VN Ren'Py New Coral City [S2 v0.4] [HoneyGames]

[Alfius]

Good Lord... Tell me the script dialogue is at least as good as this grammatical masterpiece...

So here is my opinion on his grammar:
(Sorry HoneyGames, you know I love your games and you work your ass off being not a native English speaker)

The grammar in his games is not the best. But...you can 90% of the time deduct one 100% what the character is trying to say. The essence of what your choices will boil down to, is actually very clear. You can also clearly deduce the feeling the NPCs are trying to get across, along with facial expressions.

For this game, it's actually very important, as your character interactions is like no game I have ever played on this site. Your interactions with characters and how that effect other characters is simply amazing. So even though the grammar is far from perfect, it's good enough to immerse yourself fully in this game.

I have played some other games with Engrish that is basically unplayable, but I believe it comes down to bad script/writing.
"Hi, I are Peterz. You looks like hot. Let's fuck slut.....OK, I love you dick"

This game is not good in the English department, but the writing/script is good. Try imagining that you are in a country of foreigners, and everyone speaks to you in English, but it's not perfect, and with a heavy accent. That's what the game feels like for me.

TLDR; The English in this game is not perfect, but it's good enough to enjoy this masterpiece fully.

 

[Burt]

That was the description of season one. A year and a half ago.
New Coral is the sequel of that game
I'm obviously not a native English speaker, but I think the game is written in a better way than that old description.

I am obviously not a native English speaker but I find your game to be impressive considering it's not your born language
To be honest I find your game good enough to be a subscriber which I have been for a while.

 

[HoneyGames]

So here is my opinion on his grammar:
(Sorry HoneyGames, you know I love your games and you work your ass off being not a native English speaker)

The grammar in his games is not the best. But...you can 90% of the time deduct one 100% what the character is trying to say. The essence of what your choices will boil down to, is actually very clear. You can also clearly deduce the feeling the NPCs are trying to get across, along with facial expressions.

For this game, it's actually very important, as your character interactions is like no game I have ever played on this site. Your interactions with characters and how that effect other characters is simply amazing. So even though the grammar is far from perfect, it's good enough to immerse yourself fully in this game.

I have played some other games with Engrish that is basically unplayable, but I believe it comes down to bad script/writing.
"Hi, I are Peterz. You looks like hot. Let's fuck slut.....OK, I love you dick"

This game is not good in the English department, but the writing/script is good. Try imagining that you are in a country of foreigners, and everyone speaks to you in English, but it's not perfect, and with a heavy accent. That's what the game feels like for me.

TLDR; The English in this game is not perfect, but it's good enough to enjoy this masterpiece fully.

Now that I'm checking out the whole game, I'm also working out some dialogue. There are moments when I was reading and thinking: "what the f*ck did I write?"

 

[Kaftan]

OK so I'm looking for some kind of walktrough or cheat mode for this game. I'm playing android version and I'm at the end of second week... With broken nose, out of cash since Yoshijust stolen almost everything and heartbroken since my friend slept with hot chickMellisa .
But somehow that massive horse chick Yvette was attracted to me.... Ehh why

 

[HoneyGames]

OK so I'm looking for some kind of walktrough or cheat mode for this game. I'm playing android version and I'm at the end of second week... With broken nose, out of cash since Yoshijust stolen almost everything and heartbroken since my friend slept with hot chickMellisa .
But somehow that massive horse chick Yvette was attracted to me.... Ehh why

hahahahahahah.
It's not possible to make a walkthru. (check the older post to understand why, I don't want to bother the other people repeating the same things dozens times.)
I'm checking the game, fixing some issues and making various hints during the game so it will be easier to understand how to behave:

 

[Alfius]

OK so I'm looking for some kind of walktrough or cheat mode for this game. I'm playing android version and I'm at the end of second week... With broken nose, out of cash since Yoshijust stolen almost everything and heartbroken since my friend slept with hot chickMellisa .
But somehow that massive horse chick Yvette was attracted to me.... Ehh why

Some pointers to help you out with these 2 characters.

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[yggdral]

Don't worry, the game will still the same game. you'll have the same freedom and the same paths. but it will be a little bit easier to understand what are you doing and I'll add some little things here and there. Mostly I'll rework the way the variables works and the sex scenes. And I fix some "Storyline bugs" like Kirsten and Martina. I'll make Yvette and Luana available also if you avoid the after party at Maud's home (obviously it COOULD be a little bit harder to get em.)


For David Irene, your relationship with him have a lot of influece in his relation with Irene.
Ifor example: if you're in a good relation with him and you say him that you like Irene his stats with Irene go to 40. if you're in a bad relation his stats go to 80. Then... there are other things about it.

