- Dec 6, 2020
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First thing needed to be said imo is THANK YOU SO MUCH for a truly SO FAR NORMAL, relatable MC! For fuck sakes it is so nice not getting another fucktard weak sissy cunt who cannot speak like a normal human and is a pushover who nobody truly wants to see in another avn and 110% myself does NOT want or like to play any game story or anything where such a dumb ass punk mc who is walked on by anyone and puts the pussy up on some ridiculous pedestal like some kind of prize rarely can be attained. I swear to ya that this is far from the true reality that for some crazy fuckin over the top reason some moron decided to implement such a character to play as and see the story/game through the eyes of and it is a very awful and fast way to start off a game that will be quickly ended and deleted because of how ridiculous the mc is or is not likeable or interesting at all and worse than all the others like it!
Here we have what I would say is clearly a normal everyday guy who is his own dude and has no bs fear of talking to other people like they are some kind of alien race who thinks a human male is dirt to walk on and treat like shit! Thank god we have a dev who it seems is not some wimpy nerd virgin who is creating his life story or how he lives and gets no women around him ever. We actually get to talk with women and have actual conversations and given good choices of things to say or good interactions that does not make you a creep or a weak sissy who bows to women and they are the greatest thing ever! He treats them as what they are, a fucking woman who breathes, eats, sleeps, shits, fucks just like a normal man does. But getting back to it and not more a rant it is awesome to actually be pulled into the story and be interested in what is happening and what is to come next. I'm not saying it is the best shit ever but it is far better than 75% of the rest of shit you download and delete after wasted time to see more trash and something trhat is like some other game yo checked out and it be similar with story or girls who look like the ones from so and so game or when you cvan say this is just trying to be like being a dik or that other college game or games easily forgotten. This is yes another game in a school setting but it is a far cry from the rest of the games like it cause it has a good male mc who is not a pussy nor is he a fucking Chad who is looking at a chic and in 2 mins of talking they are dry humping in the next scene!
The biggest plus is the game so far is entertaining and not some rushed ball of shit where it is done so bad and sloppy that like always it will made into hearing all the questions that come from every weak cunt mc game that is clearlyt meant to turn into some fuckkin cuck ntr bullshit conversation and wonder when the mc will be humiliated next. This has you far from wondering if and when a dump will be took on you and you ask I wonder which chic I can get at next and when will it give the actual chance to pick one or how many ever girls you want to pursue or not?
One thing that is a bit of a let down that when it finally comes time to get into the best parts all want to see with the sex scenes it is all such a good build up to the moment when they are getting it on we get no animation at all and even the still scenes don't really seem to be put together in a steady like moving situation when fucking! It was set up so good with Tegan and even more so with Mia really and both times with the girls the sex is so blah and not much emotions can be felt from just another pic of nothing you can even put it in your mind like it is flowing and you can see them actually fucking. Even worse is Mia's facial expressions when she is supposed to be getting off is like wtf is she even really enjoying what he is doing or just going through the motions to seem like it is good for her.
All in all I think everything is so good but maybe throughout the pledge week add someway of making clear it is night/sleeping time instaed of black and boom next day task time, maybe have mc play on phone before showing him crash. It would ve a good very key time to have mc texting with his girls and even have sexting with them to add some good extras spicing up the 2 of thems connection. IDK it just seems like key time wasted that could make we are making progress even if we are just fuckin around.
The biggest negative that is a big issue at very key moments that take away from the game is the great ways we get to the sex scenes with the girls but it is so underwhelming when they start to fuck and NO ANIMATIONS! That kills the whole mood and makes it very bring instead of exciting like it should. It is a very critical & big factor in how to have it clear in one or 2 details to be the oh shit thing the reader will pick up on with no big hey pay attention here is a big moment I need to see this part cause or big factor to story here and if not done realistic and key moment a character we are supposed to feel like what the character is feeling and what we relate to the who and whos is in the scenes and how they are reacting but in both sex scenes I feel like a couple of times the chics look far from being made to cum and like they are not even fucking in some of the pics. Overall the game is a great flicker of hope that there is some good games we can get in a very flooded group of retarded shit so thats all im saying. ANIMATIONS WOULD MAKE IT SO MUCH BETTER THAN IT ALREADY IS!
