VN Ren'Py Abandoned Offcuts [v0.3.1] [stencilbits]

4.80 star(s) 77 Votes

bobdillan

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Dynamics between Cole and Nina in the latter half of her route was kinda dissapointing for me. Probably cuz fem-dom (even light) is absolutely not my fetish. I think i'll skip Melissa's route for that reason.

Otherwise it's a pretty solid game with nice visuals.
...... uhhhh it was like one scene that was femdomy then the mc is dominant for like the rest of it (don't know about the new update though)
 

Earthling

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...... uhhhh it was like one scene that was femdomy then the mc is dominant for like the rest of it (don't know about the new update though)
Iirc he was dominant in one scene only.

I guess we interpreted term "Dominant" differently, i meant more like emotional dominance.
 

bobdillan

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Iirc he was dominant in one scene only.

I guess we interpreted term "Dominant" differently, i meant more like emotional dominance.
hmmm I would personally say from what I remember that it is mixed, that being said that could be something that people interpret differently. I was more speaking about the sex scene where I believe he took charge.
 

HorizonD

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I think you can not do it yet. Hopefully, you can avoid Nina in the Future, I end always up with her -.-

When you consider sex with the host family's daughter (you are adopted) as incest, then yes.
 

bobdillan

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Is there incest?
eh no but yes, the current character that has a compelte path (which you are forced down until more are added) was originally supposed to be the MCs sister, but was later changed, so you can imagine or pretend, but they still have that kind of relationship, but instead the MC was just taken in by the family after a certain event.
 

petedragon

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Brilliant update, loved the special touches....flashing police lights?? Bullet hits...to me a very good visual novel with enough sex in it to make it interesting. Keep up the good work loved it.
 
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lockhear

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Jesus! That was magnificent, @stencilbits! I wouldn't believe how such a great story and game can be created with just a few renders. Thanks a lot for all the fun and I am waiting impatiently for your next adventures! :HeyGuys:
 

Mucski

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Oh yes this game made into my favorite list. I'll wait till patch 0.2 though so I can properly forget it and replay it
 

DocPorny

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I love the writing style and the humor in this game. Came for the promise of debauchery, stayed for the dialog. Some pretty heavy moments as well if you're going for it but most of the time I can't stop laughing.

One of my favorite (very short) moments (I love dry humor like that) that pretty much sums up this great game for me:

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if some body can crunch those text My reading is very poor not for me. after 3 hours i gave up bye!
 

Ikariusrb

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Some commentary- seems like so far there's only one "developed" relationship path, with Nina. There are a couple of other endings, but there's not much relationship content to them at this point.

The writing is actually pretty good, quite funny at times, the characters are actually pretty likeable... aside from the main character being unendingly clueless about women liking him, which feels forced. The story is also... entertaining.

The renders are pretty good, I like the art style, and it's not the same recycled daz3d characters which crop up in multiple other games.

However... it's a *story* more than a game. There's enormous amounts of text in between decision points, and it looks like at least some of the decision points don't affect anything until a while after the player makes a choice. Others seem to be binary "am I going to sex up someone right now" choices, and it's not clear if most of those choices even impact the story.

It's hard to see playing through this repeatedly, unless the story branches *radically* depending on early choices, and I'd be kind of suprised if the developer/writer is down for that much work- as most of the story appears to actually be pretty tied together- i.e. a path that doesn't involve getting into a gunfight brouhaha, etc.

Some things which might help - more decision points, feedback for the player about what happens when you make decisions which matter, and at least a list of possible endings (i.e. whom can the player have a relationship with).
 
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Amazing update! I wasn't sure if the dev could deliver after such a good 0.1, but I was wrong. I must say, the switcher ending suprised me, but I was happy overall with both endings.
 
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