Can we still use old saves in next version?

 

[yggdral]

My First Attempt..
Sorry if it's a little mess, i tried..

 

[Someguy01]

So, I haven't gone thru all 50 pages of the thread, but when the game starts there's a long intro that details the month before, is there actually a way to PLAY thru that, or is that just all setup and can't be changed?

 

[HoneyGames]

Can we still use old saves in next version?

It should be. I'm not really sure if I'll not mess up something
But I suggest tu play from schratch. Iìm adding various things and I'm keeping a different tracking of the choice, so playing from and old save you could not trigger some future events.

 

[Alfius]

So, I haven't gone thru all 50 pages of the thread, but when the game starts there's a long intro that details the month before, is there actually a way to PLAY thru that, or is that just all setup and can't be changed?

That's a prequal game Follower. The original is in Unity...Avoid that... There is a Renpy version that is quite good.

Definitely recommend that game. And it gives you some more insight about some of the current Characters
(Irene, Rebecca, Meadow, Andrea and Kirsten)

And why all of them are pissed off at you. (Except Meadow)

 

[Someguy01]

That's a prequal game Follower the original is in Unity...Avoid that... There is a Renpy version that is quite good.

But even if you do that, there's no transfer of save data right? The game will still start exactly like it does now? That was my primary concern, starting off with shitty relationship stats if there was a way to actually do "better" somehow.

 

[Alfius]

But even if you do that, there's no transfer of save data right? The game will still start exactly like it does now? That was my primary concern, starting off with shitty relationship stats if there was a way to actually do "better" somehow.

Yes, if you played the prequal or not, has no effect on the starting stats of the game.
It basically just gives you a lot more insight into the characters in the game.
Irene is the biggest example. If I did not play the follower, I would not have cared about Irene, other then she looks pretty cute.

There is no stats transfer, The Follower is a sandbox type game. So while the game is challenging, the story is pretty linear.
Think Big Brother, Man of the house type game.

So the end of the Follower is the starting scenario of this game.

 

[HoneyGames]

But even if you do that, there's no transfer of save data right? The game will still start exactly like it does now? That was my primary concern, starting off with shitty relationship stats if there was a way to actually do "better" somehow.

Follower has only one ending, different things can happen but in the end the ending will always be that one. I did it this way because by doing it I learned some things about how to structure a game and instead of starting it from scratch I decided to give it a unique ending and start the story with the new structure with a season 2.

On New Coral, however, you'll immediately meet new characters (or ones that appeared on Follower as side characters) with whom you'll have a good relationship. (each Follower side character that appears in New Coral City is introduced with a small flashback in case there have been any important events)

That kind of data recovery between different seasons will be done between season 2 and season 3. (Since in season 2 I'm planning different endings for most of the characters. I'm still working on it but the final project is that)

 

[MrDL]

So giving this another go, aside from the cleaning stuff up and hints and all that I really hope is a big improvement over the English (especially the gender pronoun usage) and the dialog as a whole along with a new font for the text, I've finally gotten use to it but that goddamn "e" was driving me nuts.

 

[Squeeleboy]

The versions I've released today have fix for most of the bugs (I didn't fixed yet a couple of things about Martina and about Yvette but I'm recoding somepart of the game and I'll release a new version partially rebuilded with 1.3)

This may explain why I can't date her properly. I play version 1.1. I don't know the day, maybe 66, There is the same bug, we see a movie, I chat with her and after the statistics (before sex scene), I come back to the main screen. But the game continue when I choose to meet Luana. It's a bit disappointing, I have to neglect her, It's my only choice to continue the game. I cheat on her or there is a bug. However, as I have already said, I will wait the fix.

Anyway, I see another bug when I fuck Luana, in the hotel room. When I choose anal, there is a loop and stamina is reloaded (I can't go to zero). So... she's very happy but it isn't normal.

But the game is very good after all. I note some problems but it isn't criticisms. I would like to do as well. I wish you the best and I hope the next update can solve problems.

 

[HoneyGames]

This may explain why I can't date her properly. I play version 1.1. I don't know the day, maybe 66, There is the same bug, we see a movie, I chat with her and after the statistics (before sex scene), I come back to the main screen. But the game continue when I choose to meet Luana. It's a bit disappointing, I have to neglect her, It's my only choice to continue the game. I cheat on her or there is a bug. However, as I have already said, I will wait the fix.

Anyway, I see another bug when I fuck Luana, in the hotel room. When I choose anal, there is a loop and stamina is reloaded (I can't go to zero). So... she's very happy but it isn't normal.

But the game is very good after all. I note some problems but it isn't criticisms. I would like to do as well. I wish you the best and I hope the next update can solve problems.