The only other issue is the who we are getting the actual chances of seeing more and I know it is early on and plenty more to come but and this is only me and maybe some also feel like this but There is moments that are set upo in first update and then agian in this update where I thought we would be getting the chance to get to know Ava and curiosityt to expand on the 2 or3 times we get the scenes with the 2 making eye contact with the obvious meant curiosity of who is he/she and I definitely intend on finding out asap! When we begin this update we get her as a guide which would have been a great time for one of them to ask about a future meet or even getting contact info to further their attractions that are very well stand out important times when they get in close contact and they make several eye contacting stares and smiles! I am very much digging her more so than rest. At the start I was feeling Mia but while I still think she is hot I have a few others that jumped her cause looks are huge but not all when some of the others have the looks and tons more added to the looks. Ava quickly has took the top spot but Mia is still on my list of getting closer to but in the sex scene it pro ves what I knew that she is acting more than being her self and that is no good and personally I can't stand a chic that puts up a front and needs to be put in line. Having fucked her and seeing how she was during it she fell down alot on my list cause of her acts. Bonnie is up with Ava along with Ellie but I really hope we can get alot more from Meriyah cause I liked her. But the true stars I want more of after Ava and Bonnie are Melody I think if it is Melody or Melony but Sam's girl's bff. She was cute as hell along with Raine and the super underdog that has been made to be forgotten by dev for later reason i am starting to think is ALICE! I already liked her from the 1st time I did a playthrough but she is fucking hot and her tits yesssir she will be getting my mc's cock asap! Anyways I am really liking this game and waiting for next update! Now below my list so far and no order but just a quick fun list of who I wanna fuck and get more from
# 1 AVA
#2 ALICE/MELODY/BOBBIE/RACHEL
????THEN
LUCIE
ELLIE
IMOGEN
MIA/TEEGAN
Here we have what I would say is clearly a normal everyday guy who is his own dude and has no bs fear of talking to other people like they are some kind of alien race who thinks a human male is dirt to walk on and treat like shit! Thank god we have a dev who it seems is not some wimpy nerd virgin who is creating his life story or how he lives and gets no women around him ever. We actually get to talk with women and have actual conversations and given good choices of things to say or good interactions that does not make you a creep or a weak sissy who bows to women and they are the greatest thing ever! He treats them as what they are, a fucking woman who breathes, eats, sleeps, shits, fucks just like a normal man does. But getting back to it and not more a rant it is awesome to actually be pulled into the story and be interested in what is happening and what is to come next. I'm not saying it is the best shit ever but it is far better than 75% of the rest of shit you download and delete after wasted time to see more trash and something trhat is like some other game yo checked out and it be similar with story or girls who look like the ones from so and so game or when you cvan say this is just trying to be like being a dik or that other college game or games easily forgotten. This is yes another game in a school setting but it is a far cry from the rest of the games like it cause it has a good male mc who is not a pussy nor is he a fucking Chad who is looking at a chic and in 2 mins of talking they are dry humping in the next scene!
The biggest plus is the game so far is entertaining and not some rushed ball of shit where it is done so bad and sloppy that like always it will made into hearing all the questions that come from every weak cunt mc game that is clearlyt meant to turn into some fuckkin cuck ntr bullshit conversation and wonder when the mc will be humiliated next. This has you far from wondering if and when a dump will be took on you and you ask I wonder which chic I can get at next and when will it give the actual chance to pick one or how many ever girls you want to pursue or not?
One thing that is a bit of a let down that when it finally comes time to get into the best parts all want to see with the sex scenes it is all such a good build up to the moment when they are getting it on we get no animation at all and even the still scenes don't really seem to be put together in a steady like moving situation when fucking! It was set up so good with Tegan and even more so with Mia really and both times with the girls the sex is so blah and not much emotions can be felt from just another pic of nothing you can even put it in your mind like it is flowing and you can see them actually fucking. Even worse is Mia's facial expressions when she is supposed to be getting off is like wtf is she even really enjoying what he is doing or just going through the motions to seem like it is good for her.
All in all I think everything is so good but maybe throughout the pledge week add someway of making clear it is night/sleeping time instaed of black and boom next day task time, maybe have mc play on phone before showing him crash. It would ve a good very key time to have mc texting with his girls and even have sexting with them to add some good extras spicing up the 2 of thems connection. IDK it just seems like key time wasted that could make we are making progress even if we are just fuckin around.
The biggest negative that is a big issue at very key moments that take away from the game is the great ways we get to the sex scenes with the girls but it is so underwhelming when they start to fuck and NO ANIMATIONS! That kills the whole mood and makes it very bring instead of exciting like it should. It is a very critical & big factor in how to have it clear in one or 2 details to be the oh shit thing the reader will pick up on with no big hey pay attention here is a big moment I need to see this part cause or big factor to story here and if not done realistic and key moment a character we are supposed to feel like what the character is feeling and what we relate to the who and whos is in the scenes and how they are reacting but in both sex scenes I feel like a couple of times the chics look far from being made to cum and like they are not even fucking in some of the pics. Overall the game is a great flicker of hope that there is some good games we can get in a very flooded group of retarded shit so thats all im saying. ANIMATIONS WOULD MAKE IT SO MUCH BETTER THAN IT ALREADY IS!
The only other issue is the who we are getting the actual chances of seeing more and I know it is early on and plenty more to come but and this is only me and maybe some also feel like this but There is moments that are set upo in first update and then agian in this update where I thought we would be getting the chance to get to know Ava and curiosityt to expand on the 2 or3 times we get the scenes with the 2 making eye contact with the obvious meant curiosity of who is he/she and I definitely intend on finding out asap! When we begin this update we get her as a guide which would have been a great time for one of them to ask about a future meet or even getting contact info to further their attractions that are very well stand out important times when they get in close contact and they make several eye contacting stares and smiles! I am very much digging her more so than rest. At the start I was feeling Mia but while I still think she is hot I have a few others that jumped her cause looks are huge but not all when some of the others have the looks and tons more added to the looks. Ava quickly has took the top spot but Mia is still on my list of getting closer to but in the sex scene it pro ves what I knew that she is acting more than being her self and that is no good and personally I can't stand a chic that puts up a front and needs to be put in line. Having fucked her and seeing how she was during it she fell down alot on my list cause of her acts. Bonnie is up with Ava along with Ellie but I really hope we can get alot more from Meriyah cause I liked her. But the true stars I want more of after Ava and Bonnie are Melody I think if it is Melody or Melony but Sam's girl's bff. She was cute as hell along with Raine and the super underdog that has been made to be forgotten by dev for later reason i am starting to think is ALICE! I already liked her from the 1st time I did a playthrough but she is fucking hot and her tits yesssir she will be getting my mc's cock asap! Anyways I am really liking this game and waiting for next update! Now below my list so far and no order but just a quick fun list of who I wanna fuck and get more from
# 1 AVA
#2 ALICE/MELODY/BOBBIE/RACHEL
????THEN
LUCIE
ELLIE
IMOGEN
MIA/TEEGAN
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