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I don't remember all of them but there's a few cases where plurals are used that shouldn't be.Perhaps instead of mocking the developer you could give examples for them to improve on. I found only one grammatical error where a comma was not used in the choices. Comments like yours are not productive, and well just mean.
"...there are a few cases..."I don't remember all of them but there's a few cases where plurals are used that shouldn't be.
There's defintely one line when speaking with Andrea that's out of whack. Again i can't recall what was said there either.
...I'll just have to go back into either the script file to dig out the lines or play again.
Also like you said the grammar wasn't that bad. I've seen way worse.
Don't be hatin on my ebonics."...there are a few cases..."
But seriously, I'm not being hostile. On the contrary, I'd be grateful for any pointed out text errors - I'll fix them in the future update.
You rock! Those are fixed.Don't be hatin on my ebonics.
Also, the few i remember are with Andrea.
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Reminded me about 0-kills Fallout walkthroughs lol. Idk if I can manage to make all lewd scenes in the game avoidable, but we'll see!Really good first release, looking forward to more and will check out your previous release based on this... A couple of things
1) The language needs another pass through if you want it to be polished. There are just a few odd moments but otherwise really well done.
2) Thank you for letting us choose to not fuck people. I ended up not having any sex because I didn't feel right fucking the girlfriend when about to break her heart and I don't fuck random strangers (I know I am abnormal for a pirate porn game site ). Keep the choices coming, I always want to be able to make decisions because it makes the game feel more immersive. Great renders, everyone was sexy, though Misun was the standout. I look forward to meeting some new girls and telling Andrea that I'm not touching her fat ass.
Thanks for pointing it out! Fixed. I actually knew the right meaning, but I guess something switched in my brain at that moment.Great start to a game! Enjoyed the playthrough; models are unique, renders are quite nice!
One note (and I don't mean to nit-pick): Mi-sun tells the MC that they need to "dress up" after their quality time on the train. That phrase means that she feels they need to wear something more formal than casual attire. What she really meant to say was they need to "get dressed." I don't know if you are a native English speaker, ddeadbeat, but that is one idiom that never translates well to Spanish and several other languages. If English is not your first language, then congratulations on a 99% translation score in my book!
Keep up the great work!
In a way it is very similar, to challenge myself to do something out of the ordinary/not typical of the game.Reminded me about 0-kills Fallout walkthroughs lol. Idk if I can manage to make all lewd scenes in the game avoidable, but we'll see!
the other ones are a bit off but "hot coffee time" should be left alone. Isn't it a sexual innuendo alluding to sexy times?You rock! Those are fixed.
Is this supposed to go in game folder or renpy?Decided to do a Mod for this one too, enjoy!
Edit: Updated to v0.1
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Sorry I should have added install instructions. Forgot. Yes, extract to "game" folder, overwrite when prompted.Is this supposed to go in game folder or renpy?