.
It reads like the author's first language is not English, though - there were lots of times lines felt a little awkward. Minor example: it's strange for a student to say "teacher" directly to a teacher. "Sir", "Ma'am" or "Mr/Mrs (last name)" is better, but since all the characters are 18-21 so far you might want to go with "Professor". Another one - "Check Hecate/Emily" - I didn't grasp from that that I would be ogling them! "Check out" would be clearer, but even then, "Glance at" or "Look at" would be even more so. "I am on" for playing a game should be "I'm in", "End Roam" would be a clearer as "Stop Roaming", "You have a heavy sleep/ha ha, I do" should be "You're a heavy sleeper/haha, I am" and so on.
Also, it would be nice to have texting dialogue show up differently from speech.
It reads like the author's first language is not English, though - there were lots of times lines felt a little awkward. Minor example: it's strange for a student to say "teacher" directly to a teacher. "Sir", "Ma'am" or "Mr/Mrs (last name)" is better, but since all the characters are 18-21 so far you might want to go with "Professor". Another one - "Check Hecate/Emily" - I didn't grasp from that that I would be ogling them! "Check out" would be clearer, but even then, "Glance at" or "Look at" would be even more so. "I am on" for playing a game should be "I'm in", "End Roam" would be a clearer as "Stop Roaming", "You have a heavy sleep/ha ha, I do" should be "You're a heavy sleeper/haha, I am" and so on.
Also, it would be nice to have texting dialogue show up differently from speech.
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- Jul 13, 2021
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So, I did the first playthrough and I am liking the game. I am wondering if you can get to Class A, but that will be something I will work on with the more serious plays. I have to say, it is a good story, like the Percy Jackson homage without it being a parody. It has some interesting work done with it, though I am wanting more. This is a good start that I hope stays story based and not a channel for lewd scenes just to have lewd scenes. There does seem to be the chance to do it all story based.
- Nov 23, 2017
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I think when this game get's more updates, it'll accumulate more patron's. The big issue with Patreon is that unless you outright search for specific content, there's a 99% chance you won't come across things like adult VNs, ESPECIALLY new ones. This is why sites like this are extremely beneficial to the adult vn creators, because without these types of sites, they'd never get the support they deserve.
- Jul 13, 2021
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I have seen where someone has won the fight, but I believe that you will still end up in Class B. I think this is because of an earlier dialogue where someone was wanting you to be teamed up with Alexis for the trials. That could mean the fight could be winnable, but you still end up with her in Class B. This is not a guarantee, but I have seen no word from the developer and the scene is in the game.
- Sep 16, 2020
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I'd take any 51'er that looks like her! Sexy babe, no sags or crow's feet...
Great update but now I'm hot to trot for Mom, how are you gonna work that in???
If this game gets monthly sizable updates I can see myself throwing money at it, could use a bit more spice though...
- Jan 9, 2021
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First fight is a always lose, the second you can win.
use spheres, let her attack, make water armor, think that made me win that fight, but i guess you need to spend the weekend picking the right choices to be able to cast the water armor (i jogged, practised water magic or studied when available)
You can.... i won the fight (second fight with Alexis) and presume did well enough on the written test...