Another great update! I think the pace of the whole story-line is just fine. Like everyone else who creates episodic novels, I can picture
Jikei has a whole wall of post-it notes going forward a few months in the VN that plans out who is focused in future updates and when/how their plots play out in the flow of the game. I had hoped that the last room of the Manor would get an occupant now and one of the "side" girls get promoted to "main", but I'm happy with the turnout and the way New Lark City is becoming unveiled.