Yeah, the home movie bus shuold been fixed in new version I've released.
With the next version the game will be rebuild from schratch, Iìm also adding some events and rerendering (or rephotoshop) some scenes.
All the sex scenes will different.
I'm sure it will be way better. (unfortunately you should heve to play it from schratch, I mean, you also could use your old save files but probably you'll not able to trigger some events in the future

 

[MrDL]

Keep getting errors during sex scenes, just did the Zoe bar one and now with Ashley.

At the start.

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.


While running game code:

  File "game/s 22 ashleysex.rpy", line 13, in script

    menu:

  File "game/xxsexscreen.rpy", line 43, in execute

    screen ashleysexscreen():

  File "game/xxsexscreen.rpy", line 43, in execute

    screen ashleysexscreen():

  File "game/xxsexscreen.rpy", line 44, in execute

    frame:

  File "game/xxsexscreen.rpy", line 53, in execute

    text "AshleySatisfaction: [ashleysatisfaction]" xpos 10:

NameError: Name 'ashleysatisfaction' is not defined.


-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------


Full traceback:

  File "game/s 22 ashleysex.rpy", line 13, in script

    menu:

  File "G:\*\*\*\*\New Coral City\NCC-1.1-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 1609, in execute

    choice = renpy.exports.menu(choices, self.set, args, kwargs, item_arguments)

  File "G:\*\*\*\*\New Coral City\NCC-1.1-pc\renpy\exports.py", line 977, in menu

    rv = renpy.store.menu(new_items)

  File "G:\*\*\*\*\New Coral City\NCC-1.1-pc\renpy\exports.py", line 1203, in display_menu

    rv = renpy.ui.interact(mouse='menu', type=type, roll_forward=roll_forward)

  File "G:\*\*\*\*\New Coral City\NCC-1.1-pc\renpy\ui.py", line 289, in interact

    rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)

  File "G:\*\*\*\*\New Coral City\NCC-1.1-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 2690, in interact

    repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, **kwargs)

  File "G:\*\*\*\*\New Coral City\NCC-1.1-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 3074, in interact_core

    root_widget.visit_all(lambda i : i.per_interact())

  File "G:\*\*\*\*\New Coral City\NCC-1.1-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 534, in visit_all

    d.visit_all(callback, seen)

  File "G:\*\*\*\*\New Coral City\NCC-1.1-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 534, in visit_all

    d.visit_all(callback, seen)

  File "G:\*\*\*\*\New Coral City\NCC-1.1-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 534, in visit_all

    d.visit_all(callback, seen)

  File "G:\*\*\*\*\New Coral City\NCC-1.1-pc\renpy\display\screen.py", line 424, in visit_all

    callback(self)

  File "G:\*\*\*\*\New Coral City\NCC-1.1-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 3074, in <lambda>

    root_widget.visit_all(lambda i : i.per_interact())

  File "G:\*\*\*\*\New Coral City\NCC-1.1-pc\renpy\display\screen.py", line 434, in per_interact

    self.update()

  File "G:\*\*\*\*\New Coral City\NCC-1.1-pc\renpy\display\screen.py", line 619, in update

    self.screen.function(**self.scope)

  File "game/xxsexscreen.rpy", line 43, in execute

    screen ashleysexscreen():

  File "game/xxsexscreen.rpy", line 43, in execute

    screen ashleysexscreen():

  File "game/xxsexscreen.rpy", line 44, in execute

    frame:

  File "game/xxsexscreen.rpy", line 53, in execute

    text "AshleySatisfaction: [ashleysatisfaction]" xpos 10:

  File "G:\*\*\*\*\New Coral City\NCC-1.1-pc\renpy\text\text.py", line 1479, in __init__

    self.set_text(text, scope, substitute)

  File "G:\*\*\*\*\New Coral City\NCC-1.1-pc\renpy\text\text.py", line 1598, in set_text

    i, did_sub = renpy.substitutions.substitute(i, scope, substitute)

  File "G:\*\*\*\*\New Coral City\NCC-1.1-pc\renpy\substitutions.py", line 244, in substitute

    s = formatter.vformat(s, (), kwargs)

  File "/home/tom/ab/x64lucid-deps/install/lib/python2.7/string.py", line 563, in vformat

  File "/home/tom/ab/x64lucid-deps/install/lib/python2.7/string.py", line 585, in _vformat

  File "/home/tom/ab/x64lucid-deps/install/lib/python2.7/string.py", line 646, in get_field

  File "/home/tom/ab/x64lucid-deps/install/lib/python2.7/string.py", line 605, in get_value

  File "G:\*\*\*\*\New Coral City\NCC-1.1-pc\renpy\substitutions.py", line 203, in __getitem__

    raise NameError("Name '{}' is not defined.".format(key))

NameError: Name 'ashleysatisfaction' is not defined.


