One of the things that I noticed right off the bat is when I go to open the game it causes my Windows Smart Screen to pop up and prevents it from opening right up not sure if anyone else has that problem or not.
The very 1st thing I look at when playing a game is the story itself I really enjoyed the story and I am very interested in how the story is going to unfold many questions also comes to mine is he going to end up with them all or will he have to choose just one. Plus many more
The 2nd thing I look at is Choices that to me is just as important as the story itself because it is part of the story. The choices that you have that I picked feels like a real choice. I will give an example this will not be in this game at all I played where you had two "so called" choices (do you want to go north? or South? I pick going north and I would get you decided that you need to go south instead and you go south.) This game did not have any of those "so called" choices which is good. Like where James ask you which one you pick I choice each one and rolled it back nice he said something a little different with each one
(I again played games where no matter which one you pick you would get the same answer ).
Last of course is the art work/graphics I really did enjoy the art work as well.
So for me I hope you are still working on this game and I can not wait to play more of it. For a demo it was as long as some of the games I have played. Also unlike some of them I did not scan the story I read it . (When I scan it means it all about sex and I get bored and I stop reading it so I just keep clicking until I get to the end or a choice.)
I do have one suggestion and that is allowing the player to choice their name.
