VN Ren'Py Abandoned Old Friends and Public Transport [v0.0025] [Oppai Auteur]

[Dilettante]

It’s kind of hard to miss some of those lol But if you spot any clipping issues that aren’t as obvious that will help

So i'll list them then. All are very small though. For example, first scene at gym when MC just encounters girls, Sarah's gym outfit. Her left hand's finger going through. Also, her right breast just a little bit clipping.
Madison's bra clipping a bit on left side.
All of the Pepper's are pretty obvious as far as i see, so i guess there is no point mentioning them. Ariana's breasts also have that big clipping problem in few first office scenes.
In the scene when Miranda comes to gym, locker room with girls. Her left breast clipping through coat.
After the bar scene, at home MC's coat clipping at left side just a little bit.
After that the scene with Sarah and Miranda when she's going to work. Sarah's shirt clipping a few times, both left and right arm.
And that's i think all for a clipping issues.

 

[Dilettante]

What I'm looking for you to point out is things like transitions being done poorly, not enough renders in a scene making it look awkward, bad character posing, things like that. And we cant forget the story elements, so same deal there, point out bad pacing, bad dialogue etc.

I don't want it to just be pointing out problems, so if you have suggestions fire them in there as well. If you maybe have a scene idea that would fit in the early days, conversations you would like to see that might explain things better, thing like that.

So, after replaying, i gotta say again that i like storyline and the way you're telling it. There is not much you can do better and polish imo apart from what you already know about. Mainly i just want to see more of everything in further updates. It's never enough renders. My only suggestion is i guess i'd want to learn more about James's family. Some more backstory so to say. But i haven't noticed much awkward moments, bad posing, or dialogue\pacing. Certainly nothing glaring.

 

[Oppai Auteur]

So, after replaying, i gotta say again that i like storyline and the way you're telling it. There is not much you can do better and polish imo apart from what you already know about. Mainly i just want to see more of everything in further updates. It's never enough renders. My only suggestion is i guess i'd want to learn more about James's family. Some more backstory so to say. But i haven't noticed much awkward moments, bad posing, or dialogue\pacing. Certainly nothing glaring.

I suppose I could give the game a short little intro, maybe James giving some narration plus a short scene with Madison and James that shows him getting ready to move out of the house and heading to the start of the game. Don't want to go to over board, the game is more about what is happening in the present lol

Its good to know that things are being presented in a decent manner, although I'll wait and see if anyone else comes across any problems. Hopefully it wont be anything to major if they do haha

 

[Dilettante]

Its good to know that things are being presented in a decent manner, although I'll wait and see if anyone else comes across any problems. Hopefully it wont be anything to major if they do haha

Doubt that, even those clipping issues and renders quality is not that major. I'd like to think if there is a good story and beautiful sexy girls other problems typically "slip" from the minds of majority. Some of them probably will mention it, but it won't be breaking. If they're not horrendous of course. The main "problem" or should i say dividing point of this game is probably always gonna be - do you or do you not like the girls with a bit of meat on their bones? It's not typical, and it can scare some people that used to only consume games with skinny girls. And do you or do you not like the "real" milfs that really look older and, again, have some meat. And we can't forget race factor. Some people like black women, some people will see it as "major issue".

 

[Ignatz]

Much as I enjoy the story so far and would love to do the play and report thing, I have been and am entangled in preparations for Halloween and my annual Halloween party.

Sadly, that means my review would will likely be later than you care to wait (first week of November).

Generally, though, from what I can recall, I thought it was an interesting start with a good cast of characters. I seem to vaguely remember thinking there were some issues in the tone of MC's thoughts, but, again, I'd have to do a replay (or scroll this thread) to pin it down.

 

[blahblah25]

Much as I enjoy the story so far and would love to do the play and report thing, I have been and am entangled in preparations for Halloween and my annual Halloween party.

Sadly, that means my review would will likely be later than you care to wait (first week of November).

