Update teasing us with the whole choice to let Nathan cum inside her, and taking her anal virginity. Hopefully, not too far down the line she stop taking birth control and get pregnant.
Also, some critics:
1. Text description on scene are starting to drag too long. Some of the alure is not know every single little detail. Benefit is that you don't have to waste time writing long in depth detail for scenes, and use that extra spare time to write more variety into the branching path instead; This also make your choice more unique and meaningful.
2. Need more scene with GF friend. These path should of started when you introduce the GF to other men, and not so late into the game. Depending on choice, you end up banging friend, stranger, and Nathan female friend.
3. Nathan cool and all, but maybe some stranger in between when she go out with her hussy. Stranger scene, like her first attempt to sleep with other men. GF seem like she's pretty use to sleeping with Nathan now, so about now is a good time to start adding random stranger into the mix.
4. Add a 3rd hidden value as too how careless GF can potentially be when stranger start coming in. They might even be the first to cum inside her base on her careless value, or take her anal virginity. Hell, if pregnancy get introduce down the line, maybe they are the one who get to impregnate her. (Unknown father achievement?) (Nathan father achievement?) (MC father achievement?)
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