Windows-8-6.2.9200

Ren'Py 7.2.2.491

NCC 1.1

Sun Jan 19 17:59:14 2020

Choosing Doggy.

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/s 22 ashleysex.rpy", line 252, in script
    menu:
SyntaxError: unexpected EOF while parsing (game/s 22 ashleysex.rpy, line 281)

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/s 22 ashleysex.rpy", line 252, in script
    menu:
  File "G:\*\*\*\*\New Coral City\NCC-1.1-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 1609, in execute
    choice = renpy.exports.menu(choices, self.set, args, kwargs, item_arguments)
  File "G:\*\*\*\*\New Coral City\NCC-1.1-pc\renpy\exports.py", line 943, in menu
    condition = renpy.python.py_eval(condition)
  File "G:\*\*\*\*\New Coral City\NCC-1.1-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1959, in py_eval
    code = py_compile(code, 'eval')
  File "G:\*\*\*\*\New Coral City\NCC-1.1-pc\renpy\python.py", line 690, in py_compile
    raise e
SyntaxError: unexpected EOF while parsing (game/s 22 ashleysex.rpy, line 281)

Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 7.2.2.491
NCC 1.1
Sun Jan 19 18:03:27 2020

Another, not sure if it leads to a scene or not...

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/02 day 76.rpy", line 250, in script
    scene 17 18 01 01
  File "renpy/common/000window.rpy", line 95, in _window_auto_callback
    _window_hide()
  File "renpy/common/000window.rpy", line 85, in _window_hide
    renpy.with_statement(trans)
IOError: Couldn't find file 'xRainroom.mp3'.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/02 day 76.rpy", line 250, in script
    scene 17 18 01 01
  File "G:\*\*\*\*\New Coral City\NCC-1.1-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 1255, in execute
    statement_name("scene")
  File "G:\*\*\*\*\New Coral City\NCC-1.1-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 45, in statement_name
    i(name)
  File "renpy/common/000window.rpy", line 95, in _window_auto_callback
    _window_hide()
  File "renpy/common/000window.rpy", line 85, in _window_hide
    renpy.with_statement(trans)
  File "G:\*\*\*\*\New Coral City\NCC-1.1-pc\renpy\exports.py", line 1578, in with_statement
    return renpy.game.interface.do_with(trans, paired, clear=clear)
  File "G:\*\*\*\*\New Coral City\NCC-1.1-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 2240, in do_with
    clear=clear)
  File "G:\*\*\*\*\New Coral City\NCC-1.1-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 2690, in interact
    repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, **kwargs)
  File "G:\*\*\*\*\New Coral City\NCC-1.1-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 3360, in interact_core
    renpy.audio.audio.periodic()
  File "G:\*\*\*\*\New Coral City\NCC-1.1-pc\renpy\audio\audio.py", line 1019, in periodic
    six.reraise(exc[0], exc[1], exc[2])
  File "G:\*\*\*\*\New Coral City\NCC-1.1-pc\renpy\audio\audio.py", line 997, in periodic_thread_main
    periodic_pass()
  File "G:\*\*\*\*\New Coral City\NCC-1.1-pc\renpy\audio\audio.py", line 938, in periodic_pass
    c.periodic()
  File "G:\*\*\*\*\New Coral City\NCC-1.1-pc\renpy\audio\audio.py", line 420, in periodic
    topf = load(self.file_prefix + filename + self.file_suffix)
  File "G:\*\*\*\*\New Coral City\NCC-1.1-pc\renpy\audio\audio.py", line 72, in load
    rv = renpy.loader.load(fn)
  File "G:\*\*\*\*\New Coral City\NCC-1.1-pc\renpy\loader.py", line 576, in load
    raise IOError("Couldn't find file '%s'." % name)
IOError: Couldn't find file 'xRainroom.mp3'.

Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 7.2.2.491
NCC 1.1
Sun Jan 19 18:15:20 2020

 

[HoneyGames]

Keep getting errors during sex scenes, just did the Zoe bar one and now with Ashley.

At the start.


Choosing Doggy.



Another, not sure if it leads to a scene or not...

thse error are fixed in the last version I've released. exept the last one.
The last one I put the wrong name to the mo3 files. you can ignore the error. there will be no music. I fix it now for the next releases

 

[Kame-Sennin]

Melissa as one of the best girl of honeygames next to Astrid, her scene in this game is trash, when will she get update ? and also is there a way to win her over David, damn she is very hard to get but her scenes not worth it