Generally, though, from what I can recall, I thought it was an interesting start with a good cast of characters. I seem to vaguely remember thinking there were some issues in the tone of MC's thoughts, but, again, I'd have to do a replay (or scroll this thread) to pin it down.

Does you’re review help the game in anyway if so I would like to know how so not being a dick just generally curious

 

[Ignatz]

I couldn't answer that, you would have to ask Oppai.

 

[Dilettante]

Does you’re review help the game in anyway if so I would like to know how so not being a dick just generally curious

It would, since dev was asking for any of us to do this few posts earlier.

 

[blahblah25]

It would, since dev was asking for any of us to do this few posts earlier.

Oh was he apologizes must have scrolled by that post but tyvm for your response

 

[Oppai Auteur]

Much as I enjoy the story so far and would love to do the play and report thing, I have been and am entangled in preparations for Halloween and my annual Halloween party.

Sadly, that means my review would will likely be later than you care to wait (first week of November).

Generally, though, from what I can recall, I thought it was an interesting start with a good cast of characters. I seem to vaguely remember thinking there were some issues in the tone of MC's thoughts, but, again, I'd have to do a replay (or scroll this thread) to pin it down.

I don't have any problem waiting, like I said in the post when I was asking for people to do this in the first place, this is for after the current update I'm working on. I'm hoping to get a few of these done by different people to help with the rework by the time I get to it

 

[K18]

I applaud you for using a white male with black females... Mostly (interracial games) one sees white girl with black guys but it's overdone. Apart from the women who have their ass...est and bobs multiplied it looks interesting.

Hi, correct me if i’m wrong. Do you mean interracial scenes just in general in games, regardless If the protagonist is involved or not, right?
Cause looking at games tagged with interracial were the protagonist is involved, the Male MC is mostly (if not always) white and the women are mostly either asian or black looking (maybe hispanic). I haven’t found a game with a Male MC that’s black-looking (or just brown skinned). Or found one were a black guy isn’t linked to cuckolding someone, swinging, gangbangs/DP, being a jerk or some other interracial stereotype/trope. The exception for a black side character i can think of is Liam from "Action Lessons". (Not complaining by the way, just pointing something out.)
In those western erotic comics/image boards, you can find black male protagonists, but those usually play up the stereotypes previously mentioned with a few exceptions.

@Oppai Auteur like the art thread by the way.

 

[Deleted member 167032]

IM referring to black guys and white girls seems to be a norm. You dont find many white guys with black girls... Not speaking of any other races but those two. This applies in the real too. Just something i've noticed

Hi, correct me if i’m wrong. Do you mean interracial scenes just in general in games, regardless If the protagonist is involved or not, right?
Cause looking at games tagged with interracial were the protagonist is involved, the Male MC is mostly (if not always) white and the women are mostly either asian or black looking (maybe hispanic). I haven’t found a game with a Male MC that’s black-looking (or just brown skinned). Or found one were a black guy isn’t linked to cuckolding someone, swinging, gangbangs/DP, being a jerk or some other interracial stereotype/trope. The exception for a black side character i can think of is Liam from "Action Lessons". (Not complaining by the way, just pointing something out.)
In those western erotic comics/image boards, you can find black male protagonists, but those usually play up the stereotypes previously mentioned with a few exceptions.

@Oppai Auteur like the art thread by the way.

 

[Dilettante]

IM referring to black guys and white girls seems to be a norm. You dont find many white guys with black girls... Not speaking of any other races but those two. This applies in the real too. Just something i've noticed

Probably because in adult games you rarely see white (or of any other color) guys being "bull". And the role of all these numerous black guys with absolutely unbearable "ghetto gangsta" personalities is exactly that, being a "bull", being a "strong orc" that conquers all princesses with massive raw strength and nothing else (yes, orcs is pretty similar to these guys if you look into it). That strongly links with cuckold and rape fetishes. Both of which playing on "unwilling" felling of somebody involved. In games with black romantic interests you just don't see that, white or asian males won't use these methods. It's pretty much always weak-willed white girl as part of a established porn fetish.
That means (if played by fetish rules) black MC will be nothing else but this aggressive type too. Though again, you don't see that. Because that kills some part of fetish. If MC already "bad", how could you put even more "baddies" in the games that tries to conquer his ladies?

