- Jun 11, 2017
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People into ntr on a thread for an ntr game....shocker! Maybe you're secretly a cuck too since you're here
Ren'Py Nemesis Party: NTR, or NOT [v0.08.1 Hotfix] [NemesisGames]
- Thread starter NemesisGames
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Interesting update. Has some of the best looking scenes, but the worst grammar. At least with the route with the most logical developments, the dialogue on the cuck route is quite... weird to say the least. Specifically when and if other's get to it, the shower scene where Mr. Ntr cucks you, and Emma is a blithering pile of hormones.
But as far as things go...
Emma: Her scenes currently look the best, but are a haphazard meter of okay to bad quality based mostly on the writing or direction for her motivations. I will thank the dev for making her earlier choices less convoluted, but status updates happen so late, or in consequence of other choices, it was hard knowing when I made the right choice. I thought the handy foreshadowing previews at the end of certain turns was helpful, but it proved wrong when I tried focusing on Lily.
Lily: I feel like getting her route was harder, because while doing Emma/Abbie, it kepts saying I was going to get her new NTR tit fuck. I was going to aim for that on a seperate duel save where I alternate between getting her NTR, and stealing her, but okay. But when I got to the scene, it was the ntr, without the full titfuck. I thought I miss saw, so I checked files and saw there was an actual animation. To keep things short, I figured out what I was missing in both points and the needed item to fuel the titfuck, but the preview image suggested I had it synced, and didn't change even when I made the necessary changes. So it felt weird the new help system sort of lied for Lily. Worked well for emma (vanilla route had an issue, but her vanilla is boring to me imo). Overall like Emma, Lily had weird mental changes, and writing that seemed at odds with her earlier self, but like before I wasn't interested, now with both her Vanilla/Ntr scenes I'm actually sort of interested?
Abbie: Honestly I tried giving her a go, but I just don't like her. Nothing about any of her potential plot lines or scenes interest me. If it was more possible to sacrifice her to the bully to make it easier, or to lock off another girl from him, she would be my grenade. Her dialogue oddly was the best of the update so far...
Tara: Dev it's probably too late to add this now, but after everything I've seen from this character, she 100% would've been better as a black girl. This could be a weird take, but with how she looks now, especially her hair, as a white female she looks horribly off putting, but only in the present moment. Her past self is fine, but her current look, how she dresses, and how she acts, she feels like the whitest girl trying to be black that I've seen in awhile. It just feels really cringe to see her on the screen with how she looks. As a side point besides the photo on the bully's phone, I'm surprised you didn't try to have at least one active black girl at the party. All criticisms aside her shared scene with Emma/ace was decent, but damn it feels weird focusing on her ass so much so I don't have to feel like she is about try like a black girl to try and seem cool.
Jasmine doesn't have anything worth talking about right now(scene wise), but I appreciate her character(cruel/hot older sister? Hell ya), she is a great addition to an otherwise mostly white girl party.
Overall the game I think feels really rough, and even less intuitive even with your addons. The fact that the rumors haven't amounted to much (yet...), every character has to be checked for new options every turn (when finding out who I could offer alcohol to, Lily was one, but so was Emma! Except her button when pressed didn't do anything so I thought I did something wrong and tried it on her two other paths), and the character dialogue is all over the place....
I think this is definitely worth watching, I think it's interesting what you're trying, but you haven't made it super comfortable for people to get into. I think refining can definitely come later if you have another release with this level of advancement in other character plots. Once you get to a point where multiple characters have almost reached the lock in for the MC, or the lock in for the NTR, definitely go back then to refine things.
But as far as things go...
Emma: Her scenes currently look the best, but are a haphazard meter of okay to bad quality based mostly on the writing or direction for her motivations. I will thank the dev for making her earlier choices less convoluted, but status updates happen so late, or in consequence of other choices, it was hard knowing when I made the right choice. I thought the handy foreshadowing previews at the end of certain turns was helpful, but it proved wrong when I tried focusing on Lily.
Lily: I feel like getting her route was harder, because while doing Emma/Abbie, it kepts saying I was going to get her new NTR tit fuck. I was going to aim for that on a seperate duel save where I alternate between getting her NTR, and stealing her, but okay. But when I got to the scene, it was the ntr, without the full titfuck. I thought I miss saw, so I checked files and saw there was an actual animation. To keep things short, I figured out what I was missing in both points and the needed item to fuel the titfuck, but the preview image suggested I had it synced, and didn't change even when I made the necessary changes. So it felt weird the new help system sort of lied for Lily. Worked well for emma (vanilla route had an issue, but her vanilla is boring to me imo). Overall like Emma, Lily had weird mental changes, and writing that seemed at odds with her earlier self, but like before I wasn't interested, now with both her Vanilla/Ntr scenes I'm actually sort of interested?
Abbie: Honestly I tried giving her a go, but I just don't like her. Nothing about any of her potential plot lines or scenes interest me. If it was more possible to sacrifice her to the bully to make it easier, or to lock off another girl from him, she would be my grenade. Her dialogue oddly was the best of the update so far...
Tara: Dev it's probably too late to add this now, but after everything I've seen from this character, she 100% would've been better as a black girl. This could be a weird take, but with how she looks now, especially her hair, as a white female she looks horribly off putting, but only in the present moment. Her past self is fine, but her current look, how she dresses, and how she acts, she feels like the whitest girl trying to be black that I've seen in awhile. It just feels really cringe to see her on the screen with how she looks. As a side point besides the photo on the bully's phone, I'm surprised you didn't try to have at least one active black girl at the party. All criticisms aside her shared scene with Emma/ace was decent, but damn it feels weird focusing on her ass so much so I don't have to feel like she is about try like a black girl to try and seem cool.
Jasmine doesn't have anything worth talking about right now(scene wise), but I appreciate her character(cruel/hot older sister? Hell ya), she is a great addition to an otherwise mostly white girl party.
Overall the game I think feels really rough, and even less intuitive even with your addons. The fact that the rumors haven't amounted to much (yet...), every character has to be checked for new options every turn (when finding out who I could offer alcohol to, Lily was one, but so was Emma! Except her button when pressed didn't do anything so I thought I did something wrong and tried it on her two other paths), and the character dialogue is all over the place....
I think this is definitely worth watching, I think it's interesting what you're trying, but you haven't made it super comfortable for people to get into. I think refining can definitely come later if you have another release with this level of advancement in other character plots. Once you get to a point where multiple characters have almost reached the lock in for the MC, or the lock in for the NTR, definitely go back then to refine things.
- Sep 29, 2017
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i want the mc to also be dom and he should also be able to corrupt and depending on the route the mc should be bigger or smaller dick
This is one hell of a buggy mess, heck you literally can't even go back to the main menu from the end game screen using the button.
- Mar 9, 2021
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Is the "cheating" choice in the poll talking about girls cheating on the MC (without overt cuckoldry/humiliation focus), or is it talking about the MC banging a bunch of chicks?
- Feb 16, 2019
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What kind of stupid poll is this? I like BDSM but don’t like femdom, I like humiliation but don’t like cuckolding. And how can I answer it if one thing contradicts the other?
- Jan 11, 2024
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This is the buggiest game Ive ever played. its poorly designed and difficult to navigate. the visuals are mid. I dont know who is giving this 5 stars but theyre crazy this is not a good game
Glad we got some Emma content after so long between updates. Can't wait to see her pussy get pounded
- Nov 17, 2022
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Is there a walk through for this VN to find the ALL of the netorare content? Just seems very hard to find the netorare content....