ZTex

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Perhaps instead of mocking the developer you could give examples for them to improve on. I found only one grammatical error where a comma was not used in the choices. Comments like yours are not productive, and well just mean.
I don't remember all of them but there's a few cases where plurals are used that shouldn't be.
There's defintely one line when speaking with Andrea that's out of whack. Again i can't recall what was said there either.

...I'll just have to go back into either the script file to dig out the lines or play again.

Also like you said the grammar wasn't that bad. I've seen way worse.
 

ddeadbeat

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I don't remember all of them but there's a few cases where plurals are used that shouldn't be.
There's defintely one line when speaking with Andrea that's out of whack. Again i can't recall what was said there either.

...I'll just have to go back into either the script file to dig out the lines or play again.

Also like you said the grammar wasn't that bad. I've seen way worse.
"...there are a few cases..." :sneaky:
But seriously, I'm not being hostile. On the contrary, I'd be grateful for any pointed out text errors - I'll fix them in the future update.
 

ZTex

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"...there are a few cases..." :sneaky:
But seriously, I'm not being hostile. On the contrary, I'd be grateful for any pointed out text errors - I'll fix them in the future update.
Don't be hatin on my ebonics. :sneaky:
Also, the few i remember are with Andrea.
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MrFriendly

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Really good first release, looking forward to more and will check out your previous release based on this... A couple of things
1) The language needs another pass through if you want it to be polished. There are just a few odd moments but otherwise really well done.
2) Thank you for letting us choose to not fuck people. I ended up not having any sex because I didn't feel right fucking the girlfriend when about to break her heart and I don't fuck random strangers (I know I am abnormal for a pirate porn game site :ROFLMAO:). Keep the choices coming, I always want to be able to make decisions because it makes the game feel more immersive. Great renders, everyone was sexy, though Misun was the standout. I look forward to meeting some new girls and telling Andrea that I'm not touching her fat ass.
 

equus103

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Great start to a game! Enjoyed the playthrough; models are unique, renders are quite nice!

One note (and I don't mean to nit-pick): Mi-sun tells the MC that they need to "dress up" after their quality time on the train. That phrase means that she feels they need to wear something more formal than casual attire. What she really meant to say was they need to "get dressed." I don't know if you are a native English speaker, ddeadbeat, but that is one idiom that never translates well to Spanish and several other languages. If English is not your first language, then congratulations on a 99% translation score in my book!

Keep up the great work!
 
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Davewatch

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Dam Good start everything is excellent, I think it is just quirkey/different enough to be unique and interesting (even the English is quite good and a dam site better than a lot of much older/bigger games {they do not learn/improve}) so keep doing what you are doing so dam well [3 dams is a record for me] Looking forward to the update.
 
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ddeadbeat

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Really good first release, looking forward to more and will check out your previous release based on this... A couple of things
1) The language needs another pass through if you want it to be polished. There are just a few odd moments but otherwise really well done.
2) Thank you for letting us choose to not fuck people. I ended up not having any sex because I didn't feel right fucking the girlfriend when about to break her heart and I don't fuck random strangers (I know I am abnormal for a pirate porn game site :ROFLMAO:). Keep the choices coming, I always want to be able to make decisions because it makes the game feel more immersive. Great renders, everyone was sexy, though Misun was the standout. I look forward to meeting some new girls and telling Andrea that I'm not touching her fat ass.
Reminded me about 0-kills Fallout walkthroughs lol. Idk if I can manage to make all lewd scenes in the game avoidable, but we'll see!
Great start to a game! Enjoyed the playthrough; models are unique, renders are quite nice!

One note (and I don't mean to nit-pick): Mi-sun tells the MC that they need to "dress up" after their quality time on the train. That phrase means that she feels they need to wear something more formal than casual attire. What she really meant to say was they need to "get dressed." I don't know if you are a native English speaker, ddeadbeat, but that is one idiom that never translates well to Spanish and several other languages. If English is not your first language, then congratulations on a 99% translation score in my book!

Keep up the great work!
Thanks for pointing it out! Fixed. I actually knew the right meaning, but I guess something switched in my brain at that moment.
 

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Reminded me about 0-kills Fallout walkthroughs lol. Idk if I can manage to make all lewd scenes in the game avoidable, but we'll see!
In a way it is very similar, to challenge myself to do something out of the ordinary/not typical of the game.

It's also one way that I judge the story of a game. If the story is more important than the porn scenes or vice versa. Nothing wrong with the porn scenes being the chief concern just not necessarily what I look for in a game. AND I'm certainly not saying that games with more focus on the sex scenes are bad.
 
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Zoey Raven

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Decided to do a Mod for this one, enjoy!

Edit: Updated to Ep. 4 v0.3.6f (This is a Harem Mod, meaning I'm doing to show you all the scenes I possible can, if you don't like that use the WT.)

You can find this and all my other content here:

Or you can:
 
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Budokai

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Decided to do a Mod for this one too, enjoy!

Edit: Updated to v0.1

You can find this and all my other content here:

Or you can:
Is this supposed to go in game folder or renpy?
 

MuffinManWantsPregnancy

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Wasn't too interested in Chelsea (absolutely not interested in her mom either). Probably not going to fuck with her at all. Was excited to meet Mi-sun. I have a huge attraction to Asian girls (more games need them) however, she turned out to be a complete hoe (guess it's time to forget about a decent Asian girl as a romance option in these games). So that was a big NOPE from me. Though, what the MC said after saying "No" was pretty fucking stupid in my opinion. Andrea was super annoying to me, which is whatever since her tits were a 'huge' turn off anyway. Hopefully, there will be some girls introduced in the future that will be somewhat viable in my eyes (since I have zero interest in any of them). I do like the renders and "plot" that has been introduced. So I will definitely be sticking around for more.
 

Budokai

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After playing the game, I have to say... I can't wait for more updates! Definitely promisin to be one of my all time favs. Keep the good work dude, and don't listen to haters and prudes. I loved every single curve of your current models, looking forward to see the rest of them and future ones! Kudos!
 
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