 

[Deleted member 167032]

If I may ask do you like domination games? I see you seem to like Female prog games where the women gets what she wants and uses her body and do not care with whom?

Just curious.

Probably because in adult games you rarely see white (or of any other color) guys being "bull". And the role of all these numerous black guys with absolutely unbearable "ghetto gangsta" personalities is exactly that, being a "bull", being a "strong orc" that conquers all princesses with massive raw strength and nothing else (yes, orcs is pretty similar to these guys if you look into it). That strongly links with cuckold and rape fetishes. Both of which playing on "unwilling" felling of somebody involved. In games with black romantic interests you just don't see that, white or asian males won't use these methods. It's pretty much always weak-willed white girl as part of a established porn fetish.
That means (if played by fetish rules) black MC will be nothing else but this aggressive type too. Though again, you don't see that. Because that kills some part of fetish. If MC already "bad", how could you put even more "baddies" in the games that tries to conquer his ladies?

 

[Dilettante]

If I may ask do you like domination games? I see you seem to like Female prog games where the women gets what she wants and uses her body and do not care with whom?

Just curious.

If by "domination" you mean all these "corruption" games with "strong orcs", then no, you're completely wrong. I mostly hate them. I like completely opposite, but not too much into femdom either. I like my female MC to be strong, and strong-willed. "She gets what she wants and uses her body" (mostly just tease with males and more active with girls), but absolutely not in "bimbo" way. And without "do not care with whom". She needs to be very intelligent and the one who manipulates and corrupts others. Males or females, she's on active role. It's pretty much "female in male's pants". And i love games with choices, lots of choices. Jessica from JOHN is pretty much that kind of woman.

 

[Deleted member 167032]

OK i see... I find it impossible to play Adult VN's with a female prog, definitely not because im alpha male and against womens rights, actually it's the opposite. I totally understand what you mean Female in male's pants but I still cannot commit myself. Just not my thing i suppose.
I know I am missing out on many great games such as Anna Affection and John but I am who I am.

THx for the chat...

If by "domination" you mean all these "corruption" games with "strong orcs", then no, you're completely wrong. I mostly hate them. I like completely opposite, but not too much into femdom either. I like my female MC to be strong, and strong-willed. "She gets what she wants and uses her body" (mostly just tease with males and more active with girls), but absolutely not in "bimbo" way. And without "do not care with whom". She needs to be very intelligent and the one who manipulates and corrupts others. Males or females, she's on active role. It's pretty much "female in male's pants". And i love games with choices, lots of choices. Jessica from JOHN is pretty much that kind of woman.

 

[Dilettante]

OK i see... I find it impossible to play Adult VN's with a female prog, definitely not because im alpha male and against womens rights, actually it's the opposite. I totally understand what you mean Female in male's pants but I still cannot commit myself. Just not my thing i suppose.
I know I am missing out on many great games such as Anna Affection and John but I am who I am.

THx for the chat...

I see you, and i used to be this way too. Until i tried some with "alpha bitches" XD and found them fun. Very much different for sure, but exciting in different ways too. All of this just because of changing perspective, though staying similar. I still very selective about female MC games, and mostly play as male in classic romance. I am curious though, and i do like to analyze different genres and look at something new every now and then.

 

[pgXIII]

OK i see... I find it impossible to play Adult VN's with a female prog, definitely not because im alpha male and against womens rights, actually it's the opposite. I totally understand what you mean Female in male's pants but I still cannot commit myself. Just not my thing i suppose.
I know I am missing out on many great games such as Anna Affection and John but I am who I am.

THx for the chat...

What game is John I dont think I've heard of it but I would like to give it a try if anyone can provide a link.

 

[peter358]

When the next update will be released ??

 

[tobagotobago]

What game is John I dont think I've heard of it but I would like to give it a try if anyone can provide a link.

this is JOHN:

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