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salpeter1964

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Just gave it a try and I love it! Georgia is a very distinct and special character, all other characters are well elaborated too. The story is not too fast in terms of lewdness. The renders are great. Saved it in my list for future updates.
 
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buff

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Good game! Hope you stick with it, your imagery is really nice. This is one of the few porn games where the main is the most interesting girl in the menu, instead of being overshadowed by the later additions. You also made the MC a reasonable, if somewhat bland, character; that is head and shoulders among the aggressive assholes and clueless morons that usually populate these games.

I'm a little worried that you've introduced so very many characters so quickly, as that sort of thing usually slows development to a crawl (especially if you start adding branches, so you need to create several hours of gameplay for most players to enjoy a single hour). There is enough interesting sexual tension around that I want to see what happens.
 
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BarbarrossaNA

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Played it.. had a blast. Renders and story were pretty good and I had a lot of fun running it thru a couple of times to get as many pictures unlocked as I could. Looking forward to more.. Kudos
 

Slavious

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Wow! I love this game so far. Thank you for making a game with some variety in the girls shapes and sizes! Love it! Cant wait for more.
 
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ChesseKun

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very nice. however, I found a few minor issues.

screenshot0001.jpg Typo it says Not instead of No.

screenshot0002.jpg in this and a couple of images after the names are swapped.
 
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Shinita

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Just curious. However the renders are good they're just a bit noisy so could do with a pass through on the denoiser.
I did a whole bunch of experiments and re-renders of 0.1 content with both the built-in DAZ denoiser and some external apps and the results were quite variable. A lot of the time the skin looked too shiny and plastic. Personally I like a bit of texture/grain to the skin but obviously not to the point where it's distracting.

A lot of the time I've bailed out on the rendering - I don't like a scene taking more than 8-9 minutes to render as I want to get on with the next one and DAZ has nothing built in to batch them up/let you continue working while its doing that - maybe DAZ 5 will help.
 

Krynh

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How do I get rid of the Kaylee insta notice?

Two: This is a very odd way of doing the phone. Usually you'd be showing a front view instead?
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Should be "Start to talk"
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Leather shirt? Shinyy
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Shinita

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How do I get rid of the Kaylee insta notice?

Leather shirt? Shinyy
The notices normally just disappear on their own. I've noticed with skipping and rollback sometimes that doesn't fire.

It's not leather but yeah sometimes lighting in DAZ has a weird effect on things.

Will fix the "start" typo but the those/these could go either way as he isn't wearing them...
 
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Krynh

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The notices normally just disappear on their own. I've noticed with skipping and rollback sometimes that doesn't fire.

It's not leather but yeah sometimes lighting in DAZ has a weird effect on things.

Will fix the "start" typo but the those/these could go either way as he isn't wearing them...
Stockings is plural always. As for these/those. As it's on his dick I'd go with these. I can't find any examples of books using "those feel nice" but "these feel nice" returns quite a few results (not all of them about things the main character has)

Cambridge dictionary:

This and these, that and those: uses
Physical closeness and distance
We use this and these most commonly to point to things and people that are close to the speaker or writer, or things that are happening now:
hmm, fixed the notification via quick load (was sure I didn't roll back.)
 

Krynh

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Why does she say "and then?" when asked a question?

perhaps
"... one you glanced at in the garage."
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Krynh

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You can definitely use "And then" as a question... Exhibit A:

That's not what I was saying. Georgia asked her what she did while shooting and her response is to go "and then?" yes it's a valid question but what I wanted to know is why she asked that? It's a non-sequitur


Perhaps do yawn in italalics rather than like a variable.
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on the train, rolled back to look at the photo and got this/

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4.10 star(s) 39 Votes