Welp, I don't play many of these "games" anymore (and really, this is more a classic "novel" than a game) and I spend even less time posting here...
But...
When I see something from good ol' Oppai and his bevy of bountiful buxom beauties, I am compelled to comment here. Mostly because, there is nowhere else to leave a comment to him. Nyahh.
So, since it's been a while (I browsed the thread and Oppai did the count for people in an earlier post - go find it, OCD'ers), I decided to start from the beginning. That's when I started scratching my head for real. I mean, hey man, I don't remember this stuff...Madison is in the game. What? She was just a render queen, never to be seen.
Once my confusion allowed other parts of my brain to figure out Oppai had added a prologue, I got back to reading the story. And now for something completely the same, comments from my personal views. Castigate someone else if you don't agree, since these are personal opinions. They are not commands to the various posters/readers/trollers that abound. 'Nuff said.
1. Sorry, but the first thing I noticed were countless grammar and spelling mistakes. What can I say. Writer by trade and adult game proofreader by choice (limited to two devs, currently). I'm unable to "unsee" them, so they stand out like a vast bowl of pus (yes, another MPFC reference).
2. The prologue was great. Really sets up the backstory for Madison and Miranda (and so sad Oppai doesn't want to offer us M&M's). The Miranda modeling scene was also helpful in establishing her shaky self-confidence. Just waiting for some random handsome stud to boost her self-esteem. Oh, if only there were some random handsome stud that could surprisingly show up in her life. Oh well, not much hope of that...
3. The graphics are SO much improved. Wow. I remember my single most frequent complaint (outside of Katie - yeah, don't think I've forgotten that, buddy) was how dark the whole thing was. Now, we're not talking dark as in "I am Batman", we're talking dark as in "I can't see what's going on". That is wonderfully and appreciatively fixed. Good job!
4. I had forgotten how Katie-centric the story had been up to this point. Ugh. All these godly full-bodied mature women around and we get episode after episode of the painted pierced pixie. Sigh. She's Oppai's fave, so we're stuck with her. Ah well, maybe we'll get a Pepper and pepper (salt already included) night out after work some time...less than 10 months, for sure, right?
5. I still like the story. Sure, James is a little wimpy, letting the women have the upper hand for the first five episodes, but I expect him to start exercising (no pun intended - for a change) his right to choose coming up. I select two from column B (work) and one from column A (the incomparable M).
And that's enough. I already feel the eyes from the F place beginning to notice my presence. Perish and forfend that I be spotted spending time here and a clamoring begin for my return (from my 3 or 4 "fans").
Good to see you made it all the way through, Oppai. Clean up that damn dialogue. If you ever do decide to make it a "real" thing instead of a creative exercise, look me up and I'll give you a full proofread.
Take care and Make Mine Miranda! (only old people will get the reference)