Nice! I'm going to toss my opinion about a couple of things into the mix, but over-all I think this was a great start.
Others mentioned needing a proofreader, but I didn't think it was bad at all. There were some typo's/grammar issues but nothing outrageous or game-breaking. I'm a native English speaker (USA version of English anyway), and barely noticed.
I would like to see more info about the *prostitution ring*, and why it is there, in future releases but that is just a curiosity thing on my part. Seems unnecessary if the story does go the harem route, and maybe a waste of creation time, but it could also have a significant impact/bearing on the story. For all we know they are all daughters of Dionysus & gain power from sex acts..../shrug. I just hope it isn't there as gratuitous filler, and that it will have something to do with the story.
Those 3 war-starting letters (but can be equally applied to any *sensitive* content really): In my opinion as a reader/player that will never become a Dev, write the story you want to tell. Make clear now what content you are including/planning, and stick with it. Don't suprise-add stuff later on. Fans of your work will remain with you, and those that are put-off by any type of content will be a lot less bitchy if they are not already invested in the story before it gets added.
I think you will save yourself a LOT of stress and headaches that way.
One tiny complaint/critique; the black travel arrows can be very difficult to spot on some of the background images. You may want to consider either highlighting them in some manner, or changing the color (unless there is already a setting that does this, and I missed it....always a possibility with me).
That is about it. Like I said before; I think you are off to a really solid start, and I am looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Good Luck!