You aren't wrong, the womens camp that secretly murders all the men and nobody ever figures it out badly strains suspension of disbelief, but I wouldn't say it outright shatters it.I just started this game a couple days ago and I was really enjoying it...up until the part where a national guard unit composed entirely of women set up a women and children zone no exceptions.
So they were either all women or somehow enough women to overpower all the male guardsmen and men in general and separate families.
What a crock of shit. Suspension of disbelief only goes so far and this seems beyond stupidly implausible as well as a poor long-term survival strategy.
Gonna keep reading because I'm invested but I hope this isn't a sign of the writing to come.
That being said the very idea of forming a large community in an urban area in the short-term aftermath of a zombocalypse is itself more suspension damaging to me than the Amazon murder shtick, even with the much less dangerous zombie virus the author used. The fact that things start rapidly going poorly after the MC's group leaves town (i havent finished yet but I assume the camp completely collapses) pretty much immediately brings that subplot back in line with the overall tone the author has set for the story.
My one serious complaint with the story so far is how Emmie's (the sheriff's daughter if I got the name wrong) death was written. The author's pattern of breaking up all the fucking with the occasional horrific reminder that you're in a zombocalypse works very well but Emmie needed to be developed better to make the pathos extend beyond the MC to the author, especially with the way her impending demise was made so obvious to the player well before it was revealed to the MC. I think it would have worked better if she had started to befriend Carol and Naomi first as the MC mentions, or if the MC had the opportunity to save her and tried but just failed (i.e. missing the shot to stop an infected/bandit, or even accidentally shooting her but that might be a bit too dark).
Teasing the player with what looked to be an eventually fuckable bandit was hilarious given how abruptly that was wrapped up.
I look forward to the author's next project.
