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Just a nice little render to celebrate another release!
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jaydem
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That scene would be awesome as hell, if you were to make it into an animated cheer gif, with a lot of bouncing and jiggling.....Lol!!
Nice work, keep it up. I'm really looking forward to some romantic and sexy time with Miranda. Hell!! any one of them to be all honest about it.
I'm not big on threesomes, but maybe if I get to have one on one, with each of them first Lol!....I think the gym twins..as I like to call them..might be a good combo though, for a playful or hot sexual threesome.
Anyway, @Oppai Auteur thanks for the pic brother, keep on keeping on...……………...Peace!!
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Check my post on page 22, post number #431
Still need the links in the first post updated
So the version that I downloaded about 30 minutes ago or so is old? I just finished playing through it.
EDIT: Just saw that its only bugfixes and such
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If it says 0.0003 at the main menu then yes, its old
The latest version ends in James' apartment after a phone call with Miranda
Yeah my version seemed to end after the scene with Katie in the locker room after the hj or bj, folder says .4 though
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With such a cheerleader, the team of dystrophics will tear the big league to shreds.
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Done, added v0.00041 to OP. Thanks.Hey @UncleVT , could you update the links on the first page with the ones on page 22 post #431
Thanks
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My posts on this thread attest to my appreciation of the work you're doing. This installment is another example of a clear idea being presented without hurry and with pretty tight internal logic.
What was most surprising in this recent release were the gobs of typos and grammar errors. I didn't see those in previous releases. Perhaps you were eager to get this release out and were a little quick in your proofreading. I haven't checked the 4.1 version, so I don't know if you caught them there.
I like the simmering tension between Miranda and Sarah over both having latent attraction to James. You've set up an exciting dynamic, especially since neither of them are blood-related to James.
In the meantime, you're working your tease factor to a possibly cruel level. It's tough to decide who is taking more punishment, James or the player. That's a good thing (even if it's bad).
Keep up the great work and get back and nip those typos!
What was most surprising in this recent release were the gobs of typos and grammar errors. I didn't see those in previous releases. Perhaps you were eager to get this release out and were a little quick in your proofreading. I haven't checked the 4.1 version, so I don't know if you caught them there.
I like the simmering tension between Miranda and Sarah over both having latent attraction to James. You've set up an exciting dynamic, especially since neither of them are blood-related to James.
In the meantime, you're working your tease factor to a possibly cruel level. It's tough to decide who is taking more punishment, James or the player. That's a good thing (even if it's bad).
Keep up the great work and get back and nip those typos!
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Early impressions:
1) Exploration of WM/BF sex is an underused genre in these games. Glad to see you have chosen this direction. The ebony woman is usually relegated to the side conquest so seeing the mom and daughter take front and center goo call,
2) While facially the models are attractive, some of the bodies are a bit too exaggerated in the bum and breasts. This leads to the clothing models clipping into the body model. Miranda has this problem in several scenes.
3) Katie is a damn hoot, and a character that would be great to star in her own game either as protagonist or the main object of affection for an MC. "The Katie Chronicles" or the "Taming of Katie" anyone?.... Can I get a witness?
4) The story is heading along at a reasonable pace with main lust/ love interests.
5) Keep up the good work and please consider the minor critiques as constructive.
6) The MC's cock is a reasonable size for porn and for larger men in real life. Best to keep it real. As much as I loved Dreams of Desire and a few others, the MC's comical cock did detract from the overall quality. At least for me.
7) SO WHEN IS .05 COMING OUT DAMMIT!!!
1) Exploration of WM/BF sex is an underused genre in these games. Glad to see you have chosen this direction. The ebony woman is usually relegated to the side conquest so seeing the mom and daughter take front and center goo call,
2) While facially the models are attractive, some of the bodies are a bit too exaggerated in the bum and breasts. This leads to the clothing models clipping into the body model. Miranda has this problem in several scenes.
3) Katie is a damn hoot, and a character that would be great to star in her own game either as protagonist or the main object of affection for an MC. "The Katie Chronicles" or the "Taming of Katie" anyone?.... Can I get a witness?
4) The story is heading along at a reasonable pace with main lust/ love interests.
5) Keep up the good work and please consider the minor critiques as constructive.
6) The MC's cock is a reasonable size for porn and for larger men in real life. Best to keep it real. As much as I loved Dreams of Desire and a few others, the MC's comical cock did detract from the overall quality. At least for me.
7) SO WHEN IS .05 COMING OUT DAMMIT!!!
Great work so far , I'm looking forward to playing this more. One note only : big women require huge cocks ! Maybe work on the MC's dick to match the girl's boobs (something like "My sister Mia " or "Dreams of Desire " for example).
Keep up the good work !!!!!
Keep up the good work !!!!!
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Michael is the adam for Daz end Victoria the Eve.
Usualy (as the developer also said) they spend more time on the females then than the males.
Also the majority of the poses for couples are based on Victoria and Michael. This means that the poses are good aout of the box. The more you change a figure the more you need to adjust to the pose. So when you create a VN it usualy means that you want to spit out as many render per hour as possible. So you want o have the needed adjustments as low as possible and find the ballance between quality renders vs time. Using default characters can realy speed things up in some way. Also when you look at the daz store the amount of males and stuff for males pales in comparison to the female stuff. This is also one of the reason why you see a lot of the same clothes on characters.
I'm working on a short novel myself and decided to go full Genesis 8 in the hope to have assets that arent as common. However there are assets that here is only 1 off. If you want to have a scene in a spa you dont have much choice. 1 of those 3 stands out in quality therefore you see it a lot. As original as i want to be (even though my story isnt that original) i cant help have to use the same asset.
I think in the "show your DAZ skill" thread someone used a commonly used kitchen and replaced every texture. This gave the kitchen a beautifull and unique look but the time involed makes not verry attractive for a VN.
It's all about finding ballance.
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You could post that question in every game and the answer will and should be: no
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I guess the content amount is subjective but if your looking for a huge amount of porn in such an early version, your out of luck
There is some in the newest version, and will be more from now on
Not really what I'm going for here, some of the girls are aggressive but the main character can be as well, its more of a back and forth rather than